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Knight99

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Posted: 9 years ago

#291

God!! Itna bada update

Loved it

Thanks for pm

Amazingly written

Waiting for more

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MahimaSankhla

@MahimaSankhla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#292

Wow... Such a long update.. Everytime i thought bas itna hi n to my surprise thr was more n more.. Thank u so mch.. It was b'ful.. M sensing twist n turns in d story after reading d text. Anyways i kn u'lll do ur best.. Waiting for the next update.. Tk ur time..

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sabi_anamika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#293

wow such a huge update...tq so much dear
awesome,beautiful,hot ,amazing update
u r awesome write keep it uo dear
waiting for next chapter
aage kya hoga
update soon
love ur story very very much
hehehe

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firefly09angel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#294

Wow...super awesome & big update...
Updare is romantic,cute & full of
Surprises...
Lovely update...
Continue soon... 😊

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Roshnisk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#295

Itna lambaa update suchi its a history...

Its true dat desperately wating for ur update ignoring sleep n waited but before u update unintentionally slept..

but sube sube itna acha update its awesome...

coming to update its amazing u left speechless..

each n every thing was so beautiful...

now to more characters added mukti n aliya on right time.

Day b day nandini's child behaviour increasing n trust me im loving it n d way always manik care about her wat to say about him😳

cabir's plan was mind blowing. I mean itna flimy

its full on flimy proposal...

he proposed her infront of all crowd.

Haha jack became driver too nice punishment for eating nandu's Chocolates😆

N cabir become watier a true bhai😃

d marine is so beautiful .

Today manan were so so romantic😳

now wat manik's dad problem😡 I know manan can handle anything...

so ur not going to update a whole week it means no wating for ur updates its ok...

For us next whole week is holidays now its going to be bore...

all d best for u newly started classes...

wating for next update when ever u can...

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chandani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#296

Beautiful n awesome update

👏

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#297

awesome update...

loved it so much...

that was an amazing date and proposal...

glad that there is no girl in manik's life...i was scared during the entry of alya and mukti...but relaxed after their cute comments about nandu...

the surprises where just amazing...the balloons...the notes...the dinner and music...and especially the aquarium...

just beautiful...manan finally became one...

scared about manik's dad's text...worried about manan separation...

please don't separate manan...they just got together...nandu is too fragile to handle any heart break...manik needs nandu to complete him...please no separation...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Tishyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#298

WOW ... Simply wow
He proposed ... And gal it was just out of the world
Loved each and every surprise u planned for Nandu
Wohoo take a bow now gal
Very beautifully written :)))
I'm not giving any attention to his dad's message hehe still in proposal world
Kudos to u gal

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Avneet kaur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#299

I luv uh...
I luv uh...
I luv uh. ...
this was soo soo good...
I m soo happy yaar...
this update was seriously heavenly awsmm...
Nandu's sketch. ...
Nandu n jack's fight ...
n alia n mukti's entry...
fab 5 talk...
Nandu's shopping... d dress... d earings... d heels... PERFECT...
n then jack d drver hahaha...
n then fab 5's performance. ... actually d song is my fav. Too
n then d baloons... dinner... cabir d waiter. ...
n then d fishes...
n manans room...
n lastly d consummation. ...
ohh god... Every thing was soo heavenly...
but last me jo dhamki mili h...
that will b a new twist...

keep writing
Continue soon
Avneet. ... (Avi )