manan ss - arziyaan disconitued ,note page 19

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CHAPTER - 1

I was getting ready in my room when my said ki they have arrived...in no time my bestie navya came and said...

Navya- don't be sad yrr...talk to that guy once...he will surely understand u...

I was very upset with my dadi...who wants to get me marry as in front of her as her last wish...I just can't deny her, I luv her very much...but I wanted to do job...I am fashion designer...I want to do something in this field...but due to health isse of dadi...I can't make her sad also...ohh sry ...I didn't introduce myself...I'm nandini murthy, 22 years old, a fashion designer...I hv my bst frnds navya nd varsha...varsha is out of town for her job...nd I really missed her...she always helps with her great ideas unlike navya...she is such a chatter box...but still...we r soul sisters...we three are together since childhood...

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I and navya went downstairs...I was just looking at d floor fiddling with my dupptta...I dnt wear such clothes...so I was very uncomfortable...
I just sat on d sofa...I didn't knw who are they but as soon as I heard a voice, I became little relax...it was nayonika aunty's voice...

Nayonika- arey beta, how r u...nd why r u feeling so uncomfortable...

I looked at her and then at my parents...they never told me ki it was nayonika aunty's son...I was amused at this new found information...

Mohit ( manik's dad) - so beta how was d surprise...I only told to ur dad to hide this from u...

Mohit uncle nd my papa are partners from last 3 years and I treat them like my parents only...
They have 2 children Manik nd mukti...but both are in London...they have a band fab 5 nd they are part of it...

Uncle and are alone so I always used to spend a lot of time with them...they always wanted to make me their daughter in law...but I didn't took it seriously...but today I got to knw...it was a serious matter...

I was just thinking when I noticed ki there is only uncle, aunty and mukti toh where is manik..??
I started to looking here and there for him...
When mukti came nd said...

Mukti- bhai will be here in sometime...(I looked at her amused ki how did she get to knw) Hi...!! I am mukti...mom always talks abt u...

I just smiled at her...

We all were sitting nd chit chatting...I'm was comfertable with all now...mukti nd me became good frnds...

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Suddenly Mohit uncle's phone buzzed...nd talked nd turned towards papa


Mohit uncle- sorry Rajesh..!! Manik is badly stuck in meeting...voh aj nhi aa p@yega...

Papa- arey its ohk...I understand...frr kabhi mil lege hum manik se...rishta to pakka Hi hai...bas ek baar ye dono mil le...aur apni marzi bta de...

Aunty- ha Ji sahi keh rhe hai ap...ab to bas jaldi se nandu hamare ghar ki bahu bane...

We all have our dinner together ...then they went to their home...I too came to my room...

Mukti and I have exchanged our number...she also gave me manik's no nd told me to call him once...


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Omg...what I hv written...I dnt knw...I have just written in...

But plzzz tell me ki ksa tha...
I will wrap in 7-8 update...
Chotu sa h...just a ss...

So plzzz do lamba lamba comment if u want next update...


*****INDEX*****

Chapter 1-- @bove

Chapter 2A &2B -- page 5



Chapter 3-- page 10

Chapter4-- page 14
Chapter 5- page 17
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful start
Interesting hai so continue soon
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I love ur story its awesome pls update next chapter soon
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I really liked the intro
Loved it...
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liked start..
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nice start
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Gud start...
Nyc concept...
Waiting for next part...
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Very interesting concept.
Good attempt.
Waiting to see how the plot uncovers.
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Please pm whenever you update if possible.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome n interesting part n story too n ya its a request pls manik ki koi gf na ho. It should be pure manan n no one else.
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Originally posted by: manan_eku

Wonderful start

Interesting hai so continue soon
Pm me

Love your
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Thanks dear...
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