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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very intriguing!! i wish i could read more nowww!! hehe..update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...


loved it so much...

loving this side of manan...

sad that manik's mom has died...

i think that it is nandu that is crying...

hope manik gets better and goes back to his nandu...


can't wait to see what happens next...


keep up the good work and continue soon...




Thanks...
Will update 2morrow last prta
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: estherzac

Amazing...
Loved it...
Continue soon


Thanks...will update it todaytoday 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aarohi_angel98

Aww... that was so sweet...
And emotional one...
Cont soon...
Plz pm me if possible...

LOVE,
AAROHI...


Thanks...
Will surely pm u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...! It was awesome but full emotional...! 😭
Manik lost his mom..! 😔
Or
Gir bhi gaya vo...plz save him...! & tht someone is NANDINI for sure...once again thy meet 😆
Plzzz...continue soon...!
&
Plz PM me if possible...!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 2

Manik was continuously whispering nandini's name...

All were shocked but nandini was in tears, tears of happiness that he still remembers her...tears were continuously flowing from her eyes leaving everyone again in shock after watching her in that condition because THE DR. NANDINI MURTHY which they know was cold who has long forgotten to express her self...
she was staring at Manik without even blinking her eyes when a senior doctor asked her
"we have to operate her...asap"

with this she came out of her thoughts and start to shiver with the thought of she operating him nd thought if she did any mistake or would be able to treat him or not...

Every doctor present in OT was shocked to see one of the best doctors in nation like this...!!!!!!!

she ran away from OT blabbering "I CAN'T DO THIS" with tears on her face...!!!!

cabir who was sitting outside the OT saw her and thought why is she crying but he ignored it for that time...and sat there waiting for his friends...

soon all other came running to him...

MUKTI- how is manik...???

cabir- dnt knw...he has taken to OT...

AlYA - pta nhi kya ho gya h Manik ko, pehle vo kitna hastatha, masti krta tha but after aunty's death seems like we have lost manik too...

CABIR- yes Alya, but sometimes u knw I think , there is some other reason for his silence which we dnt knw...

All were confused with his words but cabir was in his thought trying to reveal some mystery about his friend...!!!!!

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Nandini came running to her cabin and sat down near his table digging her face in knees and crying badly...
she was in guilt of leaving Manik alone on that morning when he needed her the most...

Dnt knw for how long she cried sitting in that position...

she came to reality when her pager start to ringing showing some emergency but she was not in condition of treating anybody so se washed her face nd went to doctor to talk abt it...

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After talking to doctor she came to check on Manik while coming she was feeling so restless as something is flipping from her heart...an unknown figure engulfed in her heart...

she came there and saw his friends sitting there with there head down...

she saw towards OT nd thought surgery was still going on and was about to turn when doctor came out...


All his friends run towards doctor with hope in there eyes but nandini was to scarred to even move, her face was calm and expressionless...
calmness on her face which is there like before storm...

she stood there lifelessly , she has waited to see Manik for long 5 months but not in this condition...

Doctor- I'm sorry guyzz...

all were shocked and before he can say anything more ,nandini came there and held doctor''s collar , nd shouted "

what do u mean by sorry...how can u say that...kuch nhi hua hai MERE MANIK ko...get tht straight in ur mind...u r the best doctor of hospital...u have to save him by anything and everything...he can't leave me...he can not give e this much big punishment...

she loosened her grip while whispering "he can't leave me" again and again...

all this while tears were continuously flowing and she was not in her senses...
Mukti tried to interrupt but cabir gestured her to stop...

while blabbering nandini started moving backwards only to be hitted by wall...

Doctor- Dr. Nandini Murthy, relax and listen to me 1st...
I'm really sorry...due to this accident manik had severe internal injury because of which he is in coma...While falling down he was thinking about Nandini...so he is only whispering a name...but is not responding to any of our treatment...looks like he has been in depression for a long time...

Dhruv- for how long it will take manik to rePART 2

Manik was continuously whispering nandini's name...

All were shocked but nandini was in tears, tears of happiness that he still remembers her...tears were continuously flowing from her eyes leaving everyone again in shock after watching her in that condition because THE DR. NANDINI MURTHY which they know was cold who has long forgotten to express her self...
she was staring at Manik without even blinking her eyes when a senior doctor asked her
"we have to operate her...asap"

with this she came out of her thoughts and start to shiver with the thought of she operating him nd thought if she did any mistake or would be able to treat him or not...

Every doctor present in OT was shocked to see one of the best doctors in nation like this...!!!!!!!

she ran away from OT blabbering "I CAN'T DO THIS" with tears on her face...!!!!

cabir who was sitting outside the OT saw her and thought why is she crying but he ignored it for that time...and sat there waiting for his friends...

soon all other came running to him...

MUKTI- how is manik...???

cabir- dnt knw...he has taken to OT...

AlYA - pta nhi kya ho gya h Manik ko, pehle vo kitna hastatha, masti krta tha but after aunty's death seems like we have lost manik too...

CABIR- yes Alya, but sometimes u knw I think , there is some other reason for his silence which we dnt knw...

All were confused with his words but cabir was in his thought trying to reveal some mystery about his friend...!!!!!

-----------------------------------------------

Nandini came running to her cabin and sat down near his table digging her face in knees and crying badly...
she was in guilt of leaving Manik alone on that morning when he needed her the most...

Dnt knw for how long she cried sitting in that position...

she came to reality when her pager start to ringing showing some emergency but she was not in condition of treating anybody so se washed her face nd went to doctor to talk abt it...

---------------------------------------------

After talking to doctor she came to check on Manik while coming she was feeling so restless as something is flipping from her heart...an unknown figure engulfed in her heart...

she came there and saw his friends sitting there with there head down...

she saw towards OT nd thought surgery was still going on and was about to turn when doctor came out...


All his friends run towards doctor with hope in there eyes but nandini was to scarred to even move, her face was calm and expressionless...
calmness on her face which is there like before storm...

she stood there lifelessly , she has waited to see Manik for long 5 months but not in this condition...

Doctor- I'm sorry guyzz...

all were shocked and before he can say anything more ,nandini came there and held doctor''s collar , nd shouted "

what do u mean by sorry...how can u say that...kuch nhi hua hai MEMukti tried to interrupt but cabir gestured her to stop...

while blabbering nandini started moving backwards only to be hitted by wall...

Doctor- Dr. Nandini Murthy, relax and listen to me 1st...
I'm really sorry...due to this accident manik had severe internal injury because of which he is in coma...While falling down he was thinking about Nandini...so he is only whispering a name...but is not responding to any of our treatment...looks like he has been in depression for a long time...

Dhruv- for how long it will take to recover...

Doctor- it can take a day, or months or even years...we cnt say anything...we will try our best bet moreover he needs love and care to remove his loniness...

Cabir- we will take him home...he doesn't like hospital environment...he will recover there soon...

all the time nandini was silently listening to them then she suddenly said...

"I will take manik to my place, I will correct my mistake "

All were shocked , they didn't even knw her...but they understood this much ki only she can cure him so cabir convinced her to stay at Manik's place itslef...first she refused but ecentully agreed ...!!!!

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EVENING

Manik has been shifted to his room with all medical facility.,...
Nandini too came there with her luggage...there was no nurse as nandini herself was a trained doctor...

All were in hall while nandini went to check on Manik's room...




MANIK'S ROOM

Nandini was sitting on Manik's bed near him...
Manik was sleeping and she has entangled her one hand with his while other hand was caressing his forehead...

Tears were in her eyes...

Nandini- I'm sorry manik, plzz forgive me once...plzzz manik wake up...itni Badi saza mat do mujhe...i can't live without u plzzz manik...

she was telling all this while her tears were felling directly on his heart...

There was one more person who was listening all this...he was none other than cabir...

He came in and put his hand on her shoulder nd said...

"WE NEED TO TALK"
she nodded and after kissing on Manik's forhead went to living area were everyone was sitting with questioning eyes...


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so finally I updated its next part...!!!
I want to complete it here itself...but it was becoming too long...
next part will be last...
in that past revelation and confrontation will be there ...!!!!!!!

u want confession ??????????

do tell me through commens...

and how was the chapter..???
do u liked it..???
was it good enough..??

sorry for any mistakes...,if any

Comment u views nd do hit like button...


KEEP SMILING

KEEP LOVING

STAY BLESSED

LOVE

SAKSHI



Edited by softysakshi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
res
unres

awesome
nandini is broken..waiting for revelation

she was so hurt

waiting for cabini talk

continue soon

and ya.need confession


LOVE
SNJANA

P:S plz edit it dear.some parts are there thrice
Edited by Cutesanjana1008 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
It's awsm dude
I jst read
Plz cntine soon
I plz plz plz I want cnfessn plz
Confession k bins nahi chalega plz
I want confession plz plz plz pretty plz pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Superb part...
Update nxt part soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Nice update waiting for their confession
Update soon this time

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