#2//The Ex's At War//Chapter 9 pg133 n Link for Thread 3 on pg153 - Page 48

Superb dear...the family time was really very amazing so as the members...loved manan encounters a lot...be it in nandu's room ir in kitchen...n manini is such a cutie pie...i love her to the core...u hve made her character so adorable... Really waiting fr manan morning encounter in manini's room... Waiting fr next... Byee...tc...

Yet another fantabulous update...loved the. manan chemistry. Can't wait for the next update!!!

Superb update.

awesome update its so wonderful...family time together..lv the way you express each one's feelings be it nandu mank manini n manik's mom each is an individual very clearly depicted.. loving n enjoying it thoroughly eagerly awaiting updates ...tx

Aaaewww...
this update was extremely sweet...
seriously. ...
manini kissing nandinis ou... ohh damn ...she is d cutest...
manik cooking... hahahah... that was really funny...
And then manini in maniks cloths... soo adorable. ...
nandini crying bcoz of manini... hehe... sometimes this actually happens that we don't know how to let our emotions out and we jst cry...
and then nandini sleeping in her room but waking up in maninis room...
lets see what happens...

And yaar I didn't got d pm...
Anyways...
keep writing. ...
continue soon...
Avneet... (Avi...)

amazing update..feeling sad for manan why the ego problems...poor manini she has to face it all...so happy to get her parents together...and rewa...really surprising manik lied to her abt he being out fr sm wrk...whats happening cnt see a third person entering manan's life...hope everythings gonna be ok soon..they both wld realise their mistakes before its too late...

yr ur story...no words to describe... means phenomenal...means manan and ice on cake manini...so cute n adorable...plz gve updates soon...I knw fr writing it takes time but still...I visualize parth and niti...omg it looks so cute

Ohh shit..
soo soo sorry... jst got d pm...
fOr both... soo going to read Lips Do Lie
bii... and agn m sorry...

Wowwwieee!!

Awesome update
Ufff MaNan ka itna romantic scene chal raha tha...
Manini kitni cute hai...
Hahaha manik ne kitchen ka kya haal bna diya tha...
Loved those family scenes...
Aww nandu crying... Dono father daughter confused...
Rewa aarrggghhh ... Nandu ka gussa ekdum jayaz tha...
The trio sleeping together...
Oh leh ueh MaNan manini ke room mei kaise???
Manik was caring for her ... So sweet
Bt superb update
Thnzk 4 the pm