MaNan FS chapter 5 B UPDATED ||COMPLETED|| - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update waiting for manans meet
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchi116

Nice update waiting for manans meet




you read it...i told not to read😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Palchinn

My 200th post.. 😃
Res...


Unres..
Pics were there na 😲 where did the chapter go all of a sudden?? 😕


all were not there...so i deleted the chapter😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: manan_rocks



all were not there...so i deleted the chapter😭




Ohh i dont know how to upload pics .. I would hav pakka helped you otherwise 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Loving ur story.
Keep it up. 👍🏼
Thanks for update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
chapter 4 A

in nandini's room:
Nandini was standing in her room which was a total mess...all clothes were thrown here and there...some were on the hangers whereas some were thrown on the bed...in short it was looking like a tsunami had just hit her room but the only difference was that in tsunami there is dust and water but here it was clothes and only clothes!



After trying a lot of dresses nandini was finally ready.she wore a red anarkali as red was maniks favourite colour and left her hair open as manik loved it that way.nandini glanced at her watch and it said 5pm.she quickly grabbed her car keys and drove towards her destination.

in manik's room:

manik also got dressed up and was sitting on his couch with his laptop.from ages manik was making unsuccessful attempts to find nandinis facebook profile or instagram but he could not find it due to insufficient info as there were thousands and thousands of nandini on facebook.but today as manik got more info about nandini he called the hospital and somehow managed to get her facebook and instagram accounts.

he read her profile and was quite impressed by it.then he started checking the pictures...he saw many pictures of nandini with a boy whose face was tagged as aryaman...this irked manik.

manik's POV:
"this boy aaryamna ye to her pic me ha nandu k saath dekho to kaise chipak ke khada ha thoda door nai khada ho sakta ha kya...kamina kahika...aur iss pic me dekho to kaise meri nandu ko hug kar raha h...chipku"



"ye to dekho zara ye gale haath kyu daal rakha h...apna haath apne paas nai rakh sakta kya...iske to haath hi kaat dene cahie...huh...bada aaya haath rakhne wala"


aryaman's comment:
very beautiful and pretty...just looking gorgeous

"wah kya lag rahi h nandu...par pic me usko kyu tag kiya hg...aur to aur dekho to gadhe ne comment kya kiya h...very beautifurl and pretty ...just looking gorgeous...pagal ho gaya ha kya mujhe to iske irade bilkul theek nai lagrahe ha"


"iska profile check karte ha..."
"doctor haa impressive is k qualifications to boahut achhe ha ...dikhta bhi handsome h...uhhh i just hate him"

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"are yaar iske itne saare likes aur comments...lagta ha paise de kar likes aur comments karvata h...huh..."




"drunk us...baki sare pics kya kam the aab yeh bi aagaya...isme bhi cipakraha h sala...yeh doctor nai fevicol lagta ha...gadha! "



"aur ye kya is ne nandini ke timeline par post kiya ha...

aryaman posted:
you are very beautiful and pure soul...god bless you always...love you take care and happy journey...


"lagta ha nandini k india ane k pehele ka ha...aur ye kya likh diya ha isne..."




aryaman's comment:
miss u lot...love you.

"love you...what do you mean by love you aise kaise likh sakta ha ye aur to aur heart emoji bhi h...uhhh...kuch bhi...aur photo bhi dali h...oh god!!"
"aur isme to nandini ka bhi comment ha..."

nandu's comment:
aww i will miss u take care and love u too...


"ye dono kya love you love you kar rehe ha pakka pagal ho gaye ha kahi ye nandini ka boyfriend to nai...nai manik aisa nai hosakta ha think positive everything will be all right and moreover this aryaman is in USA now so ye kabab me haddi nai bansakta!"thinking this manik consoled himself.


manik looked at the watch"shit yaar 5:15 hogaya abi nai niklonga to late ho jaunga ...jaldi karna padega...late hogaya to nandini se sunna padega"thinking this he quickly got up and rushed towards his car.
Edited by manan_rocks - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
So the pics are visible now 😛
I read the chapter previously before u could remove it.. And i read it now as well 😃

So Manik is checking out Nandini's profile.. 🤣 his expressions on seeing pics..haha.. Damn funny ...

I suppose this is not the complete chapter.. Eagerly waiting for their not so official dinner date 😛

Update faster.. !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79

awesome update...

loved it so much...

loving the jealous manik...his hatred towards aryaman for saying ily is just too hilarious...

waiting for them to meet again...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hiii...pragya this was super... First that nandu's room... It really resembles tsunami... Then lover boy checking out nandu's profile... Damn those pics... Captions...and likes... Jealous manik...hehehe that line... Kya paise dekhar likes kiye something,.. That WS hilarious and one more hilarious dialogue... Kya ye donon love you love you game khel rahe hai... That was superb...continue soon...thanks for the pm...take care stay blessed

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