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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Jyotimagaji

Awesome update

Cont soon
N also pm me😊


Thanks a lot
For pm, plzz buddy me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Nice...Nandini seem to be really unhappy with the marriage...it would be interesting to read when she will fall in love with him
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: softysakshi



Ha toh its our generation only n... ;)




Wohi toh I like so much 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Please add an index on Pg 1
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: dhillon90

Interstng promo
Update soon

Thanks...
Nd hope u read the note..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

Please add an index on Pg 1

Done 😊
Edited by softysakshi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
hello guyzzz...as i promised...my exams are over and here I am with a update which I hv written in very haste so that atleast Jo bhul gya ho story use yaad aa jaye ...so now no more my bak bak...nd here u go with the chappy...

Nd yes this was my 100th post..!

HAPPY READING

Chapter - 3


Manik's pov...

It's been 2 days since I hv met her...and her answer is still roaming in my mind from that day I am not able to concentrate on any thing ...cabir did asked me as he sensed something fisshy but I just ignored question by saying "nothing"...


Nandini's mom called yesterday for deciding marriage date and so tomorrow we all are going at her home for roka...my thought were broken by Mukti's voice...


Mukti- Bhai!!!!! are u ohk..?? (I nodded) mom has send this dress for u for tomorrow...(she left leving the dress nd I started staring at the dress)

Manik's pov
how will nandini look tomorrow...she will look so beautiful in Indian dress nd dnt knw when I was smiling like an idiot imagining her...
suddenly her words came in my mind and I was annoyed with myself for thinking so much about her...!!!!!!!!!

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Next day morning

Murphy's house...!!!

Mr Murthy was busy on call while Mrs. Murthy was running here and there souting on servants...
why won't she shout, its her daughter's 1st function who was sitting in her room with a bad face with navya...

Nandini's room

Nandinj- Navya I dnt knw...what should I do...ye sab ittni jaldi jaldi ho rha hai and vo Manik (and she remember his sad face after that meeting, she so wanted to talk to talk him once but still have no guts to call him)

Navya- Manik kya nandini, jitna humne suna hai uske bare me I can say that ki vo bahut accha hai...

Nandini- But Navya tum to sab janti ho n ( before she can say anything , her mother came)

amma- beta...jaldi ready ho jao, they will be here in a hour nd she left

Nandini's pov..

Manik will be here, how will I face him, vo kya soch rha hoga mere bare me, usne mujhe call bhi nhi kiya...god!!!! why this so complicated...
with all this thoughts I got ready with help of navya...
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At Malhotra Mension

Manik was getting ready when cabir came followed by Dhruv...

cabir- or mere Sher,bali chadhne ke liye tayyar...
Manik rolled his eyes while Mr Malhotra entered in room saying
"Bali to shadi vale din chadhega abhi to sab accha dikhega u knw what I mean..." with a smile...

cabir laughed on this nd said "yes..!!! i got that uncle"

after a teasing and leg pulling session of all the boys ,Nyonika called them for leaving a they are already late...
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in no time they reached at Murthy's place...!!!!!
Mr, and Mrs. Murthy hugged elder Malhotra and Manik touch their feet...

Fab 5 settled on sofa while elders went to meet guest...!!!!

They were chatting when a girl came and asked them to come in hall where pooja was going to held...

Manik seating for pooja waiting for nandini to come...
after what seems like ages for manik nandini entered in simple but elegant pitch colour lehnga looking etheral...she was looking down but was aware of manik's gaze ...!!!!!

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soon the pooja started and they perform all the rituals asked by pandit, all the while they were stealing glances of each other...They both wanted to talk but don't knw how to start...!!!?

after pooja nayonika came and gave her saying "its a official start for making u my daughter in law" nandini smiled on listening "daughter in law" because somewhere in the heart she always wanted to be...just the case was not so soon...!!!!!
Manik saw the 1st time a real smile on face of nandini,
a smile for which he have fallen for...
a smile which stole his senses...
a smile which he saw on her face in that pic...
and after seeing that he too smiled and promised himself to bring a real smile on her face and be the reason himself...

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hk I know its not up to d mark and completely crap chapter...
but but but...plzzz bear it for now...I wrote in very hustle bustle...as my exams are over I will be regular in giving update too from now...

so vse toh I know ts completely vahiyatt chapter but still do share ur views by comments and let me know kuch accha tha ki nhi...

and a ques...
U GUYZZ WANT A COMPLETE MARRIAGE WITH EVERY DETAILS OR I SHOULD WRAP IT FAST...?????
as I am quite not so attending functions person and dnt hv much knowledge...!!!

stay blessed
Keep smiling
Love
Sakshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Fatafat...shaadi karva do...where they hardly talk ebfore marraige...as it would be fun how they would fall for each other after marriage...lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Awesome!!!!
Pls wrap up their marriage fast fast
Can't wait to know wat will happen after their wedding
Tqvm for the pm dear
Will be waiting eagerly for your next update
Take care and stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
nice update
thank u
continue soon waiting for next update

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