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Manan Hatred and revenge but where is love?
Character sketch:
Nandini murty: she is an orphan and is older than rishab. Has a golden heart, beautiful and is from a middle class family. Nandini is good with those who makes a place in her heart and bad with those who try to act smart with her. She plays veena and wants to become a famous singer like her amms.
Manik malhotra: short tempered, handsome and only heir of malhotra industries. Girls go gaga over him but he doenst believe that there is such thing as love and thinks its only attraction and greed due to the separation between his parents when he was very young. He used to crave for attention when his parents had a separation. After sometime he got fab 5 as his family where he shares his sorrows and his good times. He is the lead singer and plays guitar in fab 5.
Harshad saxena: handsome, rich spoilt brat and brother of aliya. He wants to break fab 5. He thinks they snatched his sister from him. In his hatred he even lost his sister due to which they don't even talk a lot. He used to have an inseparable bond with aliya. Is an orphan and has 50% shares in saxena industries.
Aliya saxena: She is smart, good-looking and sister of harshad saxena. She is a fashion diva also known as a fashionista. She is one in a million that what every one calls her. She has a crush on manik but never told him. harshad used to share a inseparable bond but later she gets fed up with his evil plans of breaking fab 5 and then they just greet each other once in a while. Plays piano in fab 5 and if anyone comes in her bad books she makes sure there life becomes hell.
Nyonika malhotra: mother of manik malhotra. She is a negative and an evil character. Had a separation with mayank malhotra. She is good looking and young. Greedy women who uses people to get what she wants. Trustee of space.
mayank malhotra: father of manik malhotra. He is handsome and holds a charming personality. Had a separation with nyonika. Lives in pune away from manik and nyonika but is in contact with manik. Owner of malhotra industry.
Rishab murty: younger brother of nandini murty. He is from a middle class family and handsome. He can speak and doesn't get any attacks.
Ashlok murty: "handsome and chacha of nandini and rishab. He is their guardian and looks after them. He is from a middle class family. Brother of Mohin Murty who is dead and was father of nandini and rishab"
Sanjana murty: beautiful and chachi of nandini and rishab murty. Wife of ashlok murty. From a middle class family and can do anything for her family's happiness. She was cousin of nandini's and rishab's mother akshita murty"
Dhruv vedant: a shy and quiet soul. Never comes between other people's matters. Maniks best buddy and every member of fab 5 gives him extra attention. Plays guitar and is another member of fab 5.
Cabir dhawan: a prankster and drummer. Handsome rich and spoilt brat. Best friend of manik and other members of fab 5. believes love is a waste of time and shouldn't be involved in.
Mukti vardhan: a prankster like cabir. Everyone describes cabir and mukti as evil twins. She plays electrical guitar. Friends with fab 5. If anyone becomes her enemy it's like there worst nightmares coming true. Doesn't believe in love and thinks as bullshit.
Navya naveli: beautiful and intelligent girl. Has a golden heart and always helps people. Even if someone says something to her she doesn't retaliate. Rich and modern. A drama queen and a prankster.
Abhimanyu thakur: family friend of murty's. He has a secret crush on mukti but never dared to admit it. He is handsome, rich and always tries to bring smilies on people's faces. Only heir of thakur industries.
Shahid agarwal: a shy and reserved guy. Hates fab 5. Rich but lives in a flat like a middle class family due to some family issues.
Soha khanna: a girl who can go in any extend to get what she wants. Hates people who messes with her but after coming to S.P.A.C.E her life gets twisted and she regrets coming to a college like this. She is closely related to aryaman. Rich and pretty.
Aryaman khurana: a guy who is rich, handsome but a spoilt brat. Believes girls are for fun but after coming to S.P.A.C.E his life changes and he gets a better view of what is life and to live it to the fullest.
Pandit trilok chaurasia: a pandit a complete mystery that what everyone calls him. His character will be revealed later in the story.
Do you want me to continue this story? Plz drop your views in the comment . Guys if got good response I will post the first chapter.

Character sketch was amazing. Seems to be an interesting and different story. Continue soon.eagerly waiting for chapter 1.thanks for pm.

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Character sketch was amazing. Seems to be an interesting and different story. Continue soon.eagerly waiting for chapter 1.thanks for pm.

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In was a rainy night. Raindrops were continously falling on the wet concrete ground where a soulless body was walking without any destination.
Tears brimmed in the poor souls eyes even though fought alot to not let the tears come out but it still started flowing, the pain was no where to dissolve and it came out as tears. Eyes were red as blood, face pale as a ghost it seemed like blood was taken out of the poor soul who barely couldn't even walk. Unable to bare any more torture that the body was giving to the poor soul due to the constant crying and walking she fell down on her knees and started crying loudly and starting thinking of what happened an hour ago.
Flashback:
A girl entered in a decorated garden. She was wearing a white gown which had netted sleeves that clutched to her arms. Her gown was showing her perfect curves and the white high heeled shoes went perfect with the dress. She had light makeup on and studs in her earlobes, ring in her left hand ring finger, a bracelet on the same arm and a pendant on her neck that rested on her collar bone. She looked no less then an angel.
The girl took tiny steps and stood in the middle of the garden and was surrounded with glowing fireflies. She looked up at the sky finding the stars shinning brightly to which she smiled hugely.
She looked around finding no one and not having any option started calling someone
"Manik " that was the only name that was echoing in the garden. Waiting after five to ten mins she got frustrated and started to leave when she felt someone's hand on her wrist to which her face started glowing and the fireflies glowed brighter. She turned around with a jerk and hugged him as tight as possible.
"Manik" she took the name as a prayer. After few minutes of nandini constantly hugging him.
Manik: "Nandini"
Nandini put her index finger on his lips and nodded her head in a negative indicating him to not say a single word. For some reason nandini was feeling negative vibes since morning she had a feeling of something bad is going to happen and maniks arms always gave her the peace and solace so Not having any option manik stayed like that.
Nandini after fifteen minutes started to part away from him getting enough of the never ending silence. She looked at manik lovingly and started to decrease the distance between him and smashed her soft pouty lips with his rough lips. Manik was taken aback by the sudden bold nandini that he was experiencing but later on responded with equal fervor. Nandini was sucking his lower lip while manik sucked her upper lip. After getting enough of her upper lip manik swapped there lips and now manik was nibbling on her lower lip and nandini was sucking and licking his upper lip. Manik after nibbling her lower lip bit it to which nandini gasps and clutched his shirt collar tightly. Manik entered her mouth and started exploring each and every part of her mouth not leaving a single spot untouched. Nandini moaned with pleasure with her tongue fighting with his for dominance. Finally the soul searing kiss ended that seemed like eternity both were looking at each other with passion but then something struck maniks mind which made manik to move that even nandini got out of the trance and looked at him in confusion.
Nandini: "maanik"
Manik looked at her and then remembered each and every moment which he spent with her and then remembered something to which he smirked
Manik: "Nandini...you are such a fool i mean like seriously"
Nandini : "what do you mean?"
Manik got out of nandini's arms and stood in two three steps away from her. Nandini eyes widened with shock and looked at manik.
Manik had a smirk that was not leaving his lips for a second: "you are such a fool you took me as granted you thought I really loved you and was dieing for you right"
Nandini was baffled not getting anything she was just looking at him shocked
Manik: "you thought I love you...do you know love doesn't even exist in my dictionary it's all bullshit...and all of this what I did with you was a part of a BET"
Nandini: "whattt?"
Manik: "yes a bet...you know I have girls around me then why would I go for a commoner like you? "
Nandini had tears in her eyes but composed herself: "you are joking right...you are just pulling my leg or something...you can't do this to me"
Manik: "Acha...This is reality...you are so naive darling...but nah...This is not a joke...it is the bitter and ugly truth of your life" he evilly laugh
Nandini: "Why? Why did you do this to me you monster? I changed your from a monster to a human and thought I succeeded but nooo...you proved me wrong. Why?"
Manik: "as i said before it was a BET... It was just a bloody bet! Or you think i will ever fall for a stupid, old fashioned commoner like you? In your dreams baby! Have you ever even seen your self in the mirror?? I bet not, because then you might have just understood the difference between your class and mine!! Your just a bloody nobody for me. And trust me if it weren't for the bet, then i might have not even noticed your presence in this college cause you know afterall i have so many better, hot and sexy options waiting for me, but just because of this stupid bet i had to stay away from my sweethearts for so many days, but now not any more as the bet is over and even my work with you! And one more thing nobody nobody can ever change me Got That So not that's clear it's a goodbye forever MISS COMMONER!! ."
Manik bidding a goodbye to nandini left her there and then leaving a crying, shattered and heartbroken nandini behind who just fell on her knees sobbing hard, right in the middle of nowhere. Her mind was clouded with mixed emotions - she was feeling betrayed. it was for the first time she had given her everything to a guy with open arms, she had trusted him, and all she got in return was betrayal! He played with her he used her for a damn bet! She was hurt thinking that her first love, her kiss, her first night, everything was stolen from this guy who intended to do nothing but use her, she was hurt beyond repair ! She was angry for letting herself drown in this emotion, for letting herself give to everything he asked for, for believing in him, for thinking that this man could love her the same way she did.
She somehow composed herself and started to walk like a defeated soulless death body.
Flashback end

Wow update...

Awesome update. Such an emotional one.the way u penned nandini's state was mindblowing.manik has to pay hard to seek nandini's apology. Manan's convo was well scripted.if possible make nandini's character so strong to face manik. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.