TWIST WALA LOVE Ch-22 PG-29 Family Gala Time uptd 7th dec 16 - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey update was awsome
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Hi friends,

Thanks alot for my lovely readers who commented n gave few valuable comments n suggestions will conifer evrything... It really means alot to us... Am very glad by your love... Thanks for liking my story...

Silent readers pls guys for now I am updating the chapter but from next chapter if I dnt get enough of comments il stop writing the story.. Coz it really hurts v give 3000 words ka long long update n u guys dnt even bother to spare a min to comment pls do comment guys... It really means alot... Pls if u want me to continue my story pls do comment n like...

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Chapter-21 WHEN THE FIREFLIES GLOWED

Nandu was still in shock by soha hug so she dint reciprocate for the hug n was lost in her thoughts

Nandu POV
Wat is hpng suddenly soha hugged me ? Is evrything alright with soha may b
Suddenly her thoughts broke when she heard soha talk

Soha: happy Diwali nandu
Nandini: tha... Thanks soha n wish u the same (still in dilemma n shocked hearing nandu)

Evry body were still in shock with sudden change in soha behaviour except one soul who is jus standing n grinning like a kid watching the duo.. None other than The Manik Malhotra whose happiness have no boundaries seeing soha hugging nandu.. Suddenly reality hit Manik n he realise y am so much happy if soha accept nandu.. She is jus a mere Frnd like evryone n was so special that this stupid smile is not leaving my face

His heart screams "may b thr is something something n whistles
His mind "nothing nothing"
His heart "something"
His mind "nothing"
His heart "nothing
His mind "something"
N his heart screams "something something"

Cabir shook Manik n says bhai tuh haas Kyun raha hai? R u not shocked seeing soha being over friendly suddenly with Nandini

Manik: ah Cabir it's okay nah if she s being friendly anyways aab hum sab frnds hai so let's soha also accept it n when she accepted wat is UR pblm ( n glares)

Cabir: okay fine aise ghur maat I rest my case

Manik give him u better do tt look n turns to see soha n nandu

Soha: okay Nandini I kw u must b wondering wat is sudden change in my behaviour

Nandini jus nods her head in yes

Soha: it's jus tat u kw I realise u are very sweet n aab tum meri dosth ki smile ki wajah ban sakthi ho tho I thought y not give this new friendship a chance

Manik eyes popped out hearing dost ki smile he thought aab yeh soha pitvayegi mujhe

Nandini: dosth which dosth

Soha: dosth woh waha hai NA n points her hand towards Manik
When Manik bends his head n thinks am gone aab n was wiping his sweat on forehead
N soha slowly moves her hand to alya

Soha: woh aloo she is very precious to all of us like our small sister.. Wat evr hpnd uske baad I nvr get any chance to thank u ya may b u can say I nvr tried so I thought this Diwali y not purani baate bhul ke y not give new start to new bond

Nandini: she smiled broadly n nodded her head

Nandini: yes sure soha y not I would love to be UR Frnd

N both hug each other n looking at them evryone smile broadly
Specially Manik who was now In relief but he kw soha is gonna tease him in evry possible but for now he chucked all the thoughts n jus wanted to go with the moment

After they broke hug evryone hugged each other n wished happy Diwali while alya dhruv were blushing looking at each other n had a friendly hug... Manan jus hand shaked n wished each other...

Nandu n abhi introduced Fab5 to family rishab, chacha n chachi was impressed by seeing evryone n specially Manik n said tum nah bhilkul ShahRukh Khan lag rahe ho

Manik blushes listening dat n says thanks aunty..

Chachi: meh nandu ki chachi hoon uska matlab sirf yeh theen hi mere bache nahi hai tum sab bhi mere bache jaise ho u all can call me chachi too..

Fab5 smiled broadly n hugged chachi saying thanks chachi.. They all r broken kids n they nvr experienced mothers love seeing chachi n the way she was being so loving with them touched their hearts n all have tears in thr eyes which they tried hiding but nandu saw n had tears in her eyes too.. Abhi kw thr inner turmoil so was smiling them the way they craving for mothers love.. N he made sure they would experience it they chachi...

Evryone broke the hug n chachi chalo bacho aab aur emotional nahi let's njoy aaj Diwali hai bhai so tum log maze karo meh dinner ki preparations dekhthi hoon
All nodded n chachi left with chacha...

Evryone handed over the gifts to dazzlers n nandu family but Manik dint give his gift to nandu as he wana give her in private n was little hesitant to give infront of evryone so he remained silent..

Navya:guys it's getting bored lets play something nah

Cabir: aur madhubala hum bache nahi hai ki games khele

Alya: I second Navya v getting bored lets do something fun

Cabir: lo ek kafi tho dusri shuru hogayi

Mukti: chup Cabu it would b fun lets play nah

Navya: okay so aab all r interested lets play jo kisiko bhi interest nahi hai UR free to step aside n watch us play n smriks seeing Cabir

Soha: okay but wat shall v play

Navya: hide n seek

Cabir: lo iski tarah iska game bhi bakwaas hi hai n hits his forehead

Alya: yar Cabu v used to play in childhood y not refresh our childhood memories by playing this again

Mukti n soha: v second alya it would fun guys lets play

Manik n Nandini were jus stealing glances n smiling at each other...

Navya: nandu tum kuch Bol Kyun nahi Rahi UR in nah

Nandini: of course if I say as if my madhubala vl spare me
When dhruv n abhi says v second nandu
N all laugh seeing Navya frown

Navya: acha okay now rishu tuh sab ko pakadega n v hide now count till 10

Rishab started counting n evryone run to hide themselves

N as v say when destiny wants something some way or the other it's gets us together same way unknowingly

Cabir n Alya landed at same place behind the food counter hiding themselves

While abhi n mukti landed up in abhi rooms cupboard

Soha n dhruv landed in kitchen

Navya hide herself behind the door

While running Manik saw nandu n asks her come with him

Manik: nandu come with me
Nandini: with u y
Manik: woh come nah il tel
Nandini: area y tel me
Manik: woh woh UR zip is open isilye
Nandini: wat zip ...dnt play Manik I kw u wantedly saying it coz am not coming with u

Manik sighs thinking this girl wnt listen look n says

Manik: fine dnt Listen to me u have mole behind on ryt side back evn afta this u dnt wanna listen to me then fine bye

N was about to leave when nandu catches his hand n he nods his head n takes her near a tree

Manik: wait here il cal someone n went to search but he dint find anyone as evryone r hiding

He comes back to nandu while she just stands covering her back to tree

Manik: no one is thr think evryone r hiding
Nandini: shit tho aab kya Kare
Manik: u can ask me for help if u want
Nandini have no other option so she sighs n says

Nandini: Manik pls help me nah
He jus smiles n nandu turns her back towards Manik... He slowly lifts his hands from her hands rubbing them with his fingers n sending her a shiver in her body..
He slowly raises his hands to her dori n takes the knots of it while his hand slowly touch her bare back which she shivers n clutches the tree tightly.. Seeing her gasp Manik jus looses his senses n he slowly instead of tieing the dori slowly moves his hand to tough the mole.. Nandu heart starts racing n the breathe becomes uneven her heart starts thumping.. N her throat got dried... He slowly caresses the mole

Nandu can't help but a small moan escaped her mouth

Nandu: maaanikkk n tats it for him he looses it n bend down to kiss her mole he slowly bends his face... She can feel his hot breathe on her bare back n she starts shivering n she is having butterflies inside her stomach dng salsa dance.. She can't bear this torture anymore n was feeling weak on her knees n was about to fall when she hold Manik hand from front for support...

Nandu POV:
Her minds wants to stop but her heart all ready over powered her mind n the proximity is driving her crazy.. She herself is not understanding wat is hpng with her.. At a side she is liking it n same way she feels this is not at all ryt

Scene changes to lawn

Rishab goes n finds evryone navya sees him n stats running n dashes to cabir n both shout on each other seeing dat rishab finds them while alya slowly moves away n runs inside the house...

Next all together move to find others n moved inside the house n when they find soha n seeing them approaching dhruv slowly moves back n soha does not realise dat n she get caught n she turns to see dhruv but he escapes from thr...

They search alot but r not able to fing Mukbhi n Manan

Mukbhi in abhi cupboard

Mukti:tumhe bhi Sara ghar meh yahi place mila kya?

Abhi: dis is not fair yeh mera room hai so it's my cupboard so I came to hide mujhe kya pata tum bhi mere peche yaha avogi

Mukti: oh hello kon tere peche peche aaye bfr u am already hiding here

Abhi: whatever still this is my room

Mukti: okay fine il go

N she starts moving outside while abhi pulls her behind n she bangs to his chest n both share a cute eye lock

Mukti: kya kar rahe ho leave me

Abhi: acha okay sorry now thr is no use of moving from here ul b caught so stay silent til they find us
Mukti tries releasing her hands suddenly she moves abhi hands n by mistake the dresses hanged in the cupboard fall on them

Mukti: arghhh kya hai yeh n she starts removing the dresses from them

Abhi jus keeps staring at her forgeting with the dresses n her cute frowns n pouts making her look more adorable

Mukti suddenly feel his gaze n look towards him n flicks her fingers n say

Mukti: hello help karo y r u staring at me

Abhi does not talk anything n moves his hand to her face n removes the hair strands tat are disturbing her face n tuck behind her ear both are looking in the eyes without breaking eye lock

Here Suddenly rishab rmbrs that they dint check abhi rooms n moves towards his room n checks evrywr but they dnt find anyone suddenly Navya signals cupboard n rishab opens the cupboard to see Mukbhi lost in each other eyes jus staring at each other

They jus jerked on hearing evryone scream n abhi blushes after coming out of trance...

N all move out to lawn to search for dhurlya n Manan

here dhruv escapes from kitchen n comes near the stairs n hide behind them wen he feels some one is standing behind him n gets shock to see Alya...

Alya: oh dhruv its u mujhe laga koyi aur hai

Dhruv: ha its me dnt worry hope they wnt catch us

they both were talking little loud n dint realise some standing behind them n alya sees n signals dhruv to turn

Navya: dnt worry dhruv v wnt catch u n she smirks

rishab n all laugh n finally move to find Manan to lawn

Then suddenly some one cokes n climbs on abhi back n scream saaalleee (who is dat new entry koyi idea )

Scene shifts to Manan behind tree

Here nandu was lost in his touch n Manik was about to kiss her mole n was about to place his lips on her mole when they hear someone scream saallleee

N both gain their senses while nandu was full red which blush n Manik was jus hiding his face with embarrassment thinking wat he has done may b she dint like it

he was jus looking at her face with embarrassment but she jus lifts her head n jus blushes looking at Manik jus runs inside the house
Manik jus looks her and smriks seeing her blush... N jus muttered to himself tomato imaging her face turn dark shade of crimson...

Scene changes to Lawn:

Abey Saale swagath nahi karoge humara

Abhi: abbey niche utrega tho karunga nah swagath

Guy got down n abhi hugged him saying good to see u bro

Guy: good to see u too finally back to my best buddy

Everybody were looking at the buddy duo when abhi turns towards evryone n introduce the new guy

Abhi: so guys he is my best buddy, my bhewakoof stupid dost Madhyam Singhania

Maddy: abey yaar u kw I dnt like dat name tujse kuch nahi hoga let me introduce myself

Hi guys am Maddy as abhi said uska bhewakoof buddy...

N evryone says hi n hand shake while dhruv n Cabir jus give him a brotherly hug

Maddy: tumhari pyaari muchkin kaha hai?

Abhi: yahi kahi hogi n yaar uske samne maat Bol mu thod Degi Teri

Maddy: I kw yaar

Meanwhile Manik come thr n sees evryone n abhi asks did he see nandu while he jus smiles remembering the previous encounter with her.. N nods his head in no

Abhi introduces maddy to Manik n they shake thr hands

Manik: meh andar PaNi pike aatha hoon n moves inside to check on nandu

Nandu runs towards the kitchen n drinks PaNi n was still breathing heavily n was blushing in deep crimson n was lost in her thoughts thinking wat jus hpnd

Manik thinks her to b in her room n moves upstairs n see a room wr in the corner a lanterns shining n room was dark only the lantern is giving a bright light.. He slowly opened the door fully n was lost in the aroma of strawberry n walks inside he sees a big photo frame in the centre of a family three kids n two elders

Manik immediately guessed it was nandu family n it's her childhood photo he was admiring the photo n around tat big photo frame thr were small frames in which nandu different pics were thr few with dhruv Navya abhi rishab chacha chachi n few pictures of hers while eating icecream tongue out with cute antics.. Manik was adoring her pictures with a board smile...

N slowly moved towards her bed wr she had her parents pics on side table n a glass bottle was kept aside he just went n touched the bottle suddenly it started glowing...
It's started shining brighter than stars he was shocked to see n then understud that they are fireflies...
Fireflies started shining more brightly n he jus smiling seeing it but dint understand y they started shinning after he touched the bottle... N he heard some sound so he kept the bottle aside n took a gift wrapped from his pocket n kept it on centre of bed n left the room fastly

Here maddy comes to freshen up he does not find which room is abhi so he jus enters nandu room n sees her picture n understands its nandu room so he moves out

Meanwhile nandu moves to her room n sees a guy coming out of her room n gets confused thinking who is he?

N enters her room n she gets a shock seeing the fireflies glowing
She jus runs n picks up the bottle n thinks is it shinning coz of tat guy..

Matlab is it the time to find my true love.. N sits on the bed taking the her patents photo frame

Nandini: Amma r u seeing the fireflies r glowing.. Matlab my true love is some wr here is that the guy who jus left my room
N her happiness has no bounds n she was having happy years in her eyes dat it's time to find her true love like her Amma n Appa
N she keeps the photo aside n turns to leave when her fall on the gift wrap placed on bed she picks it up n sees on wrap its written from Manik

Nandini: Manik ka gift, matlab Manik bhi yaha aaya tha?
N even tat guy was also here in my room n nandu was confused
Aiyappa aab fireflies r glowing but coz of whom is it Manik or other guy


Aab kya hoga? Will nandu b able to find out her true love? Will she b able to find out who was it coz of whom the fireflies glow?

okay nw dnt kill me ...sorry ha i knw any of u didnt like maddy entry ..bt ff ka naam twist wala hei toh ...twist is imp na

m ready ur ande n tamartars

I kw guys am back with update very soon aab I need more comments n votes coz last time response was very less n am disappointed...
Thanks for my regular n lovely readers who commented n voted.. But guys next update only after I get more n more comments n votes..

Happy reading :))

Love
Pravallika aka PraNi :))
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update yaar...
o nandhu is confused now... hope she will be able to identify that her true love is manik...

find a partner for soha too... she is all alone without a partner...


thanks for the pm...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey.. can u plz pm me chap 20
Waiting for it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: riyaparo

Nice update
continue soon

ya vl continue

Thanks
Love you
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: absnads

awesome update yaar...

o nandhu is confused now... hope she will be able to identify that her true love is manik...

find a partner for soha too... she is all alone without a partner...


thanks for the pm...

ya v shall introduce some one in few chapters

Love you
Pravallika aka PraNi
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dishaag

Hey.. can u plz pm me chap 20

Waiting for it

chapter-20 is already posted dear... Note meh I wrote ring it was chapter-21 n the one I posted is continuation chapter-20 is on PH-18 do check

Love you
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dishaag

Hey.. can u plz pm me chap 20

Waiting for it

n buddy me if u want Pm

Love you
Pravallika aka PraNi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sry by mistake i wrote chap 20 but it was 21 n it is already posted
Awesome story
Read all the chapters at one go
Thank god it is differnt
U r good writer
Eagerly waiting for next chapters
Plz update soon

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