HUM HAI DEEWANE TERE DEEWANE (CHAP 30 ON PAGE NO.136)

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Afiiiieee

@Afiiiieee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Wowww awesome start dr...

Ur writings are superb dr...

I loved all the parts...

I had read it all in one go it was nice dr.

Maniks love and possessiveness was gud...

Waiting eagerly for the next update Dr..

Always stay blessed nd happy dr

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Hudah18

@Hudah18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Its awesome yaar and its very different to see possessive manik

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sakkhorsaha

@sakkhorsaha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

O MY GOD.

ITNA BIG UPDATE 👏

IT'S SO NICE. I LOVE IT

THANK YOU SO MUCH. FOR YOUR UPDATE MAIN AB TAK JAG RAHEHO. IN OUR COUNTRY IT'S 1:38 AM. NOW I'M SLEEPING PEACEFULLY.😃

ONCE AGAIN THANKS 😃

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Kuushi

@Kuushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Awesome update..the flashback answers the reason behind nandinis anger on manik...loved this possessive manik..his intense gaze his love for her and your choice of the song is apt for the situation..waiting eagerly for the next chapter and also more of possessive manik and manan with friends..please continue soon :)

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dhillon90

@dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Awesome
Amazing
Superb update
Toh manik nandu se phle manik dhawan bnkr mila tha...simpl jean shirt pehni specs lgaayi thi hahahaha...manik bht possessive hai nandu ko lekr...flashback was awesome...beautifull song n my fav too...lovd it...continue soon

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A12609z

@A12609z

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Wooowww Beautiful
Superrrbbb...
I luved it veryyy veryyy
veryyy
veryyy
veryyy Much...
Plzzz
plzzz
UPDATE
Next Part
with Lots of MANAN SCENES...
Plzzz
Plzzz
Plzzz
Add
MORE
MORE
MORE n MORE MANAN SCENES...
PLZZZ
Plzzz
UPDATE SOOON...
Update Long wala with Lots of MANAN

Edited by A12609z - 9 years ago

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cute03sweety

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

It was dam hot and awesome
update yaar
waiting for the next part
plzzz jaldi se update karo na...
plzzz

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srija-n

@srija-n

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

wow .. fast dr ..!! 😊
yes long update .. and thank for that ..
amazing update ..
wow .. to ea hai baat .. 😲
manik lied ... hm ..
beautiful and hot update ...
ist meeting .. beautiful ..
and dance hot ..
update soon plz ...