Travesty of Mr Malhotra - Manan SS Chapter 18 Page 64 - Page 30

Originally posted by: Annieeeiee

No! He wouldn't. He just wouldn't kill anyone. But..

Anyways I love the way you write. I am amazed by those lines. Those prose.

I heart'em.

But why was this chappyy so chotu? :'(

And that too when the secret was gonna be revealed. I am literarily glued to it. Pm bhej dogi kya next update k liye? Please? *puppy face*

Ilyittt :*

Continue and update soon. Okay?

Dude it ws awesome..

It just made me cry...

Manik had suffered a lot due to Nyo and Harshad
I hate them
Nice update

Originally posted by: Cooldude101

Shit that's dark. No one can go through what he's been through and be fine.
I don't know what happens but I think there's alot more left to be told.
Shinu you rock🤗
Now go and read what I've written😆

Originally posted by: Tammy18

Dude it ws awesome..

Emotional n breathtaking..

U penned d fears of a child so superbly.. I dnt hav words..

N d verses n poems u use to describe d chapter is cherry on top..

Loved it

Ty fr pm

It was emotional and I glad to know it was accident.Please update soon. You write it beautifully. Thanks

Originally posted by: Sun07

It was emotional and I glad to know it was accident.Please update soon. You write it beautifully. Thanks

Nice update
Plz pm me

Heeyyy...
It was awsome yr..
Amazing !!! Hats off to u !!!
Niyonika is such a bitch...
Glad that harshad died.!!!!
Huh!!!!
Poor Manik yr...
Blooddy Niyonika will pay for her deads!!!
Awsome...amazing...excellent...
Thanks for pm...
Update soon...
N plzzx pm me...
Whenever u update..
Byeee