MANAN FF DO DIL EK JAAN LINK TO THREAD 2 ADDED ON PG 1 - Page 27

Wow very hot n romantic update

Super hot...

ooo very hot...

Wowww... Super hawwwt update dear

I really liked when he says "chorne k liye nai pakra tumhain..."
Seriously the romance was hot...
Their torturing game... Ufff 😳
And Nandini always runs... Dekho it's 5th part and night is not over...
I guess ab bed p chale jain gy to ab Manik nai chore ga 😆
Seriously it's the fifth time i'm saying this "ab Manik nai chore ga..."
Ab to mujhe bhi hasi a rahi hai likhate waqat... 😆
Likin ab sachi lagta hai as Manik ne khud bhi keh doya nai chore ga or ab sahi wala pakra or bed p bhi ja rahe hain 😳
To ab agr nandini bhag gai to Manik ose chore na chore main ne tumhain nai chorna... 😡
Testing our paitence 😭
Exams main baith k update par rahi hon...
But seriously amaIng update...
You write really Awsum... Baki sab ka nai pata likin Romance is really great...
Slowly and in ever so romantic way... The things are progressing...
Hope k ab kuch ho jae 😉

Take care
Stay blessed
Love
Dua...

Only one word HOT HOT HOT update it was ... superb...
penned it beautifully ...
loved it to d core...
manik's teasing session was superb ... n d way nandini fooled manik hahaha loved it totally.

what a mind blowing sensuous update...
update next part soon...
waiting eagerly n impatiently...

Wow...hey hi I'm a new reader I love ur story its amazing u give update on daily bases kia???

Really hot romance

Nice
Continue soon
Loved it
Take care
:)