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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 16 A


Nandini's POV..


I was running..! It was some kind of desert..! Hot sand was burning my feet..! But still I was running..! The only thing in my mind was Manik..! I was screaming his name like a maniac...! Suddenly I saw him standing right in the middle of the desert..! He was smiling at me..! Finally I saw him I run towards him but it feels like the distance between us was not decreasing not even a little bit and suddenly he started sinking in the crumbled sand..! I screamed his name once again but he disappeared..!


"Maaannniikkk..!"I shouted


And I woke up...! Hell..! Bloody hell..! It was a dream..! I look at my side and saw Manik sleeping..! I was sweating like anything and was breathing heavily..! Last night was beautiful very very beautiful..! But that dream? What does that mean? I leaned closer to Manik and caressed his hair..! He was looking peaceful..! I kissed his forehead and he moved in sleep..!


"Thank you for last night..!"I whispered in his ear and sucked his earlobe.


"Your welcome..!"He whispered back and I gasped he was awake..!"You know what Nandini?"He again whispered snuggling his face in my hair.


"What?"I asked as my hands traveled in his hair..


"For the first time in my life I am so happy..! For the first time in my life I am feeling kay being in a relation is awesome..!"He said lovingly as his lips curved in a smile against my neck and I too smiled.


"I love you Manik..! I will die without you..!"I said possessively as that dream again roamed in my mind and my grip around his waist became tighter.


"Me too..! Main bhi mar jaoan ga..!"He whispered back emotionally and we both leaned forward for our much needed oxygen, our kiss of course..! We kissed until we became breathless..! He started biting my neck and shoulders..


"Maanniikk..!"I maoned or maybe whispered or maybe hissed yeah I hissed his name as he sucked one of the hickey from last night..


"Is it hurting? I mean was I very harsh and wild last night?"He asked looking at my neck and shoulders which were full of his hickeys and love bites..


"No it's not hurting and you were perfect last night don't think rubbish..!"I said slapping his forehead and he smiled..! "And I too wasn't less..!"I said blushingly as I touched the nail marks on his shoulders and back of course..


"Thank you for coming in my life..! Thank you for making me your owner..!"He said kissing my forehead I didn't answered but fused my lips with his again we kissed and kissed..! Madly..! Deeply..! Passionately..!


"I just wish that I will glued to you somehow..!"I said panting heavily and he laughingly started tickling me. "Manik bus please..!"I pleaded with lots of difficulty and finally he stopped.


"You are so cute Nandu..!"He said naughtily pulling my cheek and I again laughed..Then I rested my head on his chest and he held me close.."Why don't you sleep a little more you are tired..! And yeah why did you woke up so early?"He said all in one go and crap again that dream..! But if I will tell Manik he will become worried which I didn't wanted..


"Haan wo..! Pani..! Pyaas lagi the that's why I woke up..!"I lied and he nodded.. He look around the room and there was no water to drink in the room..! He picked up the receiver of the helping phone and asked for water..I was staring at the fish wall in front of us..! They all were swimming here and there carelessly suddenly a thought hit my mind and I gasped..


"Manik..!"I almost freaked out and Manik too became worried..

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Manik's POV..


"What happened Nandu??"I asked worriedly as her face was pale..


"Man-Manik..! These fish..!"She stammered..


"Haan? Kya hua fish ko?"I was confused..


"Manik..! Whole night these fish were here only..!"She said worriedly and sat straight holding the blanket close to her chest I too got up with her..


"Haan tou?"I asked raising my eyebrow..


"Tou Manik..! They saw us..!"She whispered as if telling me some kind of secret.


"Nandu..! Say it clearly..!"My confusion turned into anger and I said angrily.


"Manik..! They saw us whole night...!"She insisted on her words and now I get it..! What she was trying to say and I wanted to laugh as loud as I could how much nave she was..! But let's tease her a little it will be fun..


"Haaw?? What they saw us?"I too shouted and she nodded nervously. "Now what Nandu? What will we do now?"I said sadly and her expressions were priceless that was it a playful laugh escaped my mouth and her face was flushed. She shyly hugged me and started beating my chest to hide her embarrassment which made me laugh more and more. I wrapped my arms around her..


"Stop laughing na..!"She shouted..


"Ok ok..! But baby oh God..! They are just fish..! They can't tell anyone..! Moreover we didn't did anything wrong..! We are married you must remember the priest's words..! He had declared us husband and wife..! This necklace and vermillion are your "suhaag ki nishaniyaan"..! So forget about all this fish thingy and live the moment..!"I told her softly and she nodded her head innocently. Meanwhile the waiter came with water and gave her glass. She was drinking water and I switched on my cell phone to check if there was any call from my buddies..! As soon as I switched on the phone missed call and message notifications started popping on the screen all were from Dad I frowned and before I could register something Nandini leaned forward on my cell phone..


"Kon ap ko itny ziada messages kar raha hai?"She asked naughtily and I turned the phone away from her. She frowned on this and gave me a glare.."Kya chupa rahy hain?"She asked in a cold tone.


"Nothing bus aisy he..!"I said with a fake smile..


"Jhooot..! Mjy dekhna hai..!"She shouted and tried to snatch the cell phone from me..


"Nandini..! When I said it's nothing then it's nothing stop behaving like a stubborn kid..!"I shouted angrily in extreme frustration and she stopped where she was..!


"Sorry..!"She said in an extreme serious tone and I sighed..! Crap..! I didn't mean that Dad ki frustration myny Nandini pay nikaal di..!


"Baby I am sorry..!"I tried to apologize..


"It's ok Manik..!"She said without looking at me..! She wrapped the blanket around her and got up..I tried to stop her but in vain she gently freed her hand from me and walked towards the bathroom after taking her clothes from the cupboard of course which I had arranged for us..! I shouldn't have done this..! I shouldn't have..! A beautiful morning was spoiled because of Dad only..! I will not spare you so easily Dad not so easily..! I waited and waited for her to come out it was almost 30 minutes since she had been in the bathroom..! There was continuous sound of shower..! I got up and knocked the door..!


"Baby you ok?"I asked worriedly but no response..! I was about to knock again when the door clicked open and Nandini came out wearing jeans and crop top hair wrapped in towel..! "What took you so long?"I asked angrily but she didn't replied me walked away..! It annoyed me to the core and I grabbed her fist..! I pulled her towards me and she banged in my chest..! "Jab main tum say baat kar raha hoon tou you have to look at me..!"I yelled again..


"Will you please stop yelling?"She said sadly which was more than a sob and I noticed her eyes blood red as few tears trickled down her cheeks I should be ashamed of myself..! I immediately pulled her for a hug and she started sobbing.


"Have you cried in shower?"I asked as I broke the hug and cupped her face to which she nodded. I was diving in the pool of embarrassment. "I am so sorry..! Mjy chillana nahi chye tha..! I am really very sorry..! You know I love you haan?"I said lovingly and she nodded immediately. "Good..! Then please forgive me..!"I was so much in guilty.


"It's ok..! I love you too..!"She said wiping her tears and I pecked her forehead.


"This is for the last time I have ever yelled on you..! I promise I will not happen again..!"I said holding her hands and finally she smiled..


"I know and I trust you..!"She said sniffing her nose and pulled her cheeks.


"That's like my good baby..!"I said lovingly and she held my hand..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 16 B


"Ab ap ka gusa khatam ho gya tou tell me what was the secret you were hiding..!"She said raising her eyebrow and I sighed she was back on the point again..


"Stop asking na..!"I was annoyed..


"You know me na? I am very dheet tou I will keep asking you until you will tell me aur agr apny nay mjy danta na tou main phr ro doon ge..!"She said making an angry pout and I was awestruck once again..!


"You know tum kitne ziada cute ho?"I said lost in her cuteness..


"Chalo ji..! Buttering shuru hain? Don't you dare to change the topic..!"She said angrily.


"Aray it was nothing baby..! Wo it was message from Soha..!"I lied to divert her attention but alas..! I hit an axe myself on my foot because I saw Nandini's expressions becoming furious..


"Wo q message kar rahi hai ap ko?"She yelled..! "Phone dain mjy..! Main baat karti hoon us say..! Us ki itne himat bhi kaisy hue..! Ya phr ni..! Mumbai wapas chalain I will talk to her face to face..!"She shouted on top of her voice and I tried to gulp the lump in my throat..! My Jungli Billi was back..!


"Nandu aisa ni hai..!"I stammered..


"Aisa he hai..! Jayen fresh ho jayen..! Abhi Mumbai chaly gay hum..!"She again shouted and pushed me in the bathroom and before I could protest she shut the door on my face. I made a real bad face as I was now regretting koi aur bahana kar daita why did I said Soha..!


"I will kill her..!"I heard another shout and wanted to bang my head in the wall..I started taking the shower but I was clearly hearing the tapping of her foot..! After shower I realized I had nothing..! Na towel na clothes..! Ahaaa waahh..! An evil plan hit my mind and I winked naughtily...!


"Nandu..!"I shouted sadly as well as dramatically..!

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Nandini's POV..


How dare Soha to message Manik..! I will surely kill her..! But before I could do anything I heard Manik shouting for me..!


"Ji?"I asked as I walked towards the bathroom door..


"Jaan..! Mery clothes aur towel?"He said cutely peeping from the bathroom door and I remembered that I didn't gave him clothes..


"Ohh..! Aik minute main deti hoon..!"I said smilingly and he nodded naughtily. I got towel and clothes for him then I walked back..! I gave him the clothes and before I could register anything he pulled me inside the bathroom..


"Maanniikkk...!"I yelled angrily but he turned on the shower..


"What? You were gusa na? Tou just cooling you down..!"He said wrapping the towel around his waist and I wanted him to punch hard on his face...


"I was gussa on Soha..! But why are you drenching me?..! I hate you..!"I shouted as I was too irritated..


"Relax na baby..! Itna gusa karna achi baat nahi hai..!"He said winking at me and I frowned..


"Hatye..! Mjy bahar jana hai..!"I said angrily but he trapped me between the shower wall and him by placing his hands on wall..


"Itne bhi kya jaldi hai?"He said huskily bending near my ear and I already started losing it..


"Manik..!"I whispered as he pressed his body against me because my whisper was lost somewhere...


"I don't believe that you are still jealous?"Manik said looking at me and I came out of trance..! I pushed him away with my full force and walked out but how I can I forget that he was THE Manik Malhotra..! Within seconds he followed me after wearing his clothes I was totally drenched was too much annoyed..


"Tum nay answer nahi diya are you still jealous?..!"He said naughtily and don't know I became sad..I turned towards him he was smiling..! I held his hands..


"I am not jealous Manik..! I am possessive..! As you are the only man in this whole world who is mine..! Mery pass ap kya ilawa kya hai Manik? Kuch bhi tou ni..! My whole world revolves around you..! Ap ho tou sab hai..! Ap nahi tou kuch nahi..! Ap ko dekh kar main smile karti hoon..! Ap nahi ho gay tou main smile kesy karoon ge? Aik ap he tou ho jis pay haq jata sakti hoon main..! Cheekh cheekh kar dunya ko bta skti hoon kay haan..haaan ap mery ho..! SIRF MERY..! Ap mery ho na Manik?" I said all in one go and within seconds I was under him over the soft mattress of bed and we were kissing each other senseless..!

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Manik's POV..


Her confession was so much pure and adorable that I couldn't help but kiss her madly..! I bit her lower lip and she gasped that was enough opportunity for me to dominate her as my tongue slid inside her mouth..! She was shuddering badly as she was breathless..! I broke the kiss..! She arched her back and her throat was more exposed to me..! I started trailing the kisses all over her throat..!


"SIRF TUMHARA..!"I mumbled against her skin and she moaned loudly..


"Manik..!"She almost screamed with pleasure as I sucked the hickey on her neck side.. I came over her lips again and she was again lost in the magical kiss..! I was so much desperate once again..! I broke the kiss for a second and look in her eyes..! The wet top was stick with her body exposing the curves of her figure more clearly..! Then I again slammed our lips and tore her top..! As soon as I was done I tucked ourselves with the blanket..! I clasped her hands in my mine and I felt like her nails digging in my knuckles..! Her breathing was so much rage and she was shivering so badly due to intimacy that I instantly stopped..! Her eyes were shut so tightly and tears were trickling down her eyes..!


"Nandini..!"I whispered in disbelief she was crying? "Don't cry..! Just relax..! It's just me..! Please..!"I whispered again and gathered her in my arms..! She snuggled in my chest and wrapped her arms around my waist..!


"I love you..!"She whispered emotionally on my chest with a kiss and I smiled..


"I know baba..! And I love you too now don't cry na..!"I said patting her head and her lips curved into a smile against my chest..! Then I started all my naughty acts and she was back to normal..! I was snuggling in her neck when my phone again buzzed..!


"Manik..! Ap ka phone baj raha hai..!"She said tracing her fingers in my hair as I hide my face more in her hair..


"No..!"I said stubbornly..


"Manik..! Dekh lain na..! Maybe koi important call ho...!"She again said lovingly..


"Ni na..! It must be Dad again..!"I said in a flow and bite my tongue..Mjy ya ni bolna chye tha..! Shit.! Crap..!


"Dad?"She said in a horrified tone and I look at her..! Her eyes were widen with horror..


"Wo Nandu..!"I tried to calm her but she shook her head..

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Nandini's POV..


Manik's Dad..! He was Manik's culprit..! He tried to kill Manik..! What if he will try to do that again?


"What does he want?"I said very much horrified and Manik cupped my face..


"Nandu..! Kuch nahi ho ga..!"He said pecking my forehead and I hugged him tightly for not letting him go..


"You will not leave me na?"I whispered as I hide my face in his neck..


"Never meri jaan..!"He whispered kissing my neck but I was so much afraid..! Now my dream makes sense..! NO I WILL NOT LET YOU WIN THIS TIME MR.MALHOTRA..! I WILL FIGHT WITH YOU..!

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So here is the update I will not say sorry for late update as I had already told the reason..! Next I will update Sun Sathiyaa and will try to wrap up as much as I can..! And yeah a good news I have another OS in my mind will come up with it soon..! As the concept is quite gheesa peeta but I want to see MaNan in it..! What will happen when a oxford graduate will meet a gaoan ki goori..! :D well well..! I think I am lacking the interest in writing do something to cheer me up..! Aur mera dimag mat chaatna kay "please don't separate MaNan" it offends me..! I am hell annoyed with the silent readers...! Jab update na karoon tou dimaag chaat jaty ho haan? Aur jab update karoon tou gaib? MUFT KHOORAY..! Huhh..! Well I love you all still..!

Keep smiling..! Keep shining for your love ones..!

LOts Of LOve..

Mawara

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Posted: 10 years ago
Res...
Unress...

Wow u r back...
Update was mindblowing... fantastic... superb...
Nandini 's dream is scary... and morning romance was awesome...
Then fish thing hehe awesome... aww nandini is so cute... and manik tease her ..
superb dear... too good..
then soha wala part... manik's wrong move...
jealous nandini is treat to read...
bathroom part was amazing...
Nandini's confession was so pure... its was beautiful...
manan romance as always superb... beautiful...
Commendable work dear... its my fav ss... thank you very much for the update...seriously m kab se wait kr rahi thi... yes wait it worth...
Continue when u get time...
keep it up...
keep smiling...
Stay bless...
Lots of love...
Inaya

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
loved it so much
romantic
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally
Tysm 😊
It was superb
Romantic 😳
Update soon
Stay blessed
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update!😃
The fish part was really cute!
Hayye Bichara Manik kisi air ka naam Bol deta soha ka kyun bola!😆
Angry jealous Nandu was amazing!
Naughty Manik! He was just cooling her down!
What will dad do now?
Waiting for the suspense eagerly!
It's okay take your time and update when you are free!
Don't stress up
Loved the update!
Continue soon!
Prashi
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update. i believe in your writing.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
Cant wait to see Nandu and Manik's dad's face off.
Thanks for the update.
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
once again the MAWARA MAGIC is on...hrhehe dii missed u alot alot se bhi jada all the best for studies...n plz...apni story bs end mt krna...n update chotu tha but awesome...tha...app ke jitna lamba chap kisi ne nhi diya h abhi tak...thnkx...alot...
thnkx...
love ur story...
all the best...
cont soon as u get time...
apni baatein bs bnd mt krna...extra wali...
take care...
SHUBHI
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Posted: 10 years ago
Manik ka baap...mar kyo Ni jata...
Soha ke naam par nandu ka reaction was awesome..
The fish thing was so adorable...

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