#THREAD 1 Humsafar.. Editing started... note on pg 144 - Page 76

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: eetu

Hi,
congrats you completed 100 page..
you described manik's emotional state so well... Cabir is cabir... No one can replaces him.. He always enlighten every atmosphere by his own pjs... Please tell me how can i praise you? Your poem was so amazing. I can't find any suitable word for praise it... Manik placed his head in her lap. That part was full of sweetness.. & manan conversion was too cute.. Manik told her every thing.. Last of all he realised he was being stupid by his own action.
Update next part soon..


Hi,

Thank you so much for the wishes and it has been only possible with the support and motivation i have received...😊 Congratualtions to all of us...

I feel relieved that you found Manik's emotional state described well as i really wanted to communicate his happiness...Cabir is irreplacable 😆

Now, you don't have to praise me ok, i feel i am not worth it...

It makes me happy and flash my 32 teeth on the fact that you liked the poem...😊

Good to know you liked the Manik and Nansini's conversation ...And, yes finally his stupidity on being jealous of Aryan made him a look like a fool in his own eyes now 😆

Would surely update the next part soon.

Thanks a lot for being there and supporting me.

Take care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
finaallly am back...ab aram se comment kar payungi...i was badly stucked these days finally am free now...how are u ???? i missed u yaar

update was super-duper hit...i really loved the indirect confession...it was totally hatke...i just love it love it...hay i love this nandu yaar totally different...manik toh cleaned bold ho gaya nandu ki ada se hay !!!!!! loved the convo of fab-5 among themselves...manik's friends are just awesome super supportive...manik cried in happiness so sweet...beautifully portraited sweetheart...cabir kisiko nahi chorta tease karne mein...aliya is a sweetheart...she is helping manik to sneak in nandu's house with help of navya ...awww manik is so cute...the diary part was just awesome...the poem was super mesmerizing...beautifully penned...then manik completing the poem awww so sweet...manan moments were just awesome...awww new journey with new memories ,new diary,new start...nandu made manik's favourite food so cute...manik knows nandu ki hath ka taste...manan romance were outstanding superb...awww manik sleeping in nandu's lap so cute...manan's convo so sweet...manik pouring his heart out before nandu so cuteee...awww jallu manik is a treat to watch...hahahah manik ko jor ka jhatka laga aditi ke bare mein janke...hahahahahahahah awesome update

sorry for being so so late...aj ke liye meri backwas comment tolerate karlo i even dont know what i have written...love u itnaaa saraaa...miss u,...thanks for the pm...tc...update soon...with lots of love and hugs
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read ur all chapies in a go dear its new concept nd i lyked it so i even told my friend nd they too have started reading it plz add me to buddy list nd pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DhruShti

Read ur all chapies in a go dear its new concept nd i lyked it so i even told my friend nd they too have started reading it plz add me to buddy list nd pm me


Hi,

I welcome you and thank you for sharing your views 😊...
I'm glad that you liked the concept and you took some time to read it...so, thanks for it😊
Thank you for sharing it with your friends..
I will surely send you PM and keep you posted.

Take care.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey ankita..
When is the update coming?? 😆
Waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ps_angel

di wen ru updating?????


Hi Lil Angel,

Good Morning 😊...problem is i had some guests yesterday and i will update today pakka 😊
How was your exam on saturday???

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ankitathanvi


Hi Lil Angel,

Good Morning 😊...problem is i had some guests yesterday and i will update today pakka 😊
How was your exam on saturday???


hey di

gud evening
😆😆😆

no prb

take ur tym
m waiitng
n di ppr ws gud
disaster mngt ofcrse
next is HR on tuesday
its kind of break in b/w exams fr us !!!😛😛

take ur tym di
do take rest too
m waiting :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi ankita
Yar sorry for commenting very late, my network has some issues so wasnt able to read it before. Now comr to the update
Yar how can u write so simply yet beautifully the story abt these two love birds.. Its so real, any one can connect to it.
Its superb
I luved cabir one liners
Navya helping nature
MaNan what xan i say abt them they are perfect. Luved it how manik understnds her feelings n how innocently yet cutely he spoke his heart out with nandini.
In short luved it
Waiting for next update
Thx alot for pm
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
take your own time dear...
take care of your hand
get well soon
thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ankitathanvi


Hi,

I am so happy that you liked their indirect acceptance of each other...😊 it really means a lot that you accepted how her nature, her behaviour is changing slowly and she is able to open up...😊 honestly, its a tough call when you need to write , its easier to enact...but writing it is difficult...so happy to know you liked the slow change in her...
there bond has been strong from day one remember...their 1st meeting itself made Manik open up in front of her when she was a stranger...so the bonds there, just that their relation status would change with time...😊...so Manik opening in front of her was quite natural.

And yes, he is finally happy that Aryan isn't interested in his Nandini 😆

I'm glad you liked the lines i had penned down...i really to work on my hindi vocab for sure...😆

Thanks again for the support...and ya, good luck for the last exam and then its party time on your BIRTHDAY😊🥳


Lots of Love...

Hey didi.
It was amazing! You don't have to work on your hindi vocab! It was your first attempt and your hard work paid off well. 😊
Yes, i can totally understand that it's difficult to write down everything to actually wanna see! Enacting is totally different from penning down a story. But the way you write it, we can actually imagine the exact scene happening so that's something really commendable! 👏
Thank you! I really had fun on my birthday!

Take care of yourself and get well soon. Much love! xox

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