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S.h.e.e.t.a.l

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Posted: 9 years ago

#201

First of all congratulations on new thread
thank you giving us such a long update
loved manik's surprise n the way he executed it so finally manan became one ! It was romantic!
wth his dad is upto now hope he will not creat problems for them
loved the update
good night

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nandinimanan

@nandinimanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#202

Omg!
Such a beautiful update!!
So goood!!
Jack being so grumpy was damn funny!!
MukLya part was so adorable :)
MaNan hot scene was wow!!
The whole description of the date was superb :D !!
Loved every bit of the story
Except the ending :3 huh Mr.Malhotra :3

And yeah it is definitely gonna be forum's longest update ever

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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#203

Firstly congrts for the new thread...

Thank god mere aankh nahi lagi... I was waiting for the updates...

Finally here it is...

I must say it was damn awesome..

The song main agar kahun... It was just wow... One of my fav song..

Proposal toh kaafi filmy niklaa...

Loved it...

So finally muklya are also here..

Omg jack being a drivrr,cabir being a waiter... It was damn interesting... Upar se manan romance.. It was like soney pe suhaaga..

At last manik dad entry... Pata nahi kya hoga...????

It was really the biggest chapter in the history of if... Hats off...

U nailed it...

Waiting for the nxt update...

Stay blessed..

Luv myrah..!!

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Nicky31

@Nicky31

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Posted: 9 years ago

#204

Awesome

Fabulous

Amazing

Mind blowing update dear

Loved it till core

MaNan moments n

Jack part was too good

Loved girls bonding

Hmmm Manik 's dad is on cards

SO what's next

Waiting egarly

Keep writing n stay blessed

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Alishakhna1998

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Posted: 9 years ago

#205

s000000 amazing
manik surprise was simply cute nd romantic

nd 0fc0urse jacks character is s000 funny

taunts and arguments between nandini nd jack 🤣

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anshika garg

@anshikagarg126

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Posted: 9 years ago

#206

Awesome di
I love u
Means seriously
Itna dhaasoo update
Uff just loved it
Take ur tym to update
As much u want
Thanks so much
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
:)
Love u
Take care
:) :)

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pinky

@kimnana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#207

beautiful surprises ...manik u r awesome ...u have planned everything for her

both r lost in each other pic r beautiful ...dad warning him

if they r together they can survive

ty for pm

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-angelchandni-

@-angelchandni-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#208

Hey I'm commenting on ur FF's for the first time but I'm cursing myself for not being able to comment on your previous update's but anyways trust me your work is so awesome that I can't even stop myself from reading your update's again n again believe me.

You know I again n again check whether you posted something or not.

Believe me you are an amazing writer dear seriously 👏

Now coming to the update it was so awesome mtlb manik love's nandu so much indeed they truly love each other to the core😳

Even fab4 done so much for their little sister nandu aww!!

I really liked how mukti and aliya's character was. The way they treated n behaved with nandu was indeed a treat to watch.

Loved cabir's acting n I'm a little scared as well as eager to know what manik's dad will do bcoz I know there will a twist coming up but still.

Now I'm finally ending my boring speech I guess here.

Plz continue soon...😊

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shonUle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#209

ARe itana lamba update awesome... seriously kaisi karti ho tum ? Ab manik k daddy villain.. ufff... confession is mind blowing... i never expected u give us this type confession seriously it is so beautiful... pata nahi me kitana wait kar rahi thi ab update karegi ab update karegi n u r here... Muhhh dear... n enjoy with family.. n do your study... n come with bang...