#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1

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MahimaSankhla

@MahimaSankhla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#671

Loved it..After a few light lovey dovey updates...Devil is back n wat a come back.. Tht store room part i literally had a shiver dwn my spine.. u wrote it b'fuly...Hw mch pain he can give her n hw mch can she take more?? Like every time time its a next level of torture...Cant wait to kn wat exactly Manik saw or heard which made him go back in his DEVIL mode..

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Nusrat Peeroo

@nusrat300895

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Posted: 9 years ago

#672

OMG...like seriously
How do u always manage to give aweaome updates???
I have read this chapter twice 😛
The painful scenes seeme so real to me...
How can Manik be so cruel 😭
Poor nandu who is suffering without having done anything
Manik also is suffering but nandu much more
😭 😭
Update soon... 👏 ⭐️

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swarobi1

@swarobi1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#673

very nice...

keep up the work

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-angelchandni-

@-angelchandni-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#674

Waiting for the secret to open up soon

Manik should feel the pain which nandini felt bcoz he didn't trust her enough.

Plz continue soon...😊

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Raka_bd

@Raka_bd

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Posted: 9 years ago

#675

brutal it was!!!!!! heart wrecking!!!!!! but it is life!!!! can't b fair to everyone every time!!!!!!

You just have to live it, hope for betterment. but u can't leave living it, u can't loose... I'm in some other land after reading ur update, as I'm going through a bad phase of my life right now...

You have really justified the category of your story- dark ff 👏👏👏 ... awesome job u did... & yes, liked your POV... keep going.

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51083alishashah

@51083alishashah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#676

Oh god what an emotional update...i was having tears in my eyes through out the whole update...manik is making suffer to both of them just only coz of his some missunderstandings...he don't trust nandini n without trust any relationship can't survive...i hope manik will come to know the value of trust in a relationship...whenever he will explore the truth he is gonna repent badly...but i want one thing that whenever truth reveals but nandini should not forgive him easily...i want to see him suffering more than nandini in manaofy her coz right now he is really behaving like a devil n monster n punishing her for his own insecurities

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Abiha110

@Abiha110

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Posted: 9 years ago

#677

luved it, Awesme update... plzz upload next part sooon ''''

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nikinidhi

@nikinidhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#678

Quite emotional one ..😭

Touched mine heart..

If possible end this misunderstanding asap..

Painful to see anyone like this..

Nice update..

Keep it up..

Update soon

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pinky

@kimnana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#679

nandani is right he will regret how he behaved with her

poor nandani ...manik loves her but ...

clear the misunderstanding so they can enjoy

this parenthood phase

ty for pm

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nancy_lovemanan

@nancy_lovemanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#680

Tat was really heart touching. ...wat had happened r wat did manik get to knw. .which s making hm torture her to this level. ...poor soul she s suffering a lot Alone...

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