#3 MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE NOTE & LINK TO THREAD 4 ON 148 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
I luved it man!! De parts were awsum .. No uh awsum .. Wht a story man ..daily kuch naya ... Plz continue soon .. Tunight ..plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
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nice update
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
U r doing an amazing work...m a new reader plz plz post d next part!!!
Edited by aanshibhagat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: shweta...

God!! Finally I completed reading this story...
. I think it took me more or else a week to complete it and indeed it was awesome serious wala awesome...
.I am literally in love with ur story and ur writing skills...
U portray each and every feelings emotions so beautifully na that even a simple thing sounds so good... Right from the starting this story shows that how manan is forever and humesha and it cannot die and manik nandini can never be separated...
There were so many literally so many hurdles in their life but they overcome everything and after crossing each problem their relationship became more strong... I think the their first break up was coz of manik's insecurities that nandini will leave him and then it was coz of nandini's security that may be the thing which is between them is attraction though it was not a breakup still they became apart for sometime and then the biggest separation of 4 yrs god!! But honestly speaking that time manan were flooded with problems and they were too young to face it j mean they were just 15 man how could god do this to them firstly nandini's parents accident then malhotra's company being bankrupted then neyonika blackmailed manik to stay away from nandini in exchange of money and they the biggest pain for nandini was that manik left her without informing her and the way manik were saying his lines before going was so emotional...
The way nandini managed everything after his departure was splendid and surprising too and love to see fab4 navbhi and nandini's bonding seriously only the lucky ones get so nice friends then manik's comeback was so very surprising ekdum achank se and that soha thing was so irritating but its good that nandini had faith in him and her love and she knew that he is lying and atlast got to know the truth and the best part which we manan fans enjoys the most is manan romance seriously...
Manik is still not changed still he never looses an opportunity to tease her and make her blush and the best teasing section for me was kheer eating time hahha I seriously feel pity for nandini her face must be paining by all the time blushing thanks for writing such a beautiful story for us and sorry for writing such a long comment but I couldn't help myself
Plz update the next part soon
Waiting
And yeah if possible then do PM me


Hey thank you so much glad to know that you didn't feel bore and regarding looonnggg comment then sry kyu yar I tho love long comments so yes isi tharah lamba comment dena thank u once again
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Firstly congratulations on d new thread!
Thank u for d update...
It was amazingly good...
Such an emotional n cute update...
I simply loved it...
Thank u so much for giving us fab update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: acromantla

Hy..

I alwz try t like and post commnt but it doesnt get posted. So do not know whether this will get posted or not. I just want to tel that i love ur story. Its so beautifully written that u can live eac emotions.. I wish manik wil read the diary while nandu is sleeping.. I know its not right to read but u can like write on the frst page this diary belongs to maniks nandini and only manik have the right to read this without permission or sth... I jus wanhim to knw wat al she went thru from her point of view.. Jus saying. Nywys ty fr the regular update u r suc a swtheart to do that... I so hope ths wil gt posted... Fingers crossed.. Ty again


Thank god it got posted anyways thank you so much dear and yes I'll try to work on it but I guess manik has already learnt what all she went through in his absence but still if u want I'll try to elaborate.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: manandeeplove

❤️Truly this is one of d most beautiful blissful n emotional update i have ever read on manan...❤️


I literally had tears in my eyes when nandini confessed that she never slept coz she wanted to see him ,to touch him , to kiss him, to assure herself that is is all real...

Amazing yrrr...

Seriously take a bow girl👏

U r most beatiful writer when it comes to true love...

Its sooo pure...so serene...😊❤️

U know this is y i love ur story sooo much...

U r beyond awesome to portray true love...

They always had faith in each other no matter what situation is...

They always supported each other...

Both of them always care for each other...

They always keep their partner at its first place rather than himself / herself...

They chose happiness of partner over their sadness n pain...

They r sooo passionate ...for their love...

Both r very mature n always handled d situations nicely...

To fight for their love...
They always remained strong enough...

Bt then being a human being...

They also have dreadful fear of loosing each other...

Coz they had suffered a lot n experienced that pain n agony...

So its very obvious now ki they wanna cherish it every second...
As if to compensate for 5 yrs...
As if too assure ki its nt a dream...
And
Make sure to never let it go...

I just love all this...

This is definition of pure love for me ...n u always penned it down so beautifully...
Thats y i feel so connected...
Tysm dear for this...

Loads of love...
Stay blessed

PS congo for new thread...👏😊
U deserve many more


Thank you thank you and thank you am speechless this is one of the bestest compliment i have ever received thank you once again luv u so much 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
PART 153 :

Manik was smiling cutely pecking her forehead,cheek,nose and chin caressing her hairs at the same time.

It has been seven hours since she slept and he was lying in the same position holding her close and pecking her every now and then.

Nandu slowly stirs her head and her lips accidentally meets his. He smiles and brushes his lips on hers. She slowly opens her eyes only to close them again after hitting the reality.

MANIK : feeling better???

She nods her head like a baby and he quickly pecks her lips. She opens her eyes and looks into his eyes.

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : hmmm

NANDINI : woo and sees their position.

She bites her lower lip feeling very shy and closes her eyes tightly.

Her one hand was holding his collar while the other was on his waist. His one hand was on her stomach while the other held her hand near collar. Thier legs were entangled and couldn't figure out clearly who was lying on whom.

Manik smiles seeing her and kisses her cheek.

She slowly opens her eyes and frees his collar.

NANDINI : manikk

MANIK : ummm bolo na

NANDINI : uto na and turns her face blushing

He doesn't say anything and sits straight immediately surprising her.

She lies in the same position looking him.

MANIK : kyaa

She gets up and nods as nothing

MANIK : tum fresh hojao

NANDINI : hmmm

MANIK : hmm kya jao na

She gets up and goes into washroom silently. She comes out after some time and stands looking manik at door itself.

MANIK : aao na

She walks towards him and manik ye sab

He pulls her and makes her sit in his lap.

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : shhh

NANDINI : manik ye tum

MANIK : pehle mujhe apna kaam karne do phir baad main bath karthe hain

NANDINI : par

He takes a spoon of rice and makes her eat. She looks him silently without saying anything and eats happily making sounds. He smiles looking her and feeds her carefully treating her like a chotu baby. She takes another spoon and makes him eat too. They both silently feed each other looking into each others eyes wearing a constant smile all the while.

NANDINI : done

MANIK : hmmm acha suno

NANDINI : haa

MANIK : you are ok na

NANDINI : yesss perfectly alright

He smiles and kisses her hands.

NANDINI : manik tum ab kya karoge

MANIK : matlab

NANDINI : mujhe ab office jana hoga

MANIK : nandini wo

NANDINI : manik time kya hora mujhe kana banana hain patha nahi papa kya karre honge

Manik looks her smiling without blinking his eyes

NANDINI : kya hua tum aise kyu dekhre ho

MANIK : tumhe kana banani hain

NANDINI : haan

MANIK : well ab tho chaar bajre hain tho tum ab kana banake kya karogi

NANDINI : chaar kya chaar???

MANIK : its 4 PM miss moorthy

She widens her eyes and shouts loudly "what"

MANIK : shhh deere

NANDINI : manik tum kya kehre ho chaar kaise baj sak and stops recalling everything

She remains silent for sometime and manik whats wrong with you tumne mujhe sulaya kyu

MANIK : maine kaha sulaya tumhe tum khud so gayi thi na

NANDINI : manik bano math tumhe patha hain mujhe neendh kaise athi hain aur tum ne jaan buchke

MANIK : acha bas relax haan I wanted you to sleep tho bas isliye

NANDINI : manik I slept for so long tumne mujhe utaya kyu nahi aur

MANIK : chup I said na I wanted you to sleep isliye nahi utaya

She makes angry pout and tries to get up from his lap but he holds her tightly not allowing her to move even an inch

NANDINI : chodo mujhe

MANIK : look at me

NANDINI : nahi

MANIK : nandini

She looks him and kya hain

MANIK : kya hua

NANDINI : manik mujhe ab iss vakth office main hona chahiye tha par nahi main kya karri hoon aram se gar main baitri hoon

MANIK : nahi tum mere godh main baitri hoon

She glares him while he smiles and acha sry

She turns her face and makes faces angrily

MANIK : suno

NANDINI : mujhe kuch nahi sunni

He makes her look him and ek din office nahi jane se kuch nahi hoga

NANDINI : par manik

MANIK : nandini itne din baath alag thi aur ab baath alag hain ab main tumhare sath hoon aur mujhe tumhari sehath se zyada kuch bi important nahi hain

He holds her hands and tumhe jo bi karna hain tum karo par uske sath sath apna kayal rako

She kisses his hands and blinks her eyes as an assurance.

Knock knock knock

NANDINI : main dekhti hoon

MANIK : nahi ruko main dektha hoon

She sits on bed and he slowly walks towards door.

RAMU : saab wo mukthi betiya ne kaha ki wo log bahar jare hain aur wo sab kabir baba ke sath hi vapas ayenge

MANIK : teek hain ek minute

He takes the plates and gives to ramu.

Main kamre main hi hoon koyi aye tho mujhe batha na

RAMU : jee

Manik closes door and walks towards bed.

He sits beside nandu and looks her.

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : hmmm

NANDINI : main tho sori thi na tho tum kya karre the tumne ab thak nahaya kyu nahi

MANIK : madam zara yaad tho karo tum kis position main sori thi and raises his eyebrows

She looks down controlling her blush

MANIK : main bi tumhare sath sora tha isliye nahi nahaya

NANDINI : ummm tum jao jake thayar hojao

MANIK : kyu

NANDINI : kya kyu

MANIK : arey thayar hoke jana kidar hain

NANDINI : kayi bi nahi

MANIK : tho phir thayar hoke kya faida

NANDINI : manik jao jake nahalo

MANIK : arey par

NANDINI : jaaooo

MANIK : fine par tum math nahana

NANDINI : kyu

MANIK : ye shirt pe achi dikri ho na isliye and goes towards washroom smiling.

NANDINI : pagal and blushes

MANIK : sunayi dera hain mujhe

NANDINI : patha hain mujhe

He smiles but doesn't say anything

Nandu lays back on bed and ayyappa aaj pura ulta hi hora hain pura din main sogyi aur pehli baar bina nahaye kana kali aur ye sab kyu sirf aur sirf uss pagal ki vajah se huhhh and closes her eyes

MANIK : nandiniii

NANDINI : haaa

MANIK : mera towel dena zara main bulgaya

NANDINI : manik tum bache nahi ho

MANIK : jantha hoon

NANDINI : arggg darwaza tho kolo

MANIK : ek minute

NANDINI : looo

MANIK : hmmm and holds her hand

NANDINI : manik

MANIK : hmmm

NANDINI : kya karre ho

MANIK : towel lera hoon

NANDINI : manikkk

He was hiding behind door controlling his smile.

NANDINI : manikkk

No reply

Maniii and she was pulled inside the washroom.


Am sry am damn busy right now I'll update next parts as soon as possible till then keep liking and commenting aur haan keep smiling like aur comment na kare tho bi chelega par muskurana math boolna patha nahi mujhe bi na kya hojatha hain achanak huhhh..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Such an adorable update
Manik explained her so cutely that her health is the most important thing for him...

Loved it

Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
First one to comment
Nice update...nandini slept for 7 hrs that too in maniks arms
He cares for her alot...overall it was a fabulous update
Jaldi se do finish ur work and then continue soon
Eagerly waiting 😉
Take care 😛
Luv u 😊

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