#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#701

Originally posted by: harkirat22
Frm past one week I was reading yur story .. I dun get mch time to read stories on forum .. Bt this past one week I ws jst reading yur story in my free times... I jst love the way u exprexx.. Yur writing skills are meant ro be appreciated..
Cmng to the update .. It ws dark .. Bt ha I loved it .. Manik is too suffering frm sme kind of pain .. May be that will later turned into a misunderstanding. Bt yaa .overall an awesome update .. Even writers pov ws awesne.. U wrote it beautifully .. I read yur note ... I would live to read yur story so plz if u cn send me the pm.. I be yr active reader..!!

Sure dear i will send you if you want u can add me in your buddy list or glad you like the part thank you so much and i got a new reader thanks for commenting it means alot for me

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tas456

@tas456

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Posted: 9 years ago

#702

Wowww!!!!

Am just speechless yaar

Wat a fantabulous update

Totally madly deeply in love with your story

Loved all your pov's pls do add more in your upcoming updates

Tqvm for the pm dear

Will be waiting eagerly for your next update

Take care and stay blessed

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ksh_n

@ksh_n

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Posted: 9 years ago

#703

Thankz 4 d update. Emotional one. Waiting 4 manan to clear their misunderstanding.

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megha94kumari

@megha94kumari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#704

amazing update dear... sb ki pov gd thi.. BT I lyk manik POV d most.. hope in next update u reveal d truth. bcoz an bohot tym ho gya h

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jashanpreet

@yash7717

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Posted: 9 years ago

#705

Amazing update
I loved it .. But less of the conversation between both
But this was amazing

Manik will surely repent his words
How can he be so harsh on Her

Desperately waiting to read next

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Kavyashree pradhan

@Kavyashree22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#706

Waiting for present track.. Now don't have interest in these flashback anymore..

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nanoNikki

@nanoNikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#707

Emotional update ... N ur just awesome... Plz... Continue soon Eagerly waiting. For next update Ur writing skills are mind-blowing... God bless u Keep smiling

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Manancrazy_95

@Manancrazy_95

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Posted: 9 years ago

#708

Aamzing update

why Manik is doing this to her... she is totally broke and how can he even think that she cheated on him.. she always love him

poor Nandini ... feeling soo bad for her..

going through totally hell.

and what revenge he is talking about... by doing that he is hurting himself and poor Nandini too...

please make them realize their mistakes soon

Thanks for pm

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prasanna77

@prasanna77

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Posted: 9 years ago

#709

so manik is doing all this to hurt nandini...

wondering what made him behave like this...there must be a strong reason...

but what ever the reason is,.. he definitely goona regret later because nandini unconditionally loves him..she trusted him

but manik didnt trust nandini...he misunderstood his love...

manik's pov once again proved that he loves her a lot...so he was hurting both himself and nandini..

both of them love each other..but currently destiny is not in favour of them..feeling sorry for both of them especially nandini..she was suffering like hell...

i can understand how difficult it was for u to present this dark side of manik...

writer's pov is much needed..plz continue with that...

waiting for the mystery behind all this..

thanks for pm

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syamala

@syamasastry_68

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Posted: 9 years ago

#710

Awesome update.You are a awesome writer.Please end this emotional track soon.I cant' see Manan in pain.But i know the story is all about Devil.So Nandini should be strong now.

Thanks for PM..

God bless you.

Edited by syamasastry_68 - 9 years ago

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