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Posted: 9 years ago
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Friends my laptop is under repair i will get it back tomorrow
so i will update the story on sunday with a longer one
i hope u guys will understand
i am really sorry for the delay
will definitely fullfill my promise this time
Plz show ur love towards me
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prathyusha
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Posted: 9 years ago
no problem dear will wait
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome story! I'm in love with ur story! plzz add cavya romantic scencrs too!
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Originally posted by: fireflies10

no problem dear will wait

thank u for understanding 😊
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Originally posted by: UggliBuggli

awesome story! I'm in love with ur story! plzz add cavya romantic scencrs too!

thanks a lot
ur wish will be fulfilled
i have already wrote them
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finally got a banner for my story



PART 8 (B)

It was evening and all called off for their practice. All retired to their rooms and decided to meet at the bonfire arranged in the garden, after having their dinner.

All settled down around the bonfire in the order manik, mukti, alya and druv. To manik opposite is nandini, abhi, cabir and navya. They started to talk

Mu: guys let's play a game

M: nice idea

A: but wht to play

C: hmm...lets play sath ki punch

All: WHAT

C: arey its simple we will target one and all the remaining will ask them questions or ask them to do anything. They have to do without any opposing.

Mu: sounds interesting I am in

M: arey thumari brain kaam karne lagahey

C: very funny...so lets start

All agreed for the game and started to fix the target, with lots of fighting.

N: guys what are u fighting for this small thing...do one thing start with me first

All instantly agreed as it was their plan to fight and make nandini agree to start the game with her

C: so nandu let me start my question is...one thing that u belive a lot??

N: ayiappa

A: kk its my turn and my question is...u r obsessed with?

N: fireflies

D: how did u always manage to smile??

N: from my mom and family

She said this line looking towards cabir who was smiling looking towards her with his brotherly love filled eyes.

Ab: my turn...thing that ur afraid of???

N: rats

All busted into laughter listening her answer.

N: arey kya hua??

Ab: kuch nahi rats sey kaun darthahey??

N: mey abhi

Mu: nandu its so funny she said while smiling

A: really its so cute and funny

D: guys chodo na she is embarrassed that we got to know about it

A: Dhruv don't support her now plz lets have fun

M: guys its not funny

He said with anger filled eyes as he was pissed of the teasing session of nandu. All stopped smiling and looked towards nandini. Nandini brain came with a brilliant plan

N: abhi there is cockroach behind u

After listening to this both abhi and druv immediately got up from their places and started searching for it. When they heard all their friends laughing understood it is the prank of nandini. Abhi and druv sat down back with a sad pout.

N: guys cockroach sey kaun darthahey??

M: superb nandu u did a very good job

Saying he gave a hi-five to nandu

C: really nandu u made these thakkar brothers to close their mouths

Druv and abhi sat there with a cute sad pout to which all smiled

A: Dhruv u look so cute

She said pulling his cheeks and kissed on his cheeks and druv was blushing and all were seeing this face of druv with smiles on their faces.

Mu: acha hey sab chodo and now its time for my question is...haa nandu do u love anyone??

All became alert immediately after listening to this question to know the answer of nandini.

N: haa I love some one

Mu: who???

Manik face instantly became sad and looked down but nandu answer made him smile

N: my family she said the line looking at manik, cabir and navya.

Mu: smart move haaa...and bhai now its your turn

M: mey kya puchu...haa thum ek gaana gavogi sirf ek person keliye dedicate karogi and that person should be here only

N: wht?? Mey yeha Ghana aur upar se vuse dedicate karna no way

C: nandu I think u forget rules let me remind u, u should do anything without saying no

N: acha theek hey mey hey Ghana manik ko dedicate karungi kyu ki he has asked me to sing na

Manik heart jumped in joy after listening to her.

Nandini stood up and started to sing the song, with her eyes closed

Main jaan ye vaar doon

Har jeet bhi haar doon

Keemat ho koi tujhe beinteha pyaar doon

Saari hadein maine meri, ab maine tod di

Dekar mujhe pataa awaargi ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye

Haan nami ban gaye

Tum mere aasmaan

Meri zameen ban gaye

She finished the song and opened her eyes and found all her friends smiling at him. Manik cant able to control him immediately stood up and hugged her tightly. Nandini first was taken back but replied with same force.


M: really nandini I loved this

N: I know manik u would love this

Manik broke the hug and looked towards her and was again lost in her big eyes. Nandini kept her hand on his cheeks and was about to say something but manik kept his hand on her lips and nodded his head in a no. nandini smiled seeing him and manik again pulled her for a hug.

Edited by prathyushaeluri - 9 years ago
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part 8 (C)



Both were hugging each other slowly all the group joined them in the hug. After a good time they broke the hug and settled down to continue the game.

Mu: nandini thum vus Ghana bhai ko kyu dedicate karna chathahey??

Nandini started to blush because she cant say the real reason behind the song dedication.

N: woh...manik ne pucha na mujhe ghane ko isiliye mey vuskoyi dedicate kiya

Mukti nodded her head in dis-belief. All proceeded with the game and now finally it was manik turn to be targeted.

Manik was targeted

C: ab toh gaya thu meri haat mey...I know everything about u and one thing to ask then let me ask who is ur first love??

M: my mom

Mu: bhai tell me ur feeling about love??

M: mukku...love is not something that we can say its something that we will show when time comes and it cant be defined in words, infact there are no words which describe love correctly.

He said all these line seeing towards nandini. She immediately started to blush. All applauded for his answer

C: haa mera romeo itna batadiya na ab toh vo bhi boldo ki kaun thi vo ladki

M: thumari turn hogaya na ab chup chap baito

Na: acha my turn na I will ask the same question who is that girl??

M: navya thum nandu sey kuch nahi pucha and u r asking me??

Ma: haa vuski barimey mey sab kuch jantha hu isiliye

M: phar...

He was cut by navya who demanded for an answer

M: voh ladki hey... meri mukku

He said the answer so cleverly.

Ab: acha now its my turn and my question is what are the qualities u like in a girl??

M: mujhe smile karte and cute girls bahot pasand hey

All smiled listening to his answer. He just kept looking at nandini and nandini is also looking in to his eyes. They were brought to back by alya

A: ab mera turn hey...manik hum sab jhanthey hey about ur anger then how will you control ur anger??

M: (smiles) I will see a picture of my favorite person

A: who is it??

M: alya let me remind u also only one question

D: acha mey puch rahihu batav kiska picture hey ??

M: aagaya an ideal bf jab dekho alya ki baat manlethi hey

D: (blushes) who...chodo and tell me answer

M: its ...none other than our two groups combined selfie

All smiled more listening to his answer. Cabir being an all time cupid started his trant in nandini ear

C: ladoo voh hum sab ki nahi balki thumari photo dekhthahey

Nandini started to blush and cabir smiled seeing her reaction.

C: acha ab nandini ki bari hey...pucho nandini

N: let me think

C: thum IAS exam keliye prepare karrahi hey kya itna sochegi pucho

N: acha...thum mujhe Ghana ghaneko bola na now u should dance.

M: wht?? I am not gonna dance

C: manik baba u should do

M: fine

Nandini played the background music of the song and all stood up to proceed the dance. Druv with alya and mukti with abhi and cabir with navya and finally manan were ready to set the floor on fire

Maine haara, main tera saara main
Meetha meetha tu, haan khaara khaara main
Tera saara main, saara main

(manik sang looking into her eyes and forwarded his hand to her)

Maine haara, main tera saara main
Meetha meetha tu, haan khaara khaara main
Tera saara main, saara main

(nandini kept her hand in his and manik pulled her towards him with a jerk and she collided with his chest)

Sindoori rang suhagan saccha
Saccha re sarmaya jo paaya hai woh
Tu dil mein maahi aaya hai
Maine maahi paaya hai
Nazar laaye naa, koi nazar laaye naa

(nandini sang looking into his eyes)

Dil ne shagun manaaya hai
Ishq parauhna aaya hai
Nazar laaye na, koi nazar laaye na
Nazar laaye jo tumko jal jaaye woh
Chaand le jug begana ho
Nazar laaye na..
Nazar laaye na..

(to say that she means each and every word she kept hand on her heart and pointed it towards him which made manik smile)

Maine haara, main tera saara main
Meetha meetha tu, khaara khaara main
Tera saara main, saara main

(manik took the lead again and sang looking into her eyes and saying that he believes her)

Maine haara, main tera saara main
Meetha meetha tu, khaara khaara main
Tera saara main, saara main

(manik again repeated the lines and he turned nandini and took her in a back hug and she rested her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes)

Kaajal, teeka peeche kaanon ke
Nazaron ko roke re
Duniya deti laakhon hi dhokhe
Meethi si hoke re
Tamki main mirche varoon
Saari sharam utaarun
Maahi naa jug ko haarun
Kehta hai dil...

(nandini took a kajal from near her eyes and kept it behind ear of manik due to which manik smiled and she kept hand on his heart and sang the last line looking into his eyes full of love)

Kehta hai dil...

Maine haara, main tera saara main
Meetha meetha tu, khaara khaara main
Tera saara main, saara main..
.
(manik kept his hand on her hand which was on his heart and completed her lines and both were hugging each other like it was their last hug)

Both didn't want to break the hug but they broke the hug when they heard the sound of clapping from their friends. They broke the hug and turned towards their friends.

C: superb guys

Mu: yeah bahot maza agaya

A: yeah and now I want to sleep

D: yeah even I want to

M: I think they were right we should go to sleep and anyway we should practice tomorrow na

N: yeah he is right so lets leave now

All left from there after wishing good night but nandini was left there as she was cleaning the mess created by them.

M: need help??

Nandini turned and found manik standing there with arms crossed around his chest.

N: no need manik go and sleep

M: that means u will do all this alone

N: haa

M: no way when I am around I am not gonna allow u to do any work

Manik called servants and ordered them to clean the mess in the morning totally ignoring the protests of nandini. After ordering them he turned and found nandini with a cute angry pout. He smiled seeing her face

M: abb gussa ho??

N: yes

Manik immediately held his ears and said sorry in the most pleading and cutest way possible which made nandini to smile immediately.

N: mey thumse ghussa nahi reh sakthi hu

M: I know it u cant ignore my cute face

N: acha

She pulled his ears and manik dramatically shouted in pain. Nandini smiled and manik smile grew wider.

M: chalo lets sleep

N: haa kk lets go

M: gud nt and sweet dreams

N: gud nt

Both went to their respective rooms and slept thinking about each other.




i am really sorry

i am posting this much late

really pardon me this time

and bear this crap this time

next part has a big twist

keep commenting and liking

tell me how is it

love

prathyusha

Edited by prathyushaeluri - 9 years ago
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spent nearly 25 mins to upload photos
but they were not coming
i should try them again i think so
really sad for that 😭😭

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
thanks for the pm!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update..ha hasi bangaye song awesome selection..it's suits nandu...

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