Hi,
congrats you completed 100 page..
you described manik's emotional state so well... Cabir is cabir... No one can replaces him.. He always enlighten every atmosphere by his own pjs... Please tell me how can i praise you? Your poem was so amazing. I can't find any suitable word for praise it... Manik placed his head in her lap. That part was full of sweetness.. & manan conversion was too cute.. Manik told her every thing.. Last of all he realised he was being stupid by his own action.
Update next part soon..