MANAN SS-U ARE MY LIFE (PART-2 (B)on15)(Irrevobally in love) can't pms

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rajirock123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Hi dear nice plot but i think nandu is alive and pls continue soon

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cutypie04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Awesome concept

Continue soonnn

Tnx fr d pm

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diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Angel_manan
Wow
new story.
superb prologue.
continue soon.
keep smiling
stay blessed
lots of love
Purna

Thanks purna😛

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diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: manan_eku
Hmm
Toh it's really very interesting di
Sachi please continue soon

Love you
Eku

Thanks ekta😛

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diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: mananneetu
it was really very emotional!!
right now i m clueless..no idea who is correct who is wrong bt i m damn sure nandini is alive..
i m jst waiting fr further parts..
plz update soon
nd i hve a request/..can u plz pm me even if i dont buddy u..actually there is smth problem in my account cant buddy people!!
so plz pm me !!

Thanks dear And I'll pm u😛

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diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Snehasn
baby I'm going to accept it as post diwali gift... plss zyaada rona dhona nahi... aur don't separate Manan for so long...can i ask you a question??... is this a dark ss??

U will get to knew😉

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diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: shanuqureshi
Hey diya...
Very interesting prologue... and very emotional bhi ... manik ' s lines is heart touching...
Ur right lots of questions but i'll wait...
Dear kya yeh dark story hai???? I really like dark stories...
Thanks for pm...
keep it up...
stay blessed and happy...
lots of love..

Thanks inaya😛

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diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: gtilwani45
Concept is nice actually interesting. .

but nandu khaa h...

waiting for update eagerly. .

update soon. .

Thanks Geet😛

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diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: SIAZAHEED.1
very much saddy wala prologue hai!!1
but looking 4ward to it!1
nd yaar tu ""Soulmates"" nd ""friends to Soulmates"" ko hang karke
neww ss..
kitna wait karna parega...

Updated dear ...have a look😛

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diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Hey guys thank you SooO much for your lovely comments ...well many of u are asking me ...it's a dark SS ...well ...a little bit ...but not completely ...aur jaise jaise story unfold hogi ...u guys are going to love it ...please have faith on me ...here is ur update ...ENJOY😛

Part-1

Manik was just walking on the road aimlessly ...he was feeling like all lost ...he has a fear ...fear of loosing her ...fear of couldn't find her ...tears were dry now ...he took out his wallet and saw her pic...in which she was smiling ...he just looking at pictures with so much of pain ...

Manik painfully said : kaha ho tum nandani ...kaha ...please ...please ...vapas aa jao ...please ...I couldn't leave without u ...I knew u r alive ...u knew ...mom ...mom says u ...u r not going back ...but I knew ...I knew u will come ...u will come naa

...u will come for ur manik ...haina ...please vapas aa jao nandani ...ur manik ...needs u...please prove nandani ...please prove everyone wrong ...vapas aa jao ...aa jao vapas ...

Cabir patted his shoulder ...manik looked at him with tearfully eyes ...this is the first time when he shows his emotions to someone ...cabir was so shocked to look at him like this ...a guy who always smiles ...who always makes everyone smile ...today that guy is having so much pain ...how can god be so cruel ...how ...cabir instantly hugged him tightly and said

Cabir : Manik ...

Manik crying:Cabir she ...she is not here ...cabir ...ev..ery..on..e ...says ...she ...she is... d..e..a..d ...voh nahi jaa sakti cabir ...voh apne manik ...apne manik ko chod kar nahi jaa sakti ...voh zinda ha Cabir ...voh zinda...

Cabir : Manik ...relax ...sab thik ho jayega

Manik cryingly said: voh zinda ha Cabir ...voh zinda ha ...main jaanta hu ...tu yakin kar mera ...yakin ...

Cabir was just looking at him helplessly ...he just couldn't understand how to console him ...

Cabir : Manik ...tum nandani se bahot pyar karte ho naa ...

He nodded his head as yes

Cabir : toh kya nandani tumhe iss haal main dekh paati ...manik nandani ke liye please chal ...chal yaha se ... chal

Cabir makes manik to sit in the car ...and drives to the malhotra mansion ...

MALHOTRA MENSION -

Nyonika was just pacing here and there all worried ...her tears couldn't stop for a minute ...manik came with cabir ...Nyonika immediately hugged him ...and said

Nyonika worriedly said : Manik ...tu thik ha naa beta ...kaha chala gaya tha ...tu ...tu ...jaanta ha naa...main tere bina nahi reh sakti ...phir kyu gaya...kyu...

But manik not even hugged her back and not even said anything ...he was just look like a dead body ...who was alive but not living ...manik comes to his room and looked the door ...

Nyonika shockingly said : Cabir kya hua manik ko ...voh esa kyu ...kya hua ha...

Cabir couldn't stop himself ...he burst into tears and hugged nyonika tightly

Cabir : I ...I lost my ...my friend ...aunty ...I didn't lost my sister ...I lost my friend tooo...my ...my friend ...he ...he is...

Nyonika shoutedly said: Cabir no ...yeh tum kya bol rahe ho ...tum jaante bhi ho ...how can u say that ...manik ...manik ko kuch nahi hoga ...kuch nahi suna tumne ...kuch nahi ...

Mukti : Aunty thik keh rahi ha Cabir ...we have to be strong ...strong for manik ...

Druv : haa cabir ...hame manik ke liye strong hona hoga...we can't loose him ...

Cabir cryingly said : but we already

A voice came from behind and said : we didn't cabir ...there is a hope ...

All looked towards the voice and shocked to see the person...

That's it ...how's it ...I knew it's short plus one more thing ...am changing the name ...now its "U ARE MY LIFE" ...and about next update ...I already told you ...guys ...Whenever I get time I will surely update...

Keep loving

Keep smiling

And

Keep shining For Ur loved ones

Love

Diya😛

Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago