God!! Finally I completed reading this story...
. I think it took me more or else a week to complete it and indeed it was awesome serious wala awesome...
.I am literally in love with ur story and ur writing skills...
U portray each and every feelings emotions so beautifully na that even a simple thing sounds so good... Right from the starting this story shows that how manan is forever and humesha and it cannot die and manik nandini can never be separated...
There were so many literally so many hurdles in their life but they overcome everything and after crossing each problem their relationship became more strong... I think the their first break up was coz of manik's insecurities that nandini will leave him and then it was coz of nandini's security that may be the thing which is between them is attraction though it was not a breakup still they became apart for sometime and then the biggest separation of 4 yrs god!! But honestly speaking that time manan were flooded with problems and they were too young to face it j mean they were just 15 man how could god do this to them firstly nandini's parents accident then malhotra's company being bankrupted then neyonika blackmailed manik to stay away from nandini in exchange of money and they the biggest pain for nandini was that manik left her without informing her and the way manik were saying his lines before going was so emotional...
The way nandini managed everything after his departure was splendid and surprising too and love to see fab4 navbhi and nandini's bonding seriously only the lucky ones get so nice friends then manik's comeback was so very surprising ekdum achank se and that soha thing was so irritating but its good that nandini had faith in him and her love and she knew that he is lying and atlast got to know the truth and the best part which we manan fans enjoys the most is manan romance seriously...
Manik is still not changed still he never looses an opportunity to tease her and make her blush and the best teasing section for me was kheer eating time hahha I seriously feel pity for nandini her face must be paining by all the time blushing thanks for writing such a beautiful story for us and sorry for writing such a long comment but I couldn't help myself
Plz update the next part soon
Waiting
And yeah if possible then do PM me