#2//Manan SS-Soulmates(V.V.IMPORTANT NOTE-33)

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Tiara115

@Tiara115

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

I didn't know why it happens with me only .. whenever u started a new thread I wasn't aware of it .. today I searched ur ff on google then I came to know about new thread. .. I want to read ur story ..so plz can u pm me next tym .. So that I won't miss it ...

Both updates were nyc ... I enjoyed it...

Di update soon

Waiting eagerly

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Sree

@Sreeja_babu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Wow!!! Read 2 updates in a go..

Really vry vry sorry 4 late commentin dear...😭😭

Thnku so much 4 d pm diya dear...😛

Awesome update.. Romance s at peak..

Lvd it. Manan a bliss... Both r in madly lv vid each othr..

Manik arrangd candle light dinnr 4 nandu... Awesum update dear..👏👏

Do continue dear.. Waitin 4 nxt prt...

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diya

@diyaNarwal

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: gtilwani45
wow.. that was soo lovely. . that just amazing. ... it was soo awesome. ... their love is pure bliss. such a peaceful love.. loved it ... I likee it . I just love it.. Itsss soo awesome .. So amazing. .just love to the core. .. Soo .fantastic. ... Keep updating. .. U r such a beautiful writer... Update soon.. Waiting for next update eagerly .. Thanks for this update . Thanks for pm too. .. Stay blessed. . Love Geet

Thanks dear😛

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diya

@diyaNarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: sharon.babu
awesome update...
loved it so much...
loved their cute convo...
love the fact that only they can calm each other and assure themselves of their happiness and their bright future...
the beach scene and their hugs were beautiful...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...

Thanks😛

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diya

@diyaNarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Cute_Inaya
Hello diya...
Sorry dear m dono parts pr comment ek sath kar rhi hu... am still not well that's why...
Part 19 A ...
Update was very amazing and emotional too...
Well said dear... loved ones ko khone ka pain unbearable hota... i know kaisa feel hota... well manik is very caring and understanding..
Manan convo was heart touching... i really like that line bahut pyaar karte ho and the way manik answer ... too good... very amazing lines
Very beautifully describe dear...

Coming to the next part... Part 19 B...
Update was fabulous... superb...
Dinner time romance and their passionate romance was truly bliss..
Very beautifully describe dear... their talks ... i really like it...
Love ur both updates... love u to...
U did a fab job diya...
Thank you so much for pm... thanks for updates...

And most importantly ... All the very best dear... I'll surly pray for u...
And I hope u achieve what u want...
Stay blessed and happy...
Keep it up... take care of urself...
Lots of love

Thanks inaya😛

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diya

@diyaNarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Afiiieee
Wowww superb update Dr...
Manan romance was on full swing...
The atmosphere is to hot dr...
Manik was so caring and lovable...
Always stay blessed nd happy

Thanks dear😛

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diya

@diyaNarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: bhagupur

Thanks for pm..dear

Both update was awesome.

He love and care her so much.

He arrange a beautiful dinner for her. .

The love and passion the shared was awesome.

The chapters was very beautiful.

Stay blessed dear.

Thanks.

Thanks dear😛

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diya

@diyaNarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: SIAZAHEED.1
whooo!!!😉
what a hott nd emotional update yaar!!!
u knw what this is the 3rd hott update i read 2day!!!
bt each 1 is different 4m each other!!
jst loved it!!👏 👏
update the nxt part soon dear...😊

Thanks dear😛

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diya

@diyaNarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: kimnana
its blissful to read ur story ...nandu is sad as she remembers her parents
manik knows how to make her feel better ...lovely manan moments
ty for pm

Am glad you like it😛

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diya

@diyaNarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#110

Hey guys ...am really for not giving any updates ...please forgive me for that ...here is ur update ...well honestly speaking ...I don't knew what I write ...it's just that jo bhi man aaya ...I write ...toh agar acha naa lage ...uske liye pehle hi sorry ...here is ur update ...ENJOY 😛

Part-20

MID NIGHT-

Manan were sleeping peacefully in each other Arms ...manik hands were on her waist ...and nandani was resting her head on his chest ...both were glowing ...there is a peace ...calmness ...sweet smile...ON there faces ...having ur love in ur arms it's a blessing that God gives ...after sometime nandani wake up bcz of some uneasiness ...she lazily opened her eyes and looked at manik who was sleeping peacefully ...she smiled looking at him ...and entangled herself from his grip carefully make sure not to wake him up and placed a pillow at her place ...manik hugged that pillow tightly ...nandani smiled and wrapped the quilt around her body and cover herself ...bcz she was naked ...she was blushing ...by remembering the moments they spend with each other ...she slowly came to the balcony and saw the sea waves who was advancing and backing ...a beautiful smile crept on her lips by seeing the beautiful view of nature. ...she just stood there

Nandani pov :

It's like a dream ...that am I living...I don't have anyone in my life ...mom dad no one ...but that time Manik came in my life ...I will not lie ...but when I saw him first time ...I felt like... connected with him ...he is a stranger for me ...but the way he showered his love ...I didn't realized when...his pain ...his smile was so important for me ...and today I can't live without him ...I can't imagine my life without him ...sometimes I really wonder ...am I actually deserve him ...the way he loves me ...he cares for me ...the way he heals me ...do my love is enough ...actually no ...my love is nothing compares to him ...I doesn't remember my parents ...maybe bcz I don't need to remember them ...Whenever I became sick ...he cares for me like a mother ...Whenever I have done some mistakes ...he teaches me like a father ...and whenever I needed love...he loves me like a mad lover ...well it can't be wrong if I say he is in madly in love with me ...he said that I bring him out of the darkness ...but I said he came in my life like a light ...who brings a lot of love ...love whom which I craving for ...a love which I always needed ...sahi kaha ha ...love heals everything ...every wound ...and yes he heals me ...he heals every wound of mine ...he gives me so much love ...that am wondering ...like wm I so special ...well yes I am special bcz he makes me special ...

Manik came from behind and back hugged her ...and kissed her bare shoulder ...to which she shivered a little and turned towards him ...she placed her hands around his neck and holds her waist tightly ...nandani smiled looking at him ...

Both unison said : I love you

Both smiled ...and looking at each other ...sometimes words are not needed to describe what you feel ...sometimes silence speaks everything ...manik picked nandani in his arms and placed her in the bed ...and lay besides her ...

Manik lovingly said : sleep shona ...u need rest ...

Nandani smiled and lovingly said : sing for me Manik ...I love the way u sing ...it's like am in some other world ...

Manik pecked her lips and lovingly said : yes u r in ...u r in the world of our ...manan ...where love is there only ...nothing else ...

He started humming the song and caresses her hairs ...to which she smiled

Hoon.. hoon..

Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hai tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdam
Haan sikha maine
Jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan sikha maine jeena mere humdam
Na sikha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na sikha jeena tere bina humdam

Nandani smiled looking at him...she knew he meant each and every word )

Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hai tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdam
Haan sikha maine
Jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan sikha maine
Jeena mere humdam
Na sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na sikha jeena tere bina hamdam

Hoon.. hoon..
Sachi si taarife
Dil se jo maine kari hain
Sachi si taarife
Dil se jo maine kari hain
Jo tu mila toh saji hai
Duniya meri humdam
O aasma mila zameen ko meri
Aadhe aadhe pure hain hum

(Nandani pecked his lips to which manik smiled and sang )

Tere nam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere hamdam
Haan sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan sikha maine jeena mere humdam
Na sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na sikha jeena tere bina hamdam

Hmmm...

Manik looked at nandani who was sleeping peacefully ...he smiled and pecked her forehead and drifted into sleep...

So how's it ...I hope acchi lagi aap logo ko yeh update ...well agar naa bhi lage toh bhi bata dena kaisi ha ...and one important thing ...only three chapters more ...it is going to end ...if u Guys like it...please do hit the like button And comment on it Too...

Till then

Keep loving

Keep smiling

And

Keep shining For Ur loved ones

Love

Diya😛😛😛

Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago

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