MaNan FF - I WILL MAKE YOU MINE U/P CHP 20 20/02 page73 - Page 45

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Happy new year to you too dear
Continue soon
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Originally posted by: aseelashah

Happy new year to you too dear
Continue soon


thank u sweetie...will update this weekend...

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hey eveyone,
here is the Glimpse of next chappy...

So many questions were running in her head ; How will he react?, Will he scold her or worse, shout at her? No, No, Manik won't shout on a kid but He had shouted on you too na Nandu...

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By the end she was literally sobbing and all the kids along with Nandini were shocked to see her like that...yes she was left at the door of orphanage but never in these 4 years she behaved or talked like that...

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Nandini was very happy and was feeling proud...proud? Why? Its just he is a good person why am I feeling proud? Huh..Nandu tu bhi naa...

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Guys the update will be published soon...loads of things to happen...


and i need a cover for my story...


will you make one for me? the best will be the covr and rest will be used in the story itself...


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Hello people...
As promised update is here and its very much long...I have given my 200% for this update...

No proof reading...



Chapter - 19

All were shocked would be an understatement. They were gaping at the little girl who was still confused that Why Mr. Lambu is not responding hehe and Manik was dumbfound, He didn't knew how to react. He has a bad history in handling kids and now is stuck.

Nandu on the other hand was confused and nervous at the same time. She didn't know why though , it was like an exam for her too. So many questions were running in her head ; How will he react?, Will he scold her or worse, shout at her? No, No, Manik won't shout on a kid but He had shouted on you too na Nandu...

And the little devil who was the actual reason of all these is still looking at him expectantly but getting no response she started shooting daggers at Mr. Lambu and even after that when Mr. Lambu didn't responded she did what in which she is an expert she pouted and started her drama...She is a big time drama queen and all knew this at orphanage still gave into her drama as she is little and super cute...

( Her name is Sneha and Sn will be used as her short form)

Sn - Bhagwan ji...she shouted looking at the sky as if Bhagwan ji is listening...And all looked baffled at her that why she is shouting suddenly but kids and Nandini have enough Knowledge about that so they just kept quite to have a great show...

Sn - Bhagwan ji please meri bat suno naa...ye jo Mr. Lambu hai naa..haa yahi jo mere samne itne lambe se khade hai...she pointed at Manik and all were silently laughing and adoring that how cute she is...and our bichara Manik was standing there trying to controlling his anger.

Sn - ye meri bat hi nahi sun rahe...koi meri bat nahi sunta hai...vo yoo wale bhaiya ne bhi nahi suni..mai to akeli hu naa..koi hai hi nahi mera jo sunega or manega...koi pyar hi nahi karta mujhse...mene kaha unse ke mujhe pick kro apni gaud mai but vo to dekh bhi nahi rahe mujhe...itni buri hu kya mai bhagwan ji?

By the end she was literally sobbing and all the kids along with Nandini were shocked to see her like that...yes she was left at the door of orphanage but never in these 4 years she behaved or talked like that...they thought it was her regular drama but she was actually asking answers for the almighty.

Manik's anger flew away when he saw the little angel sobbing and asking such questions. He knew how it feels to be alone. He instantly picked her up in his arms and embraced her tightly and Sneha too responded and hugged him as her life depends on him. Manik was crying silently whereas Sneha was crying aloud. Fab5 understood why h did that at first they were stunned of Manik's reaction but afterwards they understood how he felt and now they were sure Manik will connect to her and all the kids as his own.

They were never wrong Manik gently took her out of his embrace and kneeled down to her said -

M - Baby, idhar dekho...aap bure nahi ho...ap to bahut ache ho...see itne sare log apse pyar karte hai...he showed her all the kids and fab5 standing there, tensed for her.

Sn - Fir mumma kyu nahi hai? Papa kyu nahi hai?

Now Manik couldn't answer. He too was trying to find answer of the same question all his life...suddenly, he felt a hand on his shoulder and turned to look Nandini standing there tear eyed.

She too kneeled down beside them and hold Bothe of their hands in her and said looking in Maniks's eyes -

N - Coz you are a special child...she tore her eye contact from him and took Sneha I her embrace and continued talking.

N - Tumhe pata hai baby, jiske maa - papa nahi hote hai naa vo Bhagwan ji ke special child hote hai...Bhagwan ji khud unki care karte hai, unhe watch karte hai..or agar vo nahi aa pate to Kisi angel KO apke pas bhej dete hai to look after you. Jese apki warden did hai naa...

Sn - Nahi nanni di, warden didi angel nahi hai...angel to aap ho...I love you...

All watched them in awe and Manik, he was feeling overwhlmed...he didn't know why but all these new feelings he feel around Nandini is always overwhelming and he couldn't control them...he don't know how knew that the first sentence she spoke was for him too and he agreed to her angel wali philosophy. He found his angel too...

Suddenly they were engulfed by so many arms...all the kids and fab4 embraced them tightly and they fell on the ground, Nandini on Manik and Sneha on Nandini and all others on them...and all burst out laughing even Manik too...all were happy and feeling content for the first time...

Suddenly Sneha spoke gaining everyone's attention rolling her hand on her chottu sa tummy..

Sn - Nanni, bhuk lagi hai..kuch khilao naa pleasshhh...

And all the kids nodded their head vigoursly and of course our all time bhukkad Cabir joined them too...It was almost mid day and they haven't eaten anything. Nandini then asked all of them,

N - kya khana hai babies ko?

And all the kids shouted together Apke hath ka khana...and then licked their lips as if rembering the time she had cooked for them...

She laughed hertily on their demand and turned her attention to Manik as they were at his House and she need to take his permission and seeing that look on her face Fab5 understood what she wanted to ask and looked at Manik giving giver her permission look as if he was going to deny Manik thought.

He called the head worker and asked him to follow every instruction Nandini will give and to provide everything she needs.

Nandini was very happy and was feeling proud...proud? Why? Its just he is a good person why am I feeling proud? Huh..Nandu tu bhi naa...

She still wanted to ask for somethinga nd waited till everyone were dispersed and asked fiddling with her fingers...

N - umm...Mr. Malhotra

And the look Manik gave was enough to tell her that call me again with formality and watch the devil...

N - I mean, Manik...can I ask for a favour please? I know apne pehle hi bahut kuch kia aaj but please just last one favour?

She looked expecnantly at him for answer and Manik gave her a hard look and said.

M - Nandini I thought we overcame with such formalities. You can ask anything.

N - sorry Manik vo...can we arrange lunch in the garden itself? Vo kya hai naa baccho ko bahut accha lagega and Dhuv or Aliya ke lie prewedding shoot ki arrangements bhi ho jaengi. We can capture some candid moments without letting them know. I was not expecting kids here naa to photographer se aaj ki date fix kr rakhi th soo it will be good too...we can set somethings up for shoot with lunch.

M - woah, Miss wedding plannar, I didn't knew your tin brain works this good..

He teased her and she was like hawww hehe...but before she could reply, the worker came and broke their trance for the list of ingredients which will be needed for lunch and here kids with Fab4 were muching on some fruits and chocolates till Nandu is done with her cooking.

After giving proper instructions of the arrangement to be done in the garden and for cooking they moved inside the living room only to get another shock. Kids and Fab4 were running around whole room and had created a mess of it. Chocolates on their mouth, fruits in air and also on someone's face too...all were giggling and laughing. Manik and Nandini had a content look watching them like this, carefree, happy.

Their happiness soon turned into naughtiness as both looked at each other and smirked...together shouted making them stop suddenly and plastered their face with fake anger. All were terrified that ab to daant padegi and MaNan were smiling inwardly seeing their reactions.

First came the kids with most innocent smiles and fiddling with fingers and one of the elder kid said didi, humne nahi kia...vo bhaiya - didi ne start kia hum to acche se kha rahe the...sacchi...and pinched his throat as if swearing truly. And Manik gave Fab4 a look and they were looking everywhere except him. But being close to the kids Nandini knew they aren't that innocent and glared them for mischief and after that lieing.

N - Acchaa, agar sirf unhone kia hota to aap sab ki esi halat nahi hoti...chize khane ke lie thi ya khelne ke lie? Agar ese hi khelna hai to mai kuch nahi bana rahi...waste hi hoga na vese bhi sab..

She faked her anger and turned around not showing her face to any of them but being standing together Manik can see sidewise her face and she eyed him to continue the drama...

M - Or guys, tum log? Bacche ho kya? Kya halat bana di hai itne acche living room ki? Unhe samjha ke fruits khilane ki jagah tum unpr vo throw kar rahe the? Seriously...

He too turned and now both were facing their back to them and here kids were close to crying and Fab4 too felt bad for being this mischief around kids...they looked at each other and came together behind MaNan and said holding their ears SORRY...

MaNan were laughing inside watching them like this especially Fab4. The ever so notorious Cabir saying sorry for some mischief is a sight to watch. They turned around still faking angry face and said its okay...but you all have to clean the mess you have created...

All were like mar gaye ans now MaNan couldn't hold back their laughted and burst into fits of laughter...kids were looking at them as they have grown two heads and Fab4 understood that they were pulling their leg and glared them for doing this.

C - waah Manik waah...dekh li teri dosti...dost dost naa raha...aur Nandu tumne bhi esa kia humare sath? Are baki sabko chhodo mere sath esa kia? Tumhare bade bhai jesa hu yaar mai...

And cabir was back to his drama...all burst out again into fits of laughter. Fab4 were happy watching Manik being Manik again...being notorious, carefree, caring...and all ther servants were had mini - heart attack watching The Manik Malhotra like this...They have never saw him like this not even with Fab4. They were happy too.

The head worked came back with all the listed ingreients and told that the arrangements have been almost done. Manik nodded his head in approval and all the girls followed Nandini in kitchen.

Nandini knew what kids like the most so she thought of making all that things along with some of Fab5's favorate as she knew through Muqti some of likes of them...she started with her cooking along with workers on their toes to work along.

After hardwork of 2 hours lunch was prapared and was getting serevd in the garden.



All of them were desperate to eat as it was 2 in the afternoon and all were hungry and especially kids as nandini made dises were their favorate..

Salad for kids -



Paw bhaji -



Pasta -



Chilli paneer -



chhole Bhature -



Daal Makhanai -



Naan -



haidrabadi Biryani -



Aaloo Parantha -



Paneer -



salad -



Desserts -






Fab5 except Muqti were shocked to see this much amount of food and that to mouthwatering...the smell was so tempting and seeing their favorate dishes on table was not helping either...


Manik ke man mai laddoo phote being a foodie he is he was too happy to see such food made by Nandini...( future plannings hehe)

From street food to international cusines...all were gaping at the sight...all was so much beautiful and delicious...they sat together and enjoyed a hearty lunch...




do comments and tell me if you like it or nor...I tried to complete whole kids chapter in one but couldn't...it was getting too lengthy...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome nice chapter...Sneha was so cute N drama queen...N the way Nandini explained her was...
Manik N nandini teaming up N pulling everyone's leg was the best...Loved it...
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Uff mouth s watering looking at the food
Nice update
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Originally posted by: musicalstars

Awesome nice chapter...Sneha was so cute N drama queen...N the way Nandini explained her was...

Manik N nandini teaming up N pulling everyone's leg was the best...Loved it...



thank you dear😊😆😳
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Wow such a beautiful lovely update
Msnan nd der cuteness overloaded
Plzzz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello peeps, here is the update,,,


do like and comment...




Chapter 20

Location - Mumbai airport

After knowing about existence of their lifeline whole Moorthy clan didn't left a second to fly over India to meet their Nandu but the thing that disturbed them all was How will she react? Will she be angry? Upset? Hurt? Or worst won't accept them? But putting all these thoughts away they came to see and compensate for the loss Nandu has suffered all these years being away from them; her family.

All were walking through airport with tight security as being rich and famous didn't help and after that accident they have learned to be more careful. They were eager, happy, tensed and were being an emotional mess. They have not planned anything about How will they meet her? They just can't magically appear in front of her.

Shanno - Abhi tu kab plan karega? Hum kab milenege meri laddo se? itna wait kam tha kya?

And being hyper soul she is she kept on blabbering and Amms and Venketesh were smiling thinking how will she handle Nandu when she herself can't control herself. And abhi too was smiling but was getting irritate too with continuous blabbering of his mother, so he used the most powerful weapon and said,

Abhi - Maa agar ap ab shant nahi hue naa to mai apko doll se milaunga hi nahi...to ab aap decide kr lo ki apko kya karna hai..

Knowing her khadoos son Shanno shut her mouth and glared abhi..if looks could kill abhi would have been inside the ground hehe...

They reached their old house in Mumbai which consist several memories of them; happy memories with their whole family, with elder son, daughter in law and their Nandu...Abhi made sure not to change anything inside the house and made it clean with the help of caretaker of the house. When he saw the wall of memories he couldn't control himself and along with him everyone went behind him to relive the old happy memories...

Wall of memory -


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Amms - Kya din the na vo? Sab sath, khush, kyo Shanno?

Shanno - Ha Amma, Bhaiya or inka roz ka jogging ko lekar drama, did or mera roz puja karna, or laddo ka thal se Prasad churana...abhi ka usko defense karna...

She wiped the tears that threaten to fall and looked at all the pictures; they were not only pictures they were moments captured in the form of pictures. They remember each and every moment and celebrate them.

Venketesh - Bas ab jaldi se sab thik ho jae...Aiyappa please sab accha karana..

Abhi was still in daze, he was just staring the pictures and didn't said a word...everyone knew what Nandu means to him, she is not a sister but a daughter to him..and watching her in the mall with confused look on seeing him killed him 1000 times...he know she was not very old to remember everything but his heart was bleeding on seeing the look of non realization on her face.

He just dispersed to his room and taking cue, everyone does the same.

On the other hand, in Malhotra mansion after lunch all were sitting in the garden itself, with kids playing and snoozing and elders just taking the serenity. No one said anything they were just absorbing the togetherness of each other and now after spending like weeks with each other, NavNi has become part of their little family too.

After like an hour or so the nazara was like everyone was sleeping except our very own Manik who was lost in his thoughts and his thoughts consist none other than Nandini, he was staring her intently and his mind was clouded with several thoughts,

Why do I feel something different with her?

What is the feeling?

In these year after that incident I have never felt something?

She is so pure, innocent.

Will she accept me with what I have in my heart?

The darkness? Will she really light it up?

His chain of thoughts was broken by a Sneha who cuddled herself into his lap and said sleepily,

Sn - Mr. Lambu, aap so jao naa...kabse didu ko ghur rahe ho...mai 5 min se jag rh hu...and I tried to call you but apka dhyan hi nahi tha...

Manik was speechless, he was caught and starting fiddling with his fingers. A sight to watch isn't it? The Manik malhotra is fiddling before a 6 year old kid? Hehe...

Getting no reply from her Mr. Lambu Sneha peeked from his lap and said cupping his cheeks in her chotu hands,

Sn - Are ap dar kyu rahe ho? Mai didu ko nahi bolungi...I know vo bahut acchi hai...mujhe bht pyar karti hai...mujhse kya vo to sabse bht pyar karti hai...apse bhi karengi...pinky promise...

She showed her pinky to him and Manik looked beliwered, how could she answer his questions without even knowing anything...but love? It is a really big word. But he smiled and held her pinky with his and the sight was too adorable to watch. Manik held her close and closed his eyes to take a power nap.

So much to handle isn't it? Life is always unpredictable...and what is a life if it can be predict? Lot more to come...abhi to picture shuru hui hai...wait to read a jealous Manik and confused Nandu...any guesses? With whom will Manik be jealous? And why will Nandu be confused?

Keep guessing and keep commenting...

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Awesomee prt...nandu apni family ko milkr confus hogi aur manik jealousss...

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