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Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Mr. Friend... What's this yaar... Poore Hindi ka sarsaraahat... Phadphadaahat... Jagmagaahat... Chidchidaahat...damn ham sacchi paagal ho jaayenge... Pls na itne Hindi sehn nahi hote plss thora English chaayiye... Ek baat kahe... Pls aapki other stories hai na vaise hi isse bhi continue karo...prologue was superb...interesting... And what not ye bhali chadaana and all its like what's going on??
Continue soonish... Take care stay blessed... Aur haan pray for me too

hello MISS FRIEND😊
yooo vicky in NVYA style😆
usne bhi mukti ko hindi sikhai thi to maine socha mai tum logo ko sikhau😉
wo ladki hoke etni mehanat to mai ladka etta to kr rhi skta hu na😛
arre es bar hindi se kam chala lo
agle part me mix aayega
HINGLIX
happy
and take care yourself
others darr jaogi bhooth se
hahahhaah
just kidding yr
tc
bye

vicky😛

Originally posted by: kitkat5756

Omg !!!!!! Superb starting !!!!!!!!!! Bohot maza aya aya parne mein ... Vicky yaar tussi great ho !!!! Seriously it was amazing !!!!!! Superb Wala update thi !!!!!! Awesome tresome !!!!!! Ok do continue will be waiting to read more aur humara hero ka grand entry !!!!! Plz do continue

thanku thanku yr
u also make me feel good by your comment
in next part till evening your hero entry marega with bang
u wait and watch
and don't forgot to like and comment
thankx yr once again
😛

Originally posted by: iqra286

Awww yr dt was seruxly scary n horrible 😃 hondi lang was perfect bt plzz use eng to 😃 bt kn ds story where is manik n when he will kum ?? Update soon 😊

omg u r sacred
abhi to starting hai
aage abhi to full movie baki hai
okay from next time
i will give INGLIS. happy now
next in evening

Originally posted by: CROCKOMICHI

Intresting prolouge

thanku yr😛

Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome prologue...

loved it so much...

its hard to understand some of the hard words...cause hindi is not my 1st, 2nd or 3rd language that i speak at home...

but could you add in brackets some of the hard words in english like sardar and mombatti and so on...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

thanku thanku yr

sure from next time i will write hard words in english
u will not get any problem from next time
promise
now happy
and keep supporting
thankx once again

vicky😊

Originally posted by: Alisha_Seth

It is very interesting!!

thanku yr 😊

Originally posted by: Myra_parthholic

hey Frnd! Superb starting. Loved it. But plz yar itna shudh Hindi m mat likho plz. The storyline is awesome. I loved the starting. Let's ses how the story turns out to be! Thanks for PM, Continue super soon. Love Myra

thankx yr
from next time it will be Hinglis
u will not get any problem then
okay😊

Originally posted by: cutypie04

Interesting prologue

continue soon

thanku yr
evening tak wait 😊

Originally posted by: epshitatabassum

Interesting

I am waiting for manan

thanku yr
next part surly manan come😊

Originally posted by: manan_eku

Its just amazing Bhai

I am just loving it

It so really wonderful

Thanks from the pm

Continue soon

Love you Bhai

Ekta

thankx doll
evening u will get part 2
take care 😊