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anjaliiiii84

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Posted: 9 years ago

#211

firstly a big thanks for this super duper update..n congrats for new thread..n about story kya likhu firstly manik ka sketch n then jack nandu fight about chocolate just amazing..n phir entry muklya just awsm boossooomm kya entry mara hai...then iss chapter ka my fav scene nandu neend mai aakar manik ko sab k samne hug karte hai this scene mesmerized me...phir aaya shopping just love it wow with note...phir kya filmy style me proposed kia..wow song dnr fish dance sabb speechless tha..n pictures my God mind blowing..n then specious night so caring manik ..n n how could I forgot about language aur do language sikh li...wo Crystal ball wow wow wow..n i also wish mawara ki mujhe v wo color balloons mile but abhi tak nahi mila...n last me kya nyo male version aa gaya aane do usse next prt me dekhenge abhi to mai sirf yeh chapter hi remind karungi...last not the least I m a FAN of urs mawara...thanks for those outstanding stories...

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Neha_shah_alam

@Neha_shah_alam

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Posted: 9 years ago

#212

such a awsm updt n 2 much lng updt nandu she is sealy kd 4 manik n manik suprs ws awsm n jack is realy funny behare ko tm ne drvr bana diya so bad hahaha bt luvly n manik n nandni fnly dey bcm 1 bt i'm rly scrd of manik dad he sound rly dangrus bt i totly faith on u n thank 4 such a luvly updt ma jaan

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janurachh

@janurachh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#213

itnaaa lambaaa update kaise karleti ho yar cant imagin ... and about the update it was really awesome you have managed to fit everything in it ...and i think maniks dad will create some problems from the text that manik recieved so really looking forward for next chapters ...and ur punishment for being away the entire week is that you have to update all your stories that too lambaaa wala

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Kashifakhan

@Kashifakhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#214

Taubaaa... innnaaa lambaaa...
hatts off to uh sis...srslyy...mjhse lmba cmmnt nhi likha jaata n uh update ittaa lambaa...baap re... 😉
update was soo much phaadooo...
proposal was soo much amazing..
hayeee...koi mere lye b esa krde...!!!
but koi ni...
but srslyyy...
i jst love dis nandini...she iss suchh awww baby...
n mukti tiger ki girlfriend...
like bf like gf...sahi tikaya tmne...
N Jack..hehe .bechaara driver../
" tjhe izzat raas nhi aati na nandu"
dis ws soo funny yrr...srsly m enjoying d character of Jack..
so kul milaakar aapko milte hn
10/10 for d update...taaliyaaa taaliyaaa...
Ona srs note thnx a ton fr sharing dese beautiful stories of yours wid us...
stay blessed
take care
-ur fan... 😃

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bhadwajiridi

@bhadwajiridi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Gosh such a fabulous update yr 👏

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Danny92

@Danny92

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Posted: 9 years ago

#216

Wow that was a super update just loved it

Mukti ,alya nd nandinis frndship part was so nice liked it they jelledup very well

Nd our cabirs ideas r never tobe underestimated that proposal nd the setting everything was just super

Jack is super nandu nd jack part is very nice first the chocolate part nd then driver wala scene nd then playing music fr thm

And the aquarium bed rum was super nd manik had fulfilled her dream of filmy proposal they r in so much love that is sooo gud to see

The night was so SPL nd nandu loved every bit of it and that made him happy

Nw wat is maniks dad upto am so worried yar but I know ur there na so no need to worry

Continue sooonnn

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hardik1991

@hardik1991

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Posted: 9 years ago

#217

Hllo...i m silent reader i had read many stories of manan but never try to comment
but ur every stories weather it is dheere dheere , sun saathiya or it's love u hve penned really beautiful tht no wrd to describe force me appriciate ur efforts u put in ur stories ..it's really feel magical to read ur story
Ur efforts of writing sooo long update biggest update of any stories of india forums the way u penned the every characters of all ur stories is really really remarkable nd out of the box..
very nice update 👏 👏
keep writing ..next update soon..
bless u

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qamarkhan87

@qamarkhan87

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Posted: 9 years ago

#218

Mindblowing update sab kuch tha almost ek film fun, romance surprise was 👏👏👏 and i lyked the most when she asked abt the food 😆😉 mukti alya part was gd and cute nok jhok of jack and nandu also superb and abt manan to they r just love 😳

And last mien his villan dad 😡 now wat hes upto

Tc and enjoy ur uni lyf...

Edited by qamarkhan87 - 9 years ago