Travesty of Mr Malhotra - Manan SS Chapter 18 Page 64

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Maramkhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Gosh! This is soo good. The story is getting interesting day by day.

Loving each and every bit of it

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Jamwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

nandu's birthday
loved the update...
continue soon

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Adeeba

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

One word: Intense .
The Manik Malhotra in this is so intriguing .
-God bless

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iqra286

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Awww shit man manik is really a whole mysterious film 😆 😉 totally an evil scypho 😃 bt loving ds scypho to d core 😳 😊 so evil twins was nandu's friends 😃 really loved d celebration of nandini's brd8y 😃 bt dt devil was also there n he saw her at cafe frst time wow 😳 👏 d chocolate cake was luking dam tempting n delicious 😭 😃 😛 bt she fpund a dark room inside d house wht it could be? N now again his inner monster came alive poor nandu 🥱 plzz update itx nxt chp soon wanted to knw dt is he a scypho?? Or married before bt killed his wife?? 😃 update soon

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shubhshash

@shubhshash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Nice update...

Omg..yur ff is sooo mysterious. ...

Cant undrstand manik...smetyms he is good n smetyms angry. ...

But loving yur story...

Keep updating. ...

Bye tc...!!

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Ananya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

I guess this story of yours will get more mysterious and filled with curiousness with each update!!I am so enjoying all of it so so much!! I can't even express it in my words!
Your words are hypnotising!! They dazed me once again!! A beautifully penned update!!

Mukit and Cabir's character in the flashback section was fascinating! I so wish they could come again in this track! That will just be awesome and funny!

Manik seems so peculiar but still their moments are ethereal! They seem cherishing each other and I guess Manik does love Nandini!

I am seriously curious to know the truth behind Manik's awkwardness! The questions are forming a pile in my mind!

In short, loved the update completely!!

Continue soon! I will be waiting!!!

Thanks for the PM! Take care!

Keep smiling! Keep writing!

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Hudah18

@Hudah18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Awesome but y is manik like dis

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@MaNanholapeople

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Wowww awesome manik is so mysterious i am in love with his character cause the way you are writing is so nice hehe. It is getting damn interesting and now lets see what is the mystery. :D