Manan OS-Knight in Distress and Damsel in shining armor

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jai18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

OMG this has to be the best - hilarious - crazy manan os! God, nandu in the army and protecting the PM's son who is scared of cockroaches.. BAHAHAHAHAH

man this was so good! I can't imagine Nandini wearing a scowl :P and manik's cook is gay and madly in love with manik! Does Nandini know ;) xD

Dude, u have to continue with this one.. At least make it 5 chapters in all :)

And the best part was when you incorporated pehle nasha song into the scene! That was mad :)

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Nikita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: manancraze
Oh god...I m...🤣🤣.
It was awesome... I was laughing like anything...
God...manik kitna cute hain...😳...cockroach and lizard se darta hain...😆Aur floor se romance...😆.Feeling pity for his cook...😉.
Nandini is army woman...that's something new and interesting.
Superb os...👏
Keep writing this kind of light hearted stuff.

I'm happy that I could make you laugh.I've always wanted to write a rough tough Nandini and a mushy Manik.I'm glad you liked it.

I'll write more whenever I've some new ideas.

Thanks😊

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Nikita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: vsk29
Aahh it was so blissful n can't miss the sarcasm!! So bad that it's an OS 😭 BT nevertheless it was awesomee!!! Concept was vry interesting n the writimg writing👏

Thank you so much for your kind words.I'm glad you enjoyed this story and my sarcasm😊

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Nikita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: shaswin
lovely update...

Thank you so much.Glad you liked it😊

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Nikita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Nice!

Thank you so much😊

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Nikita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: kyy_lover
OMGOMGOMGOMGOGMG!!!!!
That was like so AWESOME, AMAZING and totally MIND-BLOWING ⭐️
I loved your writing the sarcastic remarks and different portrayal of Manan😃
Amazing use of words loved every sentence 👏

It got over so soon😭😭, but i seriously loved this OS so different
Funny
Sarcastic(heights)Influence of Chandler Bing,you see😉
romance
Hate(tried to)
Sweet
Goofy
Cute
(i can keep going on) ...This is enough to make me dance around like monkey😆

Thank you soo much for lovely words😃I've always wanted to portray this kind of Manan.I'm so glad you enjoyed it as much as I loved writing it.

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Nikita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: urvisaini
Such an amazing os!
Loved it

I'm constantly smiling after reading this os
Thanks

Thank you so much for your kind words.I'm very happy to make you smile😊

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Nikita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: taani_tanu
Awsum OS.. LOVED IT. :-* :-)

Thank you so much.Glad you enjoyed it😊

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Nikita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sharon.babu
awesome Os...
so hilarious to see the different side of manik...so girly and scared...
loved it so much...
keep up the good work and continue soon...

Thank you so much.I'm glad you liked this different Manik..😊

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Nikita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: nandini-sb
Awesome. ...
Enjoyed manik romance with floor...
N felling pity for the chef n floor but nandini wins always doesn't she..
Now my baby"s enemies all those pathetic chairs ,tables ,lizards ,cockroaches be aware..
Nandini is here...phir bad me mat kehna ki warning nhi di😆

Thank you so much.I'm glad you liked Floor-Manik romance.Floor must be so happy to hav his love recognised😆

Nandini always wins when it comes to Manik.