#2//The Ex's At War//Chapter 9 pg133 n Link for Thread 3 on pg153

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Anushi

@anushi3012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

I really really loved this update!!!
Manik's jealousy was just a superb treat to read!!!!
And Nandini, how she was teasing him
The stilettos!!!
Manik's question to her has me laughing out loud!!!!
Obviously, she fell.

Atleast, this made him stay in their apartment... where so much happened (thinking about the Impulsive Soulmates...)

Well, u ended where we all want to knoe what will happen!!??
Eagerly waiting for next chapter

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neetimehta

@neetimehta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Awesome update

manik still cares for nandu

dadi and poti rockked

yeh dono kab samjenge they cant live without each other??

mindblowing update

do u know u r so awesome that i used to re read all ur stories

when i get free time i used to do only one think and that is re read ur all story

thank u so much for sharing these kind of amazing stories

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pinkrose90

@pinkrose90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Nice update. Manini is so cute and loved MaNan. Update soon please. 😊

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gauriangel

@gauriangel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Hey..no break ha...After this amazing update. Ur note in the end made me sad...very sad ..

Don't u read our comments..

😒

I just love this story..

These are Manik n nandini I imagine after their marriage. Staying away..yet so caring and loving in their own way fr each other..

Nandini observing his wound on his forehead wen he entered..

n manik though trying to prove his point on heels yet caring and worried for her sprain..

These are subtle things u mention here n there makes ur story worth reading...

It's just a start. ..

This is amazing story..

Pls get back ur spirit and do wat u do best..write. ..

Because many people like me..wait fr updates eagerly every weekend..

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Hema_

@Hema_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

I really love your story.!! Aah today's update was good jealous Manik ..and Manini and her cute antics she is sucha sweetheart loved her character:* n ya your ff It's not at all boring I always have a smile while reading..I eagerly wait for your update.. Seriously u are very good writer .. You present it beautifully.. Pls update soon :)

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Manya

@manya_189

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Haha Manik is so naughty!
I love the jealous yet caring Manik more
Manini is adorable ^_^
Nandini is so not in control of her hormones :p

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Mishal

@mish052

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Nice one... Manini is just so Adorable 😳
Keep Updating plz 😉

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windowseatbug

@windowseatbug

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Awesome update.

Jealous Manik.

It was fun to read.

He did not even spare shahid.

Steve really gave him hard time.

Hahahah.

I can't believe he still thinks Rewa wasn't behind this.

Guys can be really stupid sometimes.

Nandini tripped.

Clumsy girl.

Manik didn't even leave a single chance taunting her.

But he still cares.

Doctors must be really scared.

Also carrying her all the way.

Manik's mum & manini are way too smart.

One instigates & other emotionally blackmails.

But finally under one roof, make him stay for at least a week.

They are so cute together.

But too stubborn & egoistic to accept defeat.

Please bring them together.

Also, Harshad proposed Mukti.

Is he good in your story?

I really love this story.

Be it first part or second.

Thanks for update.

Continue soon :)

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sailingsea85

@sailingsea85

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Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Amazing!! Nd ofcourse entertaining :)

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Drashtiii

@Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#120

I to loved it hahaha manik and sarcasm it was too good yet manik is so caring he is as adorable as his daughter and plz give some part in manik's pov to know about how he feels being away from his family..and that article thing was done by reward right..???

And coming to d update it was awesome jealous manik haai our sona munda hehehe I just love the way he cares for his family...