Hi.. Dear im new here..and recently joint the parade of Manan ff On this forum..
And luck me to have come across your story..
i read real fast ..
Like an overview of it Coz i have exams going on.. But i wanted a break..
And since it was my break time at 12 so i started .. with ur story..
And Wow..
A very unique interpretation and portrayal of our dearest manan..
Your ff a heartbreaking emotional BUt A HEART TOUCHING tale..
Good job dear..
And im going to read ur story acha se after my exams..
Bohat khoobsurat concept..
And i so look forward to ur story line..
And eagerly waiting for a good news for our manan in ur story
As you know there have been talks that KYY is going to end by December and hopefully on a high note..
Toh how long will ur story continue ?
How many more chappys?
And i know u said that these updates r manan fillers.. coz after this the real deal and problem starts
The trials they'd face..
But i eagerly want to know ki kab Hogi MAnan Romance from both sides.. as in nandini reciprocating..
And AN IMPORTANT QUeESTION..
PLease please i ahve this question in mind..As in..
Nandini in your story is very innocent naive and kiddish,.. coz of her childlike brain state ...
And i dont exactly know what her past is... as that chap is yet to come in proper light
PAr the kisss in this CHapter was really beautiful..
The fighting and conquering emotions of manik and his soulful realisation
But then nandini is innocent and usse samjh nai aaya ki kya exactly hua..
But she liked the feeling of his lips on her lips unknowingly..
but She toh watches the fairy tale movies.. Prince and princess wali movies na..
toh usme last mei toh the prince and princess seal the movies end with a KISS na?
Toh usse toh woh toh samaj aati h na?
Toh WILL we get to see nandu relating her ghost as her prince and the kiss.. i want to see the realisation dawn on her,,
Toh can u tell me .. r u goin to show smthn like this..? No pressure if u have a different take to the story.. i wud love to see how u take it forward coz i honestly loved it till now but my humble request dear cud u clear my above query abt the kiss...Please pretty please
THank u dear for ur efforts..
Loved it totally looking forward to your story
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Maafi dil se