#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 70

Originally posted by: kishubedi

Hey saw ur title which caught my attention

Devils bride interesting

So gave it a shot and now after starting in the morning here

N with breaks between I finally managed to read each and every part n must say woow

They wasy u describe the pain is fantastic

So sogar what I could register is alya was supposed to marry manik but ditched him nandu stepped in hate from his side but not from hers slowly love hate turned love alua comebak but allsolved no divorce..n they also got intimate after which manik went to London n back with Casanova image caus he thinks she cheated on him if u again go back to present where she is preggy n is told to abort but manik again misunderstands...

Ok so I wonder how he found out bout her pregnancy in the past..n whatvi wonde is when manik was in London whyn hwo does he know bout nandu supposedly cheating on him...

Is this anyones plan like obviously it is but whose...

I don't think alya neither do j think it's nyonika but that would be shocking though if she is..or what if sheuv himself did all this

Hmmm

Oh yea most importantly do keep me updated !

Originally posted by: maliha_khan

Awesome update... As I m not good with words that's y I choose to be a silent reader n I know it's unfair for writers but if you are ok with one or two words comment then next tym I will definitely comment on this ff... Do pm me :)

Originally posted by: jeyapirakas

Oh my god such a pain full update

your such a thoughtful writer,I like each and every part's of your story.you have a wonderful feature Darling. Every update make the reader surprise,Stay blessed and lot's & lot's of love SIS.

Originally posted by: sadiya51

I don't know u will believe or not but I had tears in my eyes after reading nandini POV
But still the confusion is their
The reason for manik's behaviour has still not revealed
Why the hell us he behaving that way
Its good that nandini is should leave him forcefully n don't let him know about Hus child but in the present track he knows so how n when will he get to know

Don't feel bad just one suggestion
U r stretching the POV part way too long
It would be better if u shorten a bit
N the writers POV was really nice n meaning full