MANAN SS-U ARE MY LIFE (PART-2 (B)on15)(Irrevobally in love) can't pms

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Hey guys ...so u guys like my SS am glad you guys Like it...well I love the idea of making S.S and now again am here with my another SS ...I can't help it guys ...this story is really very nice ...I hope you guys like it too ...


PROLOGUE -

A guy was sitting in his room ...he was holding a photo frame...and just looking at it without blinking...a lady enter in his room ...and saw his condition ...a lone tear came from her eyes ...but she quickly wiped them ...and placed her hand on his shoulder and said ...

Lady: Manik beta

Manik looked at her but his eyes were blank no one understand what is in his mind ...the lady looked at his eyes ...she was urge to cry ...but she didn't bcz she has to be strong ...strong for his son ...

Nyonika : Manik beta please kuch kha lo ...tumne kal se kuch nahi khaya ha ...

He immediately get up and said

Manik : khana...Mom nandani ne bhi toh kuch nahi khaya hoga na ...usse bhi bhuk lag rahi hogi ...aap khana yaha rakh dijiye
...jab nandani aayegi naa main uske saath kha lunga...

Nyonika was crying looking at his son condition

Nyonika : beta please meri baat samjho...voh ...voh...nahi aayegi ...she can't come...please kuch kha lo ...

Manik : No mom voh aayegi voh jaanti ha main uske bina kuch nahi khata...voh aayegi ...haa...

Nyonika cupped his face ...tears were flowing from her eyes

Nyonika : voh nahi aayegi manik tum kyu nahi samajh rahe ...voh mar chuki ha ...please accept it beta...please...she ...can't come ...she ...she can't

Manik removed her hands and takes some steps back

Manik shoutedly said: how can you say that ...haa ...how ...she can't die mom ...she can't ...why can't you understand ...koi meri baat ka vishvas kyu nahi kar raha ha ...look at me mom ...aapko proof chahiye naa ...toh dekhiye am alive ...meri saanse chal rahi ha mom ...aur isse bada sabut kya hoga ki voh zinda ha ...jis din uski saanse rukegi uss din meri saanse bhi ruk jaayegi ...mom ...my heart is still beating ...and it only beats for my nandu. Aur aap kehti ha ki voh ...meri nandani zinda ha ...suna aapne ... she is alive ...she can't die ...she can't...voh toh bas mil nahi rahi ha ...mujhe usse dhundhna ha mom ...please mujhe jaane dijiye ...

Nyonika : Manik ...Manik...

But Manik left from there ...Nyonika sat on her knees and crying bitterly ...

Nyonika : Please ruk jao beta...ek beti ko toh kho chuki hu ...ab bete ko khone ki himmat nahi he mujhme ...nahi ha himmat ...


So how's it ...
I knew I knew ...u guys
Have a lot of questions
in ur mind ...
Like ...
Where is nandani?
Why nyonika is saying ...she is dead?
Is she really died?
Why manik behaving like this?
I will give all the
Answers of ur questions
But for that u have to hit the like button
And comment on it ...
Till then
Take care
Keep loving
Keep smiling
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya😛

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diyaNarwal thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1=Page7
Part 2 (A)=Page11
Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
uma_taarey thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow its intresting ...
nice concept...
plz update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome

New ss...congratulations diya...

So sad...bt nandu cant die...

Mysterious...i loved it...

Do update soon


LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice cncept...plz cont soon
pm me also
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow
new story.
superb prologue.
continue soon.
keep smiling
stay blessed
lots of love
Purna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice plot.
Interesting concept.
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start
Continue soon dear
Loved it
Thanks for pm
Take care
:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hmm
Toh it's really very interesting di
Sachi please continue soon

Love you
Eku
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for pm.dear

It sounds very very interesting.

Please continue.




Thanks





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