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Suprabha

@shaanmaan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Wow itna lambaa update amazing
nandu all tym baby always get
bore b/w fab5 , but she is extraordinary
always amazed manik , n this time she made manik's
sketch it was so beautiful whaole fab5 was amazed with
her hidden skills
Than alia n mukti entry like a storm in the room
i like their entry n nandu geyt little scared with them
N mukti's bone crashing hug awsm
Their convo was amazing n our nandu again get bore n she slept
N alia is so caring
Nandu's bad dream
N manik's filmy proposal n cabira is all tym saviour
Wow girls shopping
Nandu's attire was very beautiful n too good
Fab5 song after reunion just for nandu
Every member of fab5 does something for manan date
It was truly a blissful date with each n everything
N most romantic date
Again end up with a little suspense

Update soon
Waiting eagerly

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#262

wow its an amazing one

and loved it

the suprise was superb and

its completely filmy

and as always cabir ideas were superb

and manan are magical

update was so lamba

and 1 week wait karna padega next update ke liye

try to come back fast

and give superb updates as usual

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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angel_emmi

@angel_emmi

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#263

ufff...long long long update..
superb dear...
it was amazing
filmy style proposal..Wwooowww

I just enjoyed it.

loved it

keep writing..
keep smiling;)
<3

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Waghalekar

@Waghalekar

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#264

It was just awesome aur ab yeh manik ka dad villan ban kaya I have a request actually can u show fab5 aur manan scene family scenes like going for a trip and all thodi teasing and masti

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Inaya

@Cute_Inaya

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Hello dear...

Update was superb... mind blowing...

Each scene u describe beautifully dear...

Proposal part so mesmerising...

Manan romance as always superb...

Pics was amazing...

Mukti aliya or nandini part was very nice...

Love this update..

Thank you soo much for such a very long update...

Keep it up...

Keep smiling.

Stay blessed ...

See u soon..

Lots if love ..

Inaya

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passionatepuja

@passionatepuja

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#266

👏 👏 super..duper..awesome..fab..amazing..fantastic nd full of love update...i just love it to the core...ok first of i loved the bonding between nandu nd muklya...i just loved the in each gift of nandu...nd i just love the line aap ke liye to jaan bhi hazir hai..aik bar mang ke to dekhe mayoos nahi hone denge..suprb line...i just love the tum ko paya hai ke jaise khoya hoon...finally he proposed her...nd like it you used this line"kisine mujse kaha ke mujhe ladki ke tarif bhi karni nahi aati" i must say ur so talented...nd one more line of manik "inside i wanted her to say yes"he he he he 😉 😉 ..then the way he assured her that he will be with her hamesha..nd not her dream it all real...thank u so much for this lovely update...ab tak ka this is one of my fav update on this forum...thank u so much for the pm..be happpy...with lottsss of love passionatepuja ❤️

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smartgirls

@smartgirls

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#267

...wow...simply wow...

I m simply out of word...all chapters were beautifully penned...

As u gave itna lamba wala update...so here are the comments Wink:

Chap 15 A...

Awesome start...the sketch was very pretty...and that tom n jerry fight of nandu n jack was really sweet...

N finally the entry of mukhtu-alya was a blast... no matter how cute nandu is but very easily she convinced mukti and saved tiger...n how sweetly mukhti-alya accepted nandini...

Chap 15B

How nicely they all planned a filmy proposal for nandini...and that scene was really cute when a sleepy nandini came n pushed jack and hugged manik as she had a bad dream...n that part where she was upset abt her parents was so sad...i had tears by reading it...n finally the surprize shopping plan was amazing...the way manil kept credit card in her purse and the note he kept was so sweet...

Chap 15C

I love the undertanding u hav potrayed between manan...like he chose a dress and nandini loved it...n he chose a shoe and ahe without giving it a try biught it as she was sure that manik can never be wrong when it comes to her...simpme yet beautiful...n that pink note in earings was so sweet and the reasons he gave for suggesting each gift was so so so beutifully potrayed...and i really loved the fact nandu denied for the haircut as manik dont want her to cut her hairs...

Chap 15D

Nandu is so naive and emmotional fool...how easily mukti fooled her...hahaha

And then again the surprise...oh my god bechara jack was made the driver...n then finally fab5 first performance after reunion...especially for nandu...n maniks grand proposal...beautiful...i loved the venue and its decoratio ..

Chap 15E

And the way manik asked nandu to get off her shoes...as he know it might be hurting her was amazing...n that crystal ball dance was so filmy...then that candle light dinner was mesmerizing...and our cute nandu and her cute antics . ..the way she clapped to call waiter and demanded for gol gappe as her dinner was so sweet...n those msg in 3 jars...n i love u written in six language waa amazing...

N bichara jack.. .frst driver n then musician...nice punishment for him...hahaha

Chap 15F

Those golwing ballons were beautiful...n the way nandu explain how happy she was and what she missed as a child was so sweet... how excited she was when she saw the ballons...that was sweet when manik asked her to stay awake as he is still left wiht another n surprize n that aqurium was so beautiful...n i was all aww when nandu git scared by the shark...

Chap 15G

Finally loved this part of yours...finally manan where two body and one soul...n the way nandini was unsure of it being a dream was outstanding...loved the manik made her believe that it was not a dream and rather their reality...

But nw m scared by the threat of manik's dad...i know u wont show seperation tracks but m sure he will create prob for manan and fab 5...i just hp they all stays together like they are nw...

Mawara u r an amazing writer...n i egerly wait for all ur updates...plz do continue writing...its a treat to read ur writings...n i egerly wait for ur updates...keep writing...god bless u and update soon

N thanks for the pm...and see as per promise i too gave lamba wala comment 😉

Sorry late comment but comment soch k karne me tym lag gaya 😉

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#268

Wow amazing mind blowing superb fantastic update dea. ...

Loved every bit of it

Muklya part ws sweet

Manan date ws superb

Fab5 dedicated theit frst song to nandu after their reunion ws lovely

I jst loved d song its one of my favourite song

Manan romance ws awesome

Beautifully written

Tnx fr super super long update

Continue soonnn

Tnx fr d pm

Take care

Stay blessed❤️

Keep smiling😊

Keep shining⭐️

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chandanagimsy

@chandanagimsy

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#269

Yaar this is awesome...I am a silent reader but u not updating for one week shook me...enjoy ur holidays n we will wait...but yaar... Nandu or fab 5 ko kuch nahi Hona chahiye

...aldready nandu bahut innocent hai plzz

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Angel

@asangel

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#270

Damm awsm.. desprtly waitng fr d prt... its soo long ...thnkuuu soo mch.. Bndng of fab4 & nandu is amzng... Nandu's cute antics are wrth seeing...Mixd emotns ..care..love..fun..nd worried too..pure lv of manan... Dnt mk dm suffr more yr... Mind blwng...lv dis updt...

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