MaNan - it was all 'bout her

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was all bout her


"Nandini , I m telling you its gonna be real fun !

"come on , you surprise to me to infinity always " she replied , blinking her eyes at an exponential rate and mouthing the words in the most sarcastic way !

She hated him ,

She hated him more than anyone ever could !

And he knew it , he knew the truth.

He laughed , holding her closer to himself with her waist , pecking her quickly on her cheeks

and again threw his head back , laughing seeing his girlfriend's sarcasm vanish into the cutest crimson blush on her plump cheeks .

just then all of a sudden , at the entrance , picked her up , while she squirmed in his arms

"Manik , I'm not a baby ..."

" I can walk "

" where is this place .."

"yooouuu...monster "

"Manikkk"

He didn't bother and smiled all the way into the small lil' surprise he had for his girl after long

And as he flung open the gate of the small cottage and saw her smile

As she whispered his name "Manik "

She spoke his name , a prayer; like it was mantra of her soul.

She traced the lines of his palm and drew the path to salvation

She heard the knock of his heart and answered it as her calling .

She saw the scene in front of her as the start of one of most beautiful nights


Manik kissed her lips , sweeping her hair aside and kissing her just over the collarbone , he laid her on the bed making her sink into his arms , while she hung her fingers on his chest dragging him ,closer and buried her face in his shoulder curve, his hands flexing around her back.

.The moment in his arms was peace .

He was as happy as her , after months .

"I love you,"he whispered into her hair and

she smiled yet again and blinking her eyes , only for him to kiss her yet again

The rhythm of their hearts ,

Two drowning lovers at the sea ,

His lips drifted into hers .

And as they moved closer the rain , like God's own poetry synchronised with their love . the patter of the drops tumbled from grey skies bringing melody and serenity while their love shone to its peaks .

I want to wake up next to you

And feel your soul on mine

Surely and slowly falling

Ever so stealthily

Into each other

Until there is no longer

You and I

But just us

Nothing else , just us .

Only for Manik to wake up the next morning and look at her ,still cutely cocooned in his arms .

He could watch a million sunrises and still never see one quite as beautiful as her eyes slowly opening in the morning .

.For it was all about her.

.Just her.

.His Nandini .


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My sincere apologies , as my writing has taken a serious break with study load ( and medical terms come to my tips more easily ;p) and I haven't followed the show ever since I left the forum due to college itself .

I hope the piece was readable and please do point out errors
(if any)

Lastly , I miss this place like hell - esp the ATians and EDTians :*:*

U all ppl are love (that indicates , now better talk to me for some time :p 😆 )

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res😳
I missed you k🤗
Unres
MaNan
'Nuff said😛
Talk as much as you want, i missed you so much Doc🤗
Meri Anatomy ke dard ki saathi, biochem ke atyachar ko sehne waali dost and Physio ki maaya ko mere saath baatne wali who writes amazing stuff🤗
Edited by -Chandramukhi.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is just so exaggeratedly beautiful!! I can't believe my eyes!
This piece is really wonderful!
It has everything in it! Everything possible!
You are undoubtedly one of the sizzling and awesome writers of this forum!
It is simply lovable, adorable and alluring!
Depth in those word describe MaNan well!
👏
Loved it to its core!!
Do write more!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice one
good work
i like it yar
keep it up

thankx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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welcome back...
awesome piece of work...
loved it so much...
manik never fails to impress and surprise nandu...
the setting was just adorable...
keep up the good work...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It is so so beautifully written
Manik's surprise... MaNan romance
And those lines woww
Loved it
It's awesome
Thnkz 4 the pm :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Beautiful update
Manik surprise was superb
And manan romance was superb
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: horizontwilight

This is just so exaggeratedly beautiful!! I can't believe my eyes!

This piece is really wonderful!
It has everything in it! Everything possible!
You are undoubtedly one of the sizzling and awesome writers of this forum!
It is simply lovable, adorable and alluring!
Depth in those word describe MaNan well!
👏
Loved it to its core!!
Do write more!!!

thank you soo muchhh
that means a lot to me srsly
i'm so glad that u loved it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very very beautiful. .
All the words are awesome.
Both are love...love. ..love.
Thanks for sharing.

Stay blessed dear.





Love. .
Jyoti.





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