#2//The Ex's At War//Chapter 9 pg133 n Link for Thread 3 on pg153

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#491

awesome update...

loved it so much...

very interesting update...

loved the family time that they spent together...

hated that rewa convo with manik...i don't know why manik is not standing up for nandu...

loved manini's scene with manan...and their night in bed...

wondering how nandu got into her room with manik in a compromising position...

cant wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Lizbeth

@Lizbeth

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#492

Oh mahn, its amazing .. Super amazing.. I would luv to read more family tyms like ds..
This family z soo cute. Kaddu, monster n nandu.. Awww..
Exctd fr d nxt..

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prasanna77

@prasanna77

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Posted: 9 years ago

#493

awesome update...really heartfully enjoyed reading it...

entire episode was a pure bliss...it was so beatiful i can say...

ur such an awesome writer...i wonder how do u write so perfectly.👏..

the entire episode was full of manan and cute manani...😳

loved the way u described everthing...

''there is not much of difference between u and manani u both look same in my shirt'' i loved these

words of manik.😃..

and manani was too cute when she tried to disturb manik while he was in phone with rewa..😊..

thoroughly enjoyed reading this update...thank u so much for these wonderful stories...

thanks for pm...

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thamannamanan

@thamannamanan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#494

wow u always amaze me with ur story

manik n nandini cutest couple

manik irritating nandini wow

nandini s Manini s reaction whn manik was talking to rewa

superb

waiting for next update

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DesaiK

@DesaiK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#495

Awesome update love the cute knok jhok of manan

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#496

Nice update...
simply lo9ved it
thanks for d pm ❤️

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windowseatbug

@windowseatbug

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Posted: 9 years ago

#497

Amazing update.

Manik cooked for them.

Though created a mess.

But not bad.

Nandini was so helpless.

She started crying.

May be really because of Nandini's eating habits or maybe she was really tired of handling everything alone.

Eventually both knows that they need each other.

Felt really bad for her when Manik lied to Rewa & she thought he was ashamed to admit that he was with them.

Both the girl's irritated when Rewa called.

Hahahah.

Loved their family time.

Thanks for update & pm.

Continue soon :)

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love_manan

@love_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#498

is there any way...i can apologize...i guess no...bt still i will try...i had passed through the toughest faze of my life...well it was personal so i cant dhare it here...but believe me it was impossible for me to even touch my mobilr...forget about reading stories...

but after such a heaviest faze ..i am back...and i specially spared one whole day to read all the stories over here...and finally i was able to catch them up...sorry...if u thought tht i ditched your story in the middle...becoz i had been regular commentor...

but trust me i read all the parts that u posted after i was gone...i am once again sorry...hope u will understand...

and i loved the parts also...Manan moments are always bliss to read...i will comment regularly from now on...i promise...pakka vala ...iss bar maf kar do...plzzz...see u soon...i will this time catch u up on time...pakka

Lots of love

Manan

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iqra286

@iqra286

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#499

Awww really loved d family time to d core 😳 really loved naughty Manik malhotra 😆 😃 really loved d way he was cooking for his bacha 😃 bth deny dt dy can live without eachother but d fact is dt dy cant even dy try dy cant 😃 😆 really loved their sleeping position 😉 😃 plzz update soon 😊