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if_account

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Posted: 9 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: cun_angel
oh my god...daraa diyaaa...mja lgaa ua nt gnna cmplte it...😕
plsss search it naaa...mil jegaa...😉
waiting eagerly fr the last part...do pm me😊

Arey no.. You know what happened.. I started the chappie in the morning.. Thoda sa likha.. Save kia.. And then I took a break.. Then I continued in evening and I don't know what happened.. When I was saving it.. Sara delete ho gya.. Only the chotu sa part is there.. That I wrote in the morning..😭

This feels so bad so bad.. 😭

I have to write sab kuch dobara..😭

I don't whether I'll be able to write the same or not..😭

😭 I am a very lazy person... And now double double mehnat.🤢

😭😭

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Posted: 9 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: Cooldude101
When I saw the deleted message flashing, I got shit scared. And I thought maybe you had taken the lamba wala part very seriously😆
But anyway, PM or no PM, I want the lamba wala update😳

My part 3 actually went to Rest in Peace..!!

Aaj mujhe realize.. We should think before we speak..

😭 Sometimes the bad things we say come true..

😭

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hafsaansari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#323

Wowww this is fab..
I came across this story just now..
Plzzz pm me the last part na!!!
Eagerly desperately waiting

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if_account

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Posted: 9 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: hafsaansari
Wowww this is fab..
I came across this story just now..
Plzzz pm me the last part na!!!
Eagerly desperately waiting

😲 You came across just know.. Then what did you read..

Coz I've deleted the parts..😕

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Dhingli44

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Posted: 9 years ago

#325

Oh god!! Pls don't put up such titles..
Deleted..seeing that I thought Oh God!! Another story gone 😆
Really love ur works ya..pls don't give shocks like this 😛
Being a writer even I knkw how irritating it is..when an update gets deleted
o problem update whenever possible.

PS-I read ur reply to a comment that Manik Malhotra ka impulsiveness manufacturing defect hai.. 😆
I loved that line...if u don't mind can I use it 😛
Pls PM me if yes or no..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: if_account

Arey no.. You know what happened.. I started the chappie in the morning.. Thoda sa likha.. Save kia.. And then I took a break.. Then I continued in evening and I don't know what happened.. When I was saving it.. Sara delete ho gya.. Only the chotu sa part is there.. That I wrote in the morning..😭
This feels so bad so bad.. 😭
I have to write sab kuch dobara..😭
I don't whether I'll be able to write the same or not..😭
😭 I am a very lazy person... And now double double mehnat.🤢
😭😭
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if u r using word to redo ho jata h...

bt chlo...koi naa...m waiting...

thdi si mehnat bss...😉😉😉

eagerly waiting...😃

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Sm0405

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Posted: 9 years ago

#327

Koi nhi ... We will wait fr the update ...

Nd I can understand kaisa feel ho rha hoga ... Yaar mere saath bhi aisa hota hai ... Jab pura comment likhi lamba sa ... Nd then galti se wo del ho jaye ... Arggghhh !!!

Waiting fr the update ...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: if_account

But you read that na.. Only 3rd is left..

But still...It was such a beautiful story.

I could have re-read it na.

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priyanair04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#329

Yaar yeh manik hamesha monster mode mein hi kyu rehta hai...poor nandu always gets hurt...but it was good to c jealous manik ...hope manik solves tension btw tem...waiting for next update...and WISHING U A VERY HAPPY DIWALIDIWALI..ENJOY

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if_account

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Posted: 9 years ago

#330

Promo...!!

Before he could continue Nandini stormed inside and glared at him furiously..

"Now what do you want MANIK... Haven't you had enough..? Will you let me die peacefully or NOT...?"

She screamed angrily but now Manik too got annoyed.. He held her shoulders and pinned her to the wall and the fight started-

Manik: NO...!! I WON'T.. Suna tumne.. I WON'T.. Neither let you die nor let you leave me...!!

He left her shoulders with a jerk and continued-

"Okay.. I agree I was wrong.. What I did was wrong.. But were you right..?? Hun..?? AT LEAST I AM APOLOGIZING DAMN IT...!!"

Nandini: Oh..!! So..!! I should Thank you Manik.. For doing this favor by apologizing..!! Hai na..? And what the hell did I do..? You were The one who dragged me and kissed me.. You shouted at me.. Where am I wrong..? Listen..!! You are apologizing for your acts.. Get that.. Okay..!!

Manik: Okay.. So you didn't do anything..?

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Sooo... Now what did Manik do..??

Where was Nandini wrong.. Think think.. And please tell..

Update on 14th November or May be 13th.. Depends on the response.. Ab toh idea de do.. Fir mat bolna k kuch bhi likh dia..

I know Bakwaas promo hai.. But I wanted to wish you all na.. Though I've wished my Buddies.. But there are silent readers too..😉

So yeah.. !!

WISHING A VERY HAPPY DIWALI TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY..😊

Have Fun..

😊

Edited by if_account - 9 years ago