#2//The Ex's At War//Chapter 9 pg133 n Link for Thread 3 on pg153

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Gaurianand

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Posted: 9 years ago

#451

Awesome update
😉
Loving the way Manini is bringing Manan closer
N yeah last part ki Nandini was with Manik
😆 n yeah waiting for next 😛

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thisissanjanap

@thisissanjanap

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Posted: 9 years ago

#452

Amazing update :**
I feel for Nandini... Please continue soon
Manini is really cuteee :)

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varsha03

@varsha03

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Posted: 9 years ago

#453

I'm commenting for the first time.. Sorry
Ur update is So So So awesome.

I just love manini
Wanted to kiss her momma's auu

Ahhh like nandu n her kaddu even I don't like manik to talk to that good for nothing girl

Indeed very good morning
Manan in same bed cuddling n sleeping 😊

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S.h.e.e.t.a.l

@S.h.e.e.t.a.l

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Posted: 9 years ago

#454

Superb update
thank you for such a lonnnggg update
loved manan moments
Manani is so cute
loved everybit of it

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aahanaK

@aahanaK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#455

fabulous update

this was really long

loved manik's teasing session

n manik still has some feelings

he still care for nandu

manini was adorable

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Kavikrish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#456

it was a very nice chapter...indeed a family time...
continue soon

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rupmanan1

@rupmanan1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#457

wow really its amazing love manini alot ... hahaha teaser manik ... but yar ye majhara kya h nandu & manik eksath ek bed pe vo bhi manini k rooom me pliz pliz pliz come soon & reveale it

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OhMeriJaan

@OhMeriJaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#458

WOWWW!! This was one AH-mazing update! Loved it to bits! ❤️ From start to end it was fabulous and beyond! If I could I would seriously hug and kiss Manini to the world's limit! That kiddo is absolutely a rockstar man! And the way you pen the scenes down makes me literally live it along with them! Brilliant stuff!

I totally LOVED Manini's scn inside their bedroom!😆 Esp the "nau nau" convo! I had a hearty laugh! 🤣 And I just cant get the visual of Manini in Manik's shirt and Nandu's glasses! Aww-dorable she would have been! ❤️ I swear Manini is the hero of your story for me! I love how indirectly or directly she gets MaNan together! And Manik's love for her and concern for Nandu! Beautiful! ❤️

Jealous mom and daughter duo be epic awesome kay😆 Only if Rewa was in front of them, both would have taken her case acchese😆 AND the ending! Damn I so can't wait to read the next scene! I simply LOVED that scene to bits! Like totally! Manik be such a baccha man! ❤️

Waise if you dont mind can I ask if you can give the flashback of how Nandu landed up with Manik in Manini's room in Manik's pov? Just asking! :)

Shall wait for your next update with bated breath😃

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eppie99

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Posted: 9 years ago

#459

ITS INDEED IS A BEAUTIFULL STORY

I JUST LUV IT TO THE CORE

I JST LUVE MANINIS CHARACTER

SHE IS SUCH A SWEATHEART N HER TALKS ARE SOOO CUTE

TOTALLY A MANAN COMBINATION

AMAZING UPDATE

SPSLG THE PART WHERE MANINI SNEAK INTO MANANS ROOM JUST TO KISS NANDINIS WOUND

THAT WAS SOOO SWEET

CONTINUE SOON DEAR

PLSSS PM ME

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lovemylyf

@lovemylyf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#460

manini is such a sweet heart... loved the part where manini Sneak's in to nandus room to kiss her leg..that was a cute part.. manik too much..such a tease... feeling sad for Nandu.. the last part was expected...i was 100 percent sure about that... lov u a lot for the long long updates... cont soon..

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