manan FF linked by destiny part 17 B/pg 139 (23 FEB) - Page 30

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_kaur

Very good update
Finally cavaya is one
The light moments were cute !
Missed Manan but the update
Was very nice overall!
Ty for the pm!

thanks
next part u will have manan
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Manansamkhan

superb .

amazing

love it .

dialogues whr awsome heart touching .

leg pulling was fun .

cont soon .

thanks a lot

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shubhshash

Hy dear...
read all the updates in one go..
N I must sae the story is superb. .
I loved it..
amaziing..
grt wrk dear. .keep it up.
Bye tc stay blessed. ..!

thanks a lot
it means a lot
i am glad u liked it

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: prathyushaeluri


thanks eku
i love yaar
for ur words


Love you too di 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Navya answers the call

Ar: hi baby...how are u???

Na: stop calling me that and mey kaisa hu yeh thume kyu batav??

Ar: I think this dose is not enough to change your mind want more??

Tears falls from navya eyes and cabir rubs them and nods in a no and signals her to speak.

Na: please aryaman cabir ko kuch mat karna

Ar: mey vusse nahi chodunga

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Ar: mey ab tak cabir koyi target kiya tha and now u want me target ur bff and ur so called bf ki behen

Na: thum in sab ki beech mey nandu ko kyu lana chatahey??

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M: druv abhi kaha hey??

D: ek business meeting hey ismey mey aur bhai mey kisi ek ko hona padega and bhai gaya tha

Mukti becomes sad listening to this. This was noticed by nandini and she asks mukti to come aside.

Mu: kya hua nandu???

N: mukti mey thumse ek question puchna hey??

Mu: haa pucho na

N: thumko abhi keliye kuch feelings hey

Mu: what????

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M: jab koyi bhi insaan takleef mey hote hey na vus insane ko pyar karne valonko vo patachal gatihey ki they r in trouble

N: acha do u want to say that u love me???


what will be the answers of manik and mukti to nandini question

think??

and here is the shore promo

will get the update on thursday

love

prathyusha




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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!!!!!

Amazing promo

Very desperate to read the chappy and know the answers of manik and mukti. ... .


Will be waiting for the update ...


Continue soon ...


Love you
Ekuuu. ... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc promo. ..
I think first mukti will deny but then will agree...
About maniks answer I seriously don't know...
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
yeh aryaman ...urggg karna kya chahta hai
manan ka kuch dhassu aanne wala hai
updatr soon
keep smiling
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

All were smiling and enjoying when navya phone rang. After seeing the caller ID she panicked.

Na: aryaman ka phone hey

Cabir holds her hand.

M: navya keep the phone on speaker and don't let him know hum sab yeha hey

Navya answers the call and keeps it on speaker.

Ar: hi baby...how are u???

Na: stop calling me that and mey kaisa hu yeh thume kyu batav??

Ar: I think this dose is not enough to change your mind want more??

Tears falls from navya eyes and cabir rubs them and nods in a no and signals her to speak.

Na: please aryaman cabir ko kuch mat karna

Ar: mey vusse nahi chodunga

Na: kyu??

Ar: kyu ki he has kissed u

Na: wht???

Ar: agar thumari honewali partner ko kisine kiss kiya tha kya thum chup chap batogi

Na: just stop it...mey thumari honewali patni nahi hu and I will kiss cabir or do whatever with him tujhe kya problem hey??

Ar: navya baby I think u forgot u r going to marry me

Na: In ur dreams only

Ar: mey ab tak cabir koyi target kiya tha and now u want me target ur bff and ur so called bf ki behen

Now manik anger rose to peak and he was ready to snatch phone from navya and bash him but he was stopped by mukti who holded his hands.

Na: thum in sab ki beech mey nandu ko kyu lana chatahey??

Ar: thum humari baat manogi nahi na

Na: acha theek hey ye sab chodo ye problem thume aur meri hey to hum dono deal karthahey

Ar: acha hua baby ab line mey agaya

Na: then meet me

Ar: finally I am so happy thum mujhse milna chatahey

Na: lekin mey batavunga kab aur kaha milna hey

Ar: acha theek hey

Na: fine now don't disturb me till I call

Ar: kk bye baby

Navya cuts the call in anger. She starts to cry and cabir holds her tightly in his arms. All decided to give them some alone space so all left the room and their parents left the hospital due to their SPECIAL MEETING

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C: dekho mollu kuch nahi hoga hum sab hey na

Na: lekin tollu mujhe bahot daar lagrahahey

C: shhh...mey huna thumari saath

He started to rub her tears and hugged her tightly. He broke the hug after some time

C: vaise bhi thum humari honeymoon ko kaha jhana hey

Na: tollu...

She was stammering in between to say due to her blush and cabir smiled seeing her like this

C: and mey toh goa jana chathahey

Navya was deeply blushing and hugged cabir immediately and he also responded equally.

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All were sitting outside the room

M: druv abhi kaha hey??

D: ek business meeting hey ismey mey aur bhai mey kisi ek ko hona padega and bhai gaya tha

M: hoo kab ayengi vapas??

D: meeting toh London mey hey and pata nahi kab vapas ayenge

M: acha theek hey

Mukti becomes sad listening to this. This was noticed by nandini and she asks mukti to come aside.

Mu: kya hua nandu???

N: mukti mey thumse ek question puchna hey??

Mu: haa pucho na

N: thumko abhi keliye kuch feelings hey

Mu: what????

N: haa batav I want to know

Mu: kyu puch rahihey??

N: batav na

Mu: acha theek hey mujhe vo bahot pasand hey lekin love ya nahi ye mujhe nahi pata

N: acha theek hey

Mu: thum ye kyu pucha tha??

N: bus mujhe dout agaya tha ki thumari expressions ko dekh ke

Mu: acha kk but don't say this to any one na

N: kyu??

Mu: let me get conform first then I will say to all

N: kk

Mukti leaves from there.

N: ab mujhe kuch karna padega in dono keliye

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Manik was sitting in the chair and relaxing.



Nandini comes near him and sees that he is sleeping there. She goes closer to him and clears the frowns from his face with her thumb.



Manik wakes up and sees nandini very close to him. He smiles and nandini sits beside him.

M: pata nahi kab needh agaya

N: its ok manik no problem

M: sab kaha hey

N: sab ghar gaya hey

M: wht?? Itni jaldi

N: manik sab thag gaya hey isiliye

M: acha thum bhi ghar jav

N: no manik I am okk

M: nahi nandu go na

N: manik I am fine

M: let me guess r u afraid??

N: wht???

M: bolo yes or no

N: yes

M: and don't get afraid sab theek hoga

N:(smiles) thume kaise pata ki I am afraid

M: jab koyi bhi insaan takleef mey hote hey na vus insane ko pyar karne valonko vo patachal gatihey ki they r in trouble

N: acha do u want to say that u love me???


done with the chappy

as promised came on thursday

enjoy the part

and do tell ur views

waiting for ur responses

love

prathyusha

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
manan so cute
aryaman bitch
thanks for update
continue

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