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Tiara115 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was awesome
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi nikhu...how r u?

it was a amazing update

cabir's teasing session was mind blowing😆😆

ek moka nahi chod ta...

of'course he is pro in bahana making...

nandu is getting restless to see manik...wow...

loved her self talks,,,,,,

she wanna kill him but at the end they be ended up doing something else...u know what i mean...😳😆😆

manik ne to puri planning kar rakhi hai

one thing is clear manik wants to take revenge from deewans but is sab mein nandini ko drag karna it's not fair

but on a serious naote manik too loves her and he know that but not accepting it...


loved it

excited for the manan date

pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: reet0143

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">hi nikhu...how r u?</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">it was a amazing update</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">cabir's teasing session was mind blowing😆😆</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">ek moka nahi chod ta...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">of'course he is pro in bahana making...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">nandu is getting restless to see manik...wow...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">loved her self talks,,,,,,</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">she wanna kill him but at the end they be ended up doing something else...u know what i mean...😳😆😆</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">manik ne to puri planning kar rakhi hai</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">one thing is clear manik wants to take revenge from deewans but is sab mein nandini ko drag karna it's not fair</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">but on a serious naote manik too loves her and he know that but not accepting it...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">loved it</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">excited for the manan date</font>
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M good.. Thanks for asking.. Glad to know that you liked the update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
beware of manik malhothra s love virus


😊



yours 6ft 2 inch

your certified jerk wow
manik



nandini has fallen in love with manik already

kabeer is falling for navya


but feels hurt because manik s doing it for revenge
nandini is going to get hurt herself very badlyyy
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Posted: 9 years ago

this is the first time I'm commenting on this story

sorry I didn't got time to read it

loved the concept

nandini have criminal family

but she is unaware of it

her brother's are very protective about her

nandini is tomboy😃

and her bestfriend is navya but unfortunately she I s her bhabi 😒

manik has some past

and he wants to take revenge with nandini's family...but through her😒

though he is playing with her feelings

but he is also falling for her

cabir fell for navya...aww...poor guy can't even express his love

fab5 knows that manik loves nandini...but he doesn't wants to accept his feeling

the revenge thing has overpowered his feelings

hope nandini loves him after knowing his real motive

cabir is such a tease for manan😆

manik is compensating for his absence through gifts

nandini is totally in love with him

she started humming songs

that's a great change😉

though this update has no manan moments

but liked it

waiting for manan's official date😃

and pls continue soon dear

don't take forever for next update

waiting for LBDF update too

thanks for pm dear

continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update... no manan scene still I loved d hide and seek game...

d way manik is doing things ny girl vl fall fr such a boy...but I hope ds revenge thing vl badly hurt nandini...

she vl be broken completely...

eager fr d next part..plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
yeah it was indeed very long chapter...

cabir giving nandu training how to lie...heheee

n then our tim boy nandu singing a song which is not so our old nandini...

she was missing manik very much...in the morning when she woke up she wanted to see his face but there also she got disappointed... 😔... din ki shurruat hi aisi hui h toh din kaisa jayega...

navya n cabir chotu sa scene was nice...

nandini wanted to know about manik but stopped herself from asking it n to her help she got the info but got disappointed to know that manik is not gonna join them today...

manik keeps on sending gifts to her... all gifts were good...

he reached to washroom too... heheeehee

n yeah nandu should close the door atleast in hotel room she should be extra careful...

last note with the dress was cute... din chahe kaisa bhi beeta ho but night is gonna be special...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shoana


this is the first time I'm commenting on this story


sorry I didn't got
time to read it


loved the concept


nandini have criminal family


but she is unaware of it


her brother's are very protective about her


nandini is tomboy😃


and her bestfriend is
navya but unfortunately she I s her bhabi 😒


manik has some past


and he wants to take revenge with nandini's family...but
through her😒


though he is playing with her feelings


but he is also falling for her


cabir fell for navya...aww...poor guy can't even express his
love


fab5 knows that manik loves nandini...but he doesn't wants to
accept his feeling


the revenge thing has overpowered his feelings


hope nandini loves him
after knowing his real motive


cabir is such a tease for manan😆


manik is
compensating for his absence
through gifts


nandini is totally in love with him


she started humming songs


that's a great change😉


though this update has no manan moments


but liked it

waiting for manan's official date😃


and pls continue soon
dear


don't take forever
for next update


waiting for LBDF update too


thanks for pm dear


continue soon







Well, you are the first who's saying that you are waiting for RBDF's update.. 😛
Anyways, thanks for commenting! Glad that you liked the story! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nikhuarora





Well, you are the first who's saying that you are waiting for RBDF's update.. 😛
Anyways, thanks for commenting! Glad that you liked the story! 😃



i'm very much missing RBDF
These two became my favorite
to pls uska bhi update dedo na
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Cabir leaves no chance to tease nandini. Hmm nandini was missing manik. Manik's gift part was amazing with nandini's pov. But feeling sad that she is falling in manik's trap. Eagerly waiting for next update.super excited for manan's date.continue soon. Love to read further
Keep writing
Stay blessed😊

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