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madhu245 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pokhu!!!! U know howww eagerly i was waiting for this update!! I told u I could feel its going to b epic and I was so right!! This ff is so fresh ...I can't believe u actually thought of not continuing at one point...its not easy to make me cry and I swear I had tears in my eyes by the time i finished reading this!! It was definitely worth the wait!! I loved the way you expressed manik and nandini's distress...m looking forward to how their mutual love for ansh brings them together... And and u made ansh attempt suicide!!!!😭😭 There's just so much I want to talk to u about this ff ..i nuat have so many feelings ki yahan type karte karte mere fingers dard karenge(I hate commenting on if...and m only doing this coz I love u too much..ya m that nice) i'll tell u the rest on whatsapp!!😳
PS: I know u r angry ki maine itne late se comment kiya..next time pakka time pe comment karungi..pakka promise...ab chod bhi de gussa meri drama queen 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Commenting just coz.

But I've been waiting for so long, thank you for FINALLY updating. Quick updates are a must or I'll hate you forever -.-

I'm in love with the detailed writing though <3 It was so perfectly described. And there were so many things happening at once, yet it didn't feel rushed at all. Very nice flow of the story so far.

Okay I'm sad for Ansh but a biased Manik fangirl hamesha so you can guess who's going to get more of my sympathy 😆 But yay, he's adopting Ansh <3 I swear I absolutely LOVE stories where Manik is a dad it's just adorbs from all levels. Their bonding seems super cute already *.*

Oh and I was totally not expecting him to know Nandini from before but woah, shocker. Some more insight on his thoughts about Nandini, maybe? It'll be great if you can even try to include a scene, maybe a flashback, where he first meets Nandini and Ansh.

Overall, loved the chapter and looking forward to the next <3 This is not a res so update SOON 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
This is brilliant Shreya! Too good! Like WOW man! Totally different storyline but you are nailing it like anything! I am loving this FF to bits! And I really can't wait to know what lies ahead! Like srsly!

I simply LOVE your writing style and use of language! I swear I do! And the way you have conceived this story, seriously kudos! I so love it! ❤️

And srsly you had to stop it here nah! Damn I wanna know what happens next😃 Like NOW! But yes I shall wait for the next update!!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Okay Shreya!
I would be lying if I said I didn't become over emotional after reading to this. It all happened due to a misunderstanding and I don't know how Ansh would have felt. I felt my heart grieving at his plight.
You have this way with words behena, it always soothes me down at my worst times and makes me feel so much better with the situation.
The whole set up is so gloomy and heart breaking that when they get true happiness, it will be worth seeing that glow on their face and all the three of them in love and content with what their destiny had led them to.
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Manik Malhotra had never ever felt so helpless in his life. Inside the ICU was the boy who meant the world to him and here with him was this girl whom, it had become a necessity that he saw every morning. He did not know why but, somehow Ansh and Nandini had given him a reason to live.
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This above gave me some sense of comfort.
Manik is desparate now to marry Nandini as he knows, she is the one who is the perfect mother for Ansh and also the perfect person for him.
I will sit back and watch this beauty roll out infront of my eyes.
I love you!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Hey

This one is d epic story...
Mind blowing story...
Omg... What u foin girl It's sooo beautiful fantastic story...
So touching...
I was crying with each word...
I was feeling d pain which u r depicting through words...
I was hvng a believe dat ur dis story will be good enough to hold me with ur each step...

Bt dis is is so heart touching dat its getting difficult for me to wait what u r holding for us in d next part...
Pls update soon... :)
Waiting desperately to read it more...
Edited by cmamona - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Hello mam,
i love ur all stories..
every scene is uniquely written...
muturely written..
every character is unique..
keep going mam...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
PROMO

"What Manik? Who are you to take decision for my life? I am left by someone does not mean it's your chance now."Nandini held Manik by his collar with her eyes full of anger which failed to keep up its feeling as now they were pouring down as tears.

"How could you just blurt and say?"Did you even think once before blurting it out to Ansh out there? Who are you? What do I even mean to you "She said and collapsed on the floor crying inconsolably leaving Manik frozen at a point. He certainly was flabbergasted and confused seeing Nandini so vulnerable .He took a deep breath and sat on the floor by her side. He kept hands on her shoulders only to be jerked by her. He then hesitatingly kept hands on her head which made absolutely no sense to him then. Nandini continued to sob and speak between her tears.

"You can't take me for granted Manik like everybody has always done. You should not have done that."

Manik did not find the right words to speak and just spoke the first words that came in his mind. "Nandini I want to get married to you. Trust me I do. I might not be the one to love you irrevocably but I am the one to love you so much that you live happily"

He slid his arms around her shoulder only to find Nandini crash on his chest and cry. There they sat on the cold floor of the hospital in a completely disheveled state with Nandini crying her heart while Manik reached out to just stay there as those tears came down.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
😲
I'd forgotten that this was an angsty fic. 😆
Anyway, I'm just glad you're back! 🤗

Waiting for the full chapter. 😳
Edited by Nickel8 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Where. Were u all dese days??
Anyways nowbthat u r here

I hope u dnt make us wait for long

Nice promo

Continue soon

N thnx for d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
nice promo


your story is interesting
pls update next part

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