#THREAD 1 Humsafar.. Editing started... note on pg 144

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shoana

@shoana

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#961

awesome
superr update👏
i told you na you would have some better options for manik's punishment😉
nandini put tape on his mouth😆🤣
only nandini can do like this😆
she is very much hurted by manik's behaviour😔
and manik's friends giving him reality check was much needed😉
manik standing in rain to cajole his lady love
nandini in tigress mode😆
manik will have hard time in pacifying her..go ahead mr.malhotra your death is waiting for you😆
bappa giving suggestions to manik😎
manik will singing roop tera mastana...then she will definately throw him out of the house🤣
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hope he get more better ideas to manofy her🤔

thank you so much for the pm
will be waiting for next update

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shoana

@shoana

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#962

and about response😔
don't get disheartened
it happens dear
please give it sometime you willl get response more than you expected
because you deserve it
please continue writing for us..we are soo much attached to the story
if you are not getting ideas you can take your own time
we will wait😊
but please don't end this

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Sanskruti

@Sanskruti164

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#963

Finally unres
check pg 129
ya plz update nxt chapter on new thread plz

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Sonalmanan

@Sonalmanan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#964

Awesome!! Mr.idiot malhotra trying all tricks to manofy her... Hope now this one works...all the best manik... Thanks for the pm... Pls continue soon... Waiting for the next part... 😊 😊

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nandininiti

@nandininiti

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#965

omg what a update
loved it
nandu put tape on manik mouth
bappa giving idea to manik to manofy nandu through heart...
such a sweetheart he is but at the same time impulsive too
update soon
waiting for part b

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saithanmayee

@saithanmayee

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#966

such a beautiful and emotional update😃

loved it a lot

I know manik did a mistake by acting impulsive and hurting nandini but he was afraid to lose her again so it justifies somewhat what he did was correct

loved the BAPPA sequence just cant stop laughing while reading that sequence😆

its so funny how nandini put a tape on manik's mouth poor manik 🤣

nandini and her ways of showing her anger are unique

loved the way how you penned it down

you have completely justified nandini's character

how much scared manik was on seeing nandini's anger

eagerly waiting to know how will manik please nandini

continue soon

and thanks for the pm 😊

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#967

amazing...
beautifully penned...
nandu put tape on manik mouth...😆
egarly waiting...
how manik will manofy Nandu...
.opps...Tigress Nandu...
thanx for PM😊
thank you so much for the wonderful update...
stay blessed n take care.

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sabi_anamika

@sabi_anamika

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#968

amazing update

manik n nandu boh are soo cute

waiting

continue soon

srry for late reply

thanku for pm

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samanf

@samanf

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#969

Hey dear...I kno I m not a very regular reader...but still whenever I get tym...I read ur updates...it really pumps up my mood...though I failed 2 comment sumtym.. But its my mistake completely...plzz don't feel lyk dat...

Ur dis story is beyond good...or I shud say its EXCELLENT..

It's a very very different story...completely new one...

It's going lyk a film...I so very loved da way uh portrayin da character of Nandini and MANIK...

I m actually a fan of ur writing... Loved da way of uh Penn down each n every emotion... Sumtyms I could relate myself to it..

After coming so ahead...n actually blossoming as a great writer so far..uh want to quit..???.. Lyk really... I don't kno wat is going on in ur mind...wat r uh thinking... Just want to say..dere is sum1 around dis small world who wait for ur update...

And ur one update brings a million dollar smile on her face...and ofcourse ease da stress of dere daily troublesome lyf...

Dats all I have to say...still I request donot end it...uh are a great writer..