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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: khadupam

Wow awesome superb amZing chapter
Fabulous chapter
Continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_kaur

Amazing
Saturday arrive soon
Can't wait to know the reason !!tysm
For the pm!!

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saturday will come soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: fireflies10

cant wait koi major twist aane wala hai update soon

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twist toh aane wali hey
thum decide karo na
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Manansamkhan

update soon ..

intresting ..

cont
stay blessed.

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Posted: 9 years ago
it will come tomorrow
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ashitha.kerala

awesome concept
iam read all parts in one go
superb
continue soon
excited for the next part

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i am glad that u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tiara115

Hey read ur story in one go .. its damn interesting

Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

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Posted: 9 years ago

saturday is here and update too enjoy friends

part 9 A

Finally with a superb time for manan, the 5 days completed fastly and the day for the recording has arrived and they have reached the studio. Nandini is pacing to and fro with tension

M: nandu kya hua?

N: manik I am very nervous kaise perform karenge and moreover my family is coming from London to visit me and this performance is today only

M: ismey tension ki kya baat hey??

N: manik mey meri parents ko receive karna chathahu but how can I now??

M: bus itnisi baat

N: haaa

M: vuski flight kab land hogi??

N: 2hrs from now

M: acha wait let me think...nandu mey abhi aatahu

Manik leaves from there and returns after 15 mins

M: problem solve

N: kya hua??

M: simple u will receive ur parents

N: par performance

M: haa vo abhi karenge and vo 1 hr mey katam hoga na

N: thank u manik

Nandini gets happy and side hugs him and leaves from there happily leaving behind a smiling manik.

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Navya is moving to and fro from one place to another. Cabir sees her and comes there and take her to the room near by

C: mollu kya hua??

Na: cabir vusne aaj tak kuch nahi kiya...lekin vo aaj kuch na kuch zaroor karenge and ur parents are also coming so I am very afraid ki who thumari family ko kuch nahi kare

C: dekho navya (cupped her face) kuch nahi hua aur rahi baat meri family kit oh I have already made them safe and guards are there to protect them

Na: aur thum aur nandini ko

C: hum dono thumari samne hu na and humko kuch nahi hoga

Na: sorry cabir meri vajese thumko aur thumari family ko kitna serna padrahihey

C: ek aur baat kaha na toh mey thumse baat nahi karunga thumari saath rehene keliye mey kuch bhi karunga

Na: cabir vo toh thum zaroor karungi aur rahi baat mujhse naa karne ka toh thum vo nahi kar pavungi so don't think of it

Cabir smiled and pulled her for a hug. This all was seen for nandini who just smiled seeing them.

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All are ready to rock the studio and settled down with their respective instruments. They all started to perform.

Mann yeh saahib ji
Jaane hai sab ji
Phir bhi banaye bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji
Dekhe hain sab ji
Phir bhi na samjhe ishaare
Mann yeh saahib ji haan karta bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji na samjhe ishaare
( nandini sang looking towards manik and he smiled looking towards her)

Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere, bhaayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere, laage re Saibo
( manik took the lead now and started to sing with his eyes closed and imagining nandini in his thoughts and singing for her )

Surkhhiyaan hain hawaaon mein
( manik asked looking towards nandini )

Do dilon ke milne ki
( nandini answered all the while smiling )

Ho.. arziyaan hain nazaaron mein
( manik sang the line looking towards others and finally kept his gaze constant on nandini )

Lamha yeh tham jaane ki
O kaisi huzoori ji yeh lab dikhlaaye
Chuppi laga ke bhi ghazab hai yeh dhaaye
(nandini sang while looking towards manik and shifted her gaze towards when manik saw her)

Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere, bhaayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere, laage re Saibo
Saibo...

(manik sang and closed his eyes and feeling the lyrics)

Saibo...
(nandini sang and improvised the song)

Dheere Dheere... Dheere Dheere...

(mukti and alya and navya gave the female corus while cabir druv and abhi gavr the male corus)

All finished their recording and settled to listen to the song they sung. They listened to the song and left from the studio and were standing in the parking lot.

Mu: guys I am sure this song is going to be a superb hit

M: haa guys even I am sure

A: guys we all do magic when ever we perform together

Ab: haa guys really mujhe bahot maja aya

D: mujhe bhi

M: haa nandini thum ab jasakti hu thumari parents ko receive karne keliye

N: haa mey bhool gaya...i think I should leave now byeee

Nandini left from there and sent a message to cabir

N: bhai r u not coming

C: no ladoo I have work I will meet them in the house

N: kkk take care of navya

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Nandini reached the airport and is waiting for their parents. Someone put hand on her shoulder. She turned back and hugged the person immediately

N: mom thum aagaya

Shilpa (nandini mom): haa beta mey aagayi

N: papa kaha hey??

Viren (nandini dad): I am here papa ki jaan

Nandini hugged her father.

N: badi maa and badi papa kaha hey??

Nazriya(cabir mom): hum yeha hey mari pari

Nandini hugged both of them

Vishal(cabir dad): where is that idiot ??

N: bhai kuch kaam tha isiliye nahi aya voh ghar phar milenge thumko

Vishal: acha thum toh aya na vahi thek hey mujhe...mey vusse nahi milungi kyu ki meri pari meri paas hey

N: nahi badi papa even bhai aana chathatha but vusko navya ki related koyi kaam aya tha

Vishal: mey bhool Gaya ab bahu bhi agaya na...haa vaise jab mila rahi hu meri bahu se mujhe

N: tomorrow badi papa

Vishal: theek hey chalo ghar chalthahey

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Manik and mukti reached home

Mu: bhai are all preparations done??

M: haa mukti all done just waiting till tonight

Mu: superb bhai even I am also waiting

M: thum kyu??

Mu: thumari line clear ho toh meri kulegi na

M: acha thumne ladka dekh liya

Mu: nahi but deklungi

M: acha theek hey

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All the family reached home and nandini is having a good time with them. Cabir is missing in the house till now

Viren: nandu beta cabir ko phone lagav

N: haa papa karungi

She dialed cabir number and he is not answering the call. Nandini tried for nearly 5 times and cabir is not picking the phone. Finally after some good time call was answered. Nandini without listening started to yell

N: wht is this bhai y r u not picking the phone and where are u???

Voice: the person is admitted in the city hospital come fast

N: wht?? Kaun ho thum??

Voice: mey highway pe jarahatha and mene iss insan ko vaha dekha and hospital lekar aya

N: thank u we are reaching there ASAP

She cuts the call and turned to tell her parents

N: maa bhai ko accident hogaya and he is in hospital hume jhana hoga

She said in between her sobs and immediately messasaged everyone about the accident and asked them to reach there immediately. She too left with their parents to the hospital.


who did this accident

want to know

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friends my exams have started today

and will be there up to 14 of this month

i dont know when i will update

again

i will be active on forums or not i only dont know

need ur wishes for the exam

and i will definitely try to post if i am free in between

i hope u guys will understand

love

prathyusha

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update but who did this accident hope cabir is fine nandu n cabir ka sach same aa jayega that they r brother n sister waiting for part b pls update today itself if possible n all the best for exam

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