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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Loved the story do pm me for the nxt part plzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Awesome
Loved it

Can you please pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Opsss...I m so late...u have already update prt 3A or meko pata bhi ni chala...!
A bigg bigg
SORRY..!😒
Bt
Prt 3A is so awsm...! True is out now...! NANDINI left her MANIK to save his life...
bt
Who is the culprit jisne MaNan ko alag karne ki pln ki tha.. 😡
agh lage uske bum m 😵
Abh toh or bhi interest a gayi...plz jaldi jaldi updt kar do or culprit ko light me leke ao...!
Or
MaNan ko mila do...! 😳

Lot of love ❤️
TanHa
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This chapter is dedicated to TANA @angle123tanha for showing so much love ty this soo much love to my this story...
I luv u dear for this...ur comments really made me feel worth my writing... 😳


CHAPTER - 3B


Manik's pov...

I was soo tired but happy too to see my nandini after a long day...

I entered in my mansion and called for her...I called her so many times but after getting no response...I became worried and started to search her in each corner...I checked every thing but found no of her...

I came to her after getting exhausted, I was thinking where she can go...

I turned to take water from side table when I saw a paper...I quickly grabbed it and read the letter...
after reading it...I was shattered...tears started to flow from my eyes ...she too left me like every one...I thought she loved me but no...no body loves and I cried bitterly digging my face in my knees...I'm lone...I dnt deserve anyone...that's why sab mujhe chodkr chale jate hai...

I read it again...


I AM SORRY MANIK
BUT I HAVE TO GO FROM UR LIFE
NEVER TRY TO FIND ME IF U WANT ME HAPPY
AND PLEASE TRY TO MOVE ON AND FORGET ME

NANDINI

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I called her...called her so many times to get same response..."the number u r calling is switched off"

days passed and I was going in darkness...the darkness from where no one can bring me out...my friends too came from concert...but the time they came dmage was done...

I stopped going outside..no parties...no meeting...i was body without soul...


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PRESENT

All were in tears listening nandini's past...they knew it was not easy for her...but she has to do this...they all ask for forgiveness...for their rude behaviour...


3 MONTHS has passed but there was no improvement in manik's health...doctors had already said no to keep any hope...

every one was loosing hope...but nandini knew ki her manik will come for her...he will not live her alone I this cruel world...

Today was nandini's birthday...she has told fab 5 that she wants to be alone...no one will disturb her whole day...she just want to spend her bday with manik...

Nandini just ried that day...she not for once moved from manik's bed...she was too losing hope...she doesn't want too...,...but after seeing that manik is not responding to treatment...she was loosing...

don't know when she slept while cryig...keeping head on his hands...

on the other hand...manik was hurt...to see her crying on her bday...

it is true he can't speak or move...but he can feel her..,...how sad she was...
he was also trying but his efforts were not makig any sense...
but on that day...it was limit...
limit to see his nandini hurt...
limit to leave her alone to fight with this cruel world...

______________________

Nandini was sleeping when she felt something moving...but she igored...she again felt something...with more pressure...

This time she wake up with a jerk and looked in manik's hand directio...his fingers were moving...he was wavig them slightly...nandini's happiness knew no bounds...she was soo hppy...tears again made their ways in her eyes...but this time they were of happiness..,...


She cups his face in her hands...ters were contiuously flowig...
"mnik..." she calls him softly...

Manik slowly opens his eyes and he was very happy to see nandini there...

he asked "nandini?? " for being sure that she was present right in front of his eyes...

after listening her name from him...she just hugged him tightly nd started to sob and...

I LUV U MANIK...plzzz abb kabhi mujhe chod kr mat Jana...abb or nhi reh skti mai tumhare bina...I'm sorry manik,...plzzz mujhe maaf krdo...abb aur nhi sha jata yeh dard mujhse ...ye sab mri vajah se hua hai...,mai khudko kabhi maaf nhi kr paugi , tumhari ye halat sab mri vajah se..."

she was just cursing herself...she was not ready to stop...but manik do know how to shut her mouth...

Manik broke the hug and just slammed his lips with her...nandini ws first shocked...but after some seconds she too responded...

They were kissing...chewing...each others lips passionately...
The kiss was of TRUST to be with each other forever...

Manik broke the hug foundig her breathless...she was panting heavily...he made her look in his eyes and said softly and lovingly...

"nandini...I know...there must be a reason nandini...I trusted u...I still trust u...but I was hurt that u didn't trusted US...u didn't trusted on me...u just gave up...I even know the reason...but I was so shattered that u left...without saying anything...

but today I got the assurity with ur words...that u will never leave me...I always loved u...I tried to even searh u after knowing the reason of ur disappearance...but got nothing...
but today u need to get thing in ur head nandini...I can fight to whole world with u besides me...I can't imagine my life without u...u are my star nandini..who always shined for me in my dark life...

I LUV U NANDINI, I LUV U A LOT"

Tears were contiuously flowig from their eyey...they both were crying...but for last time...after this there will be only hppiness in their life...

"I LUV U TOO MANIK"

after listeing this manik again took her in a bone cursing hug kissing her hairs...she too gave in kissing on his heart happily...


THE END

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I'm so happy today guyzzz as this is my 1st story which came to end...
Being lazy head...I always becomes late in my posting every story...
But I'm soo happy ki mne kuch to khtam kra...

Now time for ur likes and comments guyz...


KEEP SMILING

KEEP SHINING

LOVE

SAKSHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
nice update finally happy ending manan to be together thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: angle123tanha

<font color="#9966ff" size="2">Opsss...I m so late...u have already update prt 3A or meko pata bhi ni chala...!</font>

<font color="#9966ff" size="2">A bigg bigg</font>
<font color="#9966ff" size="2">SORRY..!😒</font>
<font color="#9966ff" size="2">Bt</font>
<font color="#9966ff" size="2">Prt 3A is so awsm...! True is out now...! NANDINI left her MANIK to save his life...</font>
<font color="#9966ff" size="2">bt</font>
<font color="#9966ff" size="2">Who is the culprit jisne MaNan ko alag karne ki pln ki tha..😡</font>
<font color="#9966ff" size="2">agh lage uske bum m😵</font>
<font color="#9966ff" size="2">Abh toh or bhi interest a gayi...plz jaldi jaldi updt kar do or culprit ko light me leke ao...!</font>
<font color="#9966ff" size="2">Or</font>
<font color="#9966ff" size="2">MaNan ko mila do...!😳</font>
<font color="#9966ff" size="2">
</font>
<font color="#9966ff" size="2">Lot of love❤️</font>
<font color="#9966ff" size="2">TanHa</font>



No need to be sorry yrr...
Thanks for appreciation..
I really loved ur comments...
and next part is posted...

Love
Sakshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Awsmmm

Happpy ending

Super writing

See u in other story

Come back sooon

Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: jamunamanik

Awsmmm

Happpy ending

Super writing

See u in other story

Come back sooon

Take care



I already have 3 other stories...
And thanks for liking my work..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49


Very very beautiful update.

Very very heart touching love story.

You wrote very very beautiful.

Thanks for sharing this awesome story.

Stay blessed dear..




Thanks.





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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Awesome update
happy ending
i loved it
thanks for pm

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