MaNan drabble - etched souls

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MaNan Drabble # 1


Etched souls

Soft wisps of those dark brown hair swept past an ear and caressed her neck , jaw and then very smoothly tumbled caressing her cheeks , passing through her rather beautiful deep eyes .

As she continued to enjoy the twilight melting away and a red orange glow seeping over the horizon through her window , Her hair caught the morning light and reflected back into his , as he walked .

He slowly slid his hands around her , cocooning her into her home , his arms . A smile crept on both their faces , as she lost herself for a few seconds into his intoxicating scent , yet again .

He kissed her hair , playing with them with his slender fingers as she spoke

" Manik , aren't you going ?",

reminding him , of the world of screaming screens , falling stocks and cat-fight meetings .

He smiled, dropping a soft - feather kiss on her hair again ,

smoothly holding a box in front of her in his masterful hands .

A crimson blush crept . her Breath hitched .

He slid a beautiful promise ring on her tiny warm hands, kissing them after .

" I ll stay , forever " he replied

as she slowly clasped the other ring from the box , seeing it for a few moments .

He smirked at her .

.She had fallen in love with him , again.

" forever , humesha" she whispered softly as,

She slid the ring on his finger and kissed his lips softly .

Her fingers, his fingerprints intertwined with his fingers , her fingerprints .

Their souls etched on each other .

. forever .

. humesha .

i had written this a lil time back , @phoenixashes ..thx for reminding and making me post it here gurl .. :*

also , all the tomatoes and cusses are welcome ...this was my 5 minute work 😉 , written just like that .

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drnidsur thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res for drabble #2..soon😆
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So sweet. I loved it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Lovely update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx for the pm
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its magical...!!!
thanks a lot for the pm dear
waiting for ur next...update
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So cute! And so sweet of u to send me a pm! I luvd the rings and their promise! U always update very shortly.. But u actually prove the saying all good things come in small package! Chotu sa par cutu sa
Love
Ayisha
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Not tomatoes... But you surely deserve kisses dear!!! This one is small but beautiful!!
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Beyond words ... Exceptionally beautiful..!!!'-'-'-'
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It was cute and simple
Just 5 Minutes? 👏
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So lovely..simple and sweet and what an imaginative idea for the ring... loved it...as always, terrific.

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