Aiyoo Ayyappa- FF- Chapter 23- Updated on Pg 149 - Page 107

Gosh ! This story is getting interesting day by day.

It's interesting story...
I came across this story today itself & I really liked it...
Plzzz do pm me whenever u update story or post anything..
Continue soon this story..
Looking forward to it...

Finally! Like finally! The truth is out now.

Wow..awesome

hmm so starting with the title..
title "caught" padhte hi mere face pein woh battisi wali smile agayi thi... 😃 so i started reading it with grt excitement!!!!
and phir padhte padhte achanak se snake agaya nd i was like seriously king cobra iss situation mein manan ke bich mein kahase agaya... 😉
phir maine socha ki aage padhte hain..aapne likha hain toh acha hi hoga bt then i got a shock..like really a dream...that too while sitting ih a bike...!! nd then i was like ROFL... 🤣
nd again a bigger shock...!! our innocent nandu told everything herself...!! finally she said it!!
bt then when manik asked her the reason the way he expressed himself i felt so sad... 😕
pata nahi nansu kya reason degi...update soon..eagerly waiting...

Finally the truth is out...

At last ... Jhut pakra gaya !!!!!!!!! Now the suspense is killing me ... Update the next chapter soon nah !!!!!!!!!!! 😉

Ahahaaa awesome update ... Finallly the truth is out ...the dream Wala part was awesome ... Firstly I thought what was goin on ??? Snake mujhe lagai tha manik ase akele nandu ki chorkar nahi ja sakta and nandu is screaming manik manik awww so sweet ... The way nandu spilled all the bean out was awesome !!!!! I loved the way manik talked to nandu ...waiting for her reply I hope everything becomes fine ...

Yeappiii u gonna start new thread wow !!!!!!! Eagerly waiting for ur new thread with ur new update ...update soon ...with lots of love and hugs

Oohhhooo

I hope he listens and not walks away..
This Manik is not impulse yet.. Which is good