MANAN FF DO DIL EK JAAN LINK TO THREAD 2 ADDED ON PG 1

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PART 1 :


Nandu was sitting on the king size bed covering her face with duppatta continously biting her nails.

NANDINI POV :

Ayyappaaa is this all true kya sach main aaj meri suhag rath and stops closing her eyes tightly biting her inner cheeks

NANDINI DESCRIPTION :

I opened my eyes and lifting my dupatta slowly looked around.

Our room was beautifully decorated with scent candles and rose petals making a heart shape symbol wherever possible.

Lights were dimmed may be to create a romantic mood and this mere thought made me panic again and i started cursing my besties for leaving me here alone.

I slowly closed my eyes and his smiling face flashed in front me. I smiled unknowingly and blushed more.

I lazily opened my eyes moving my hands on bed and when my eyes fell on bed at that moment I realised that our bed was decorated even more beautifully.

stands of increasing height at equal distance with amazing flower bouquets were placed at either sides of our bed to which white and red curtains were connected making a "u" shape between gaps of stands whose ends were tied at the head board of bed making a perfect heart symbol giving an extra ordinary look to our bed.

I smiled whole heartedly and the cool breeze hitting my face directly due to the open door of balcony was giving me great peace.

I slowly started playing with rose petals which were spreaded all over the bed and forgot everything.

Suddenly I heard some sound outside the door and I once again quickly covered my face with dupatta praying my ayyappa that it should not be him.

Slowly door got opened and yes it was him.

I started shivering watching him walk towards me after locking the door.

He soon reached me and sat infront of me since I was sitting in the centre of bed.

I didn't dare to look him and was looking down clutching my dupatta tightly.

I don't know why am feeling nervous even though I know him since childhood may be because he has never kissed me except on my forhead which no one knows except us

Yess you heard it right we play with each other like kids fight with each other like typical wife and husband bully each other like all time enemies but never get romantic because every time we get close unknowingly I run away from him and sometimes people around us disturb us.

While I was busy thinking all this I heard him taking my name in the most sexiest voice

I slowly raised my eye lashes and breath got stucked in my throat seeing him staring me intently with all the need,lust and love.

"I love you" I heard him confessing not blinking his eyes for once

He slowly moved his hands and lifted my dupatta.

I got lost in his deep chocolate brown eyes and sat numb.

We both sat looking each other saying nothing don't know till how much time.

He was the one who broke our eye lock.

"You must be tired na so sleep I'll just change and come" were his words.

I was panicking thinking what all might happen between us and here he is not even talking any thing related to it ayyappaaa what should I do now

"You don't have to worry I will not do anything against your wish" he spoke again making me froze at my place

He is the guy who I know since childhood who I love to the core who I got married who is my husband and whom I belonged to

Not a single guy would say this words to his wife on their first night

We are married and he has full rights on me but still he is ready to wait for me.

I saw him lowering his gaze slowly and before he could get up from bed I held his hand making him look into my eyes.

"I want us to become one" and i confessed looking directly into his eyes.


Here you go with the first chapter kaisa laga???? teek tha ya bura jo bi ho bathana zarur kyuki agar bathaoge nahi tho mujhe patha kaise chelega heheheee please do say me whether should i continue it or not am waiting so be quick

INDEX :

PART 1 - PG 1

PART 2 - PG 10

PART 3 - PG 16

PART 4 - PG 27

PART 5 - PG 37

PART 6 - PG 68

PART 7 - PG 76

PART 8 - PG 95

PART 9 - PG 105

PART 10 - PG 120

LINK TO THREAD 2 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4638074


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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is NICE...cant wait to read further :P continue soon please and thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Are han
Jarur continue kro

Story achi lg rhi h

Wat all i could say
But nice concept
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...new ff of urs...good...⭐️.
Manan r already married... That's interesting...
They know each other since childhood.
The first update was nice.👏
Looking forward to read it.
PM me for this also.😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
waiting to read next part
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow...thats awesome...
starting is so nice n lovely...
n u written it very beautifully...
waiting fr the next parts eagerly...
tysm fr the pm...plz continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Acha hai..i like it continue but only if u promise that u would give same time u used to give on writing love is my life..do u know what i mean..i hope this doesn't burden u and u stop writing the old one for a new one but overall i just luved it..its totally up to u now if u can handle this much hardwork..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome manan as husband n wife is awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations ypu have started new ff...👏
And coming to the story as usual it was unique and awesome... I loved it...
Update faster waiting for next part...
Thank you for PM..
Take care...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start.
Looking forward to the story to unfold.
Thanks for pm.
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