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@_RocK_StaR_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: soothu
Bhai...waiting for update

yeah i will soon update it yar😊

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_RocK_StaR_

@_RocK_StaR_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: softysakshi
Arey...banner dekh kr kse decide kru..??
OS hai n...so post it jaldi jaldi...horror...dar lagta hai...but read krn m ksa dar...dekhne pr it scared us...
So overall...u should post it jaldi se

hey
yeah i will update today

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_RocK_StaR_

@_RocK_StaR_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sharon.babu
a horror OS...
i would love to read it...
I'm sure it will be amazing as all your other works...
creative and unique...
can't wait to read it...
keep up the good work and continue soon...

thankx yr for support
u always encourage me
really thanku yr dil se
i hope my this work is also impress u

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Ammu

@Entwined_Fates

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Mr. Friend... What's this yaar... Poore Hindi ka sarsaraahat... Phadphadaahat... Jagmagaahat... Chidchidaahat...damn ham sacchi paagal ho jaayenge... Pls na itne Hindi sehn nahi hote plss thora English chaayiye... Ek baat kahe... Pls aapki other stories hai na vaise hi isse bhi continue karo...prologue was superb...interesting... And what not ye bhali chadaana and all its like what's going on??
Continue soonish... Take care stay blessed... Aur haan pray for me too

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Mamiza

@kitkat5756

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Omg !!!!!! Superb starting !!!!!!!!!! Bohot maza aya aya parne mein ... Vicky yaar tussi great ho !!!! Seriously it was amazing !!!!!! Superb Wala update thi !!!!!! Awesome tresome !!!!!! Ok do continue will be waiting to read more aur humara hero ka grand entry !!!!! Plz do continue

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iqra286

@iqra286

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Awww yr dt was seruxly scary n horrible 😃 hondi lang was perfect bt plzz use eng to 😃 bt kn ds story where is manik n when he will kum ?? Update soon 😊

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

awesome prologue...

loved it so much...

its hard to understand some of the hard words...cause hindi is not my 1st, 2nd or 3rd language that i speak at home...

but could you add in brackets some of the hard words in english like sardar and mombatti and so on...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Myra

@Farheen_siddqui

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

hey Frnd!
Superb starting. Loved it.
But plz yar itna shudh Hindi m mat likho plz.
The storyline is awesome.
I loved the starting. Let's ses how the story turns out to be!
Thanks for PM,
Continue super soon.
Love
Myra