Hi,so for starters I love your story just like everyone else here does. Uh what more to say ,the way you have portrayed Manik and Nandini's relationship is so very pure and heart-touching ,it gives a very calming effect reading this story and the MaNan in your writing!😳😃
Not only MaNan but every single relationship has been written by you very convincingly👏
I liked CabIni bhai-behna bonding ,Nandu-ma bond ,ManBir bond as well as the revived Fab5 bond..😊
Liked how you introduced all the three characters via Nandini. I liked Jack ,Tiger and Max as well. Although I love the bond of Jack and Nandu😆 the way they are always fighting aww cuties
And obviously MaNan I am not describing coz words aren't enough to tell how beautifully you have woven their relationship in your writing ,be it their confession ,their first kiss ,their impromptu marriage or their misunderstandings ,their expressions of love everything is wonderful!😃❤️
Last but not the least I wanted to ask you something. Are you humorous ,emotional(a bit) and a lil short-tempered? Sorry if these adjectives bother you ,it's just some things I tried to figure out from your writing ,if I judged you wrong than my bad and sorry for the same.!
And about your note ,uh that you don't feel like writing well I would suggest that go back in time and shuffle your memories ,you would remember the time when you posted your first story in the forum and you got a first like or comment. Try and remind yourself of the smile that instantly came on your face and then you will get the strength or let's just say the fire in you to write again!😉
Again sorry if any of my nonsense bothered you but pm me if u can!!⭐️
P.S. I guess the note that you don't feel like writing was a little early in the past and maybe that point wasn't needed. By the way I am Aayushi ,Hi!
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