Manan OS-Knight in Distress and Damsel in shining armor - Page 3

Originally posted by: bashful_moon

Awesome and only one of its type.

Do write more.

hehhe totally loved it

Originally posted by: charanyaaj

Superb OS.
Loved it..
Cute manik n angry nandu! Smethg different.
Pls do write more like this

Wow

Originally posted by: jai18

OMG this has to be the best - hilarious - crazy manan os! God, nandu in the army and protecting the PM's son who is scared of cockroaches.. BAHAHAHAHAH

man this was so good! I can't imagine Nandini wearing a scowl :P and manik's cook is gay and madly in love with manik! Does Nandini know ;) xD Nandini is aware of floor's love and she successfully has been keeping it away from Manik😆Cook's love is to remain a secret if he wants to live long😉

Dude, u have to continue with this one.. At least make it 5 chapters in all :)I'm so sorry but I have no plans of continuing it.I planned it as an OS,so I don't think I have anything to write more on this.

And the best part was when you incorporated pehle nasha song into the scene! That was mad :)I madly love that song and wanted it to be a part of this story.Glad you liked its incorporation.

Originally posted by: sanviM

Wow

It was just awesome... it was too good

U brought a smile on my face girl

U should definitely write some more

Would love to read ur work

Thank you so much.I'm glad I could make you smile😊

just awesome...
beautifully penned...
Manan...
you are such a wonderful writer...
please do write more
would love to read your work

I love this! Where were you from such a long time?! This forum requires amazing writers such as you!

This manik is so differnt
this nandini is so amazing
and this os is so awesome
loved it
a very diff concept
beautifully written
and yea that pehla nasha..sarcasm at its peak
takecare

nice os