#THREAD 1 Humsafar.. Editing started... note on pg 144

rajirock123

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awesome update dear and specially that line touched my heart and she turned and looked shyly at me and iam clean blowed that was just awesome and jelous manik haha cute thanks for pm pls update next part soon

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Lizbeth

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Yaar am luvin it !! Voh thoda sa romance. I lovd it. Aise likthe rehana. Manik z sooo cute

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megha94kumari

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Posted: 9 years ago

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m so happy for them... hope aage bhi SB acha hoga.. thankx for d pm

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Apoorva Rath

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Posted: 9 years ago

#684

Beautiful

loved it

Updt jaldii

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megha94kumari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#685

nyc update dear .. thankx for d pm

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meghchat

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hi... 😊

Wow beautiful update dear...👏 Manik and nandini are so happy... Manik feels like it's a dream that is actually true... Afterall his waiting for his nandini is finally over... Manik sharing his feelings with fab 5 is such an emotional part... 😳

Fab 5 friendship is just awesome...Without asking they understand eachother 's feelings and worries... 😊

Love the way of nandini writing her happiness... The lines are lovely and beautiful and the missing lines filled by manik was awesome... N the name N&M was apt and wonderful...

Manik sleep in nandini's lap, really its a satisfaction for manik... 👏😳

Manik telling nandini about his restlessness to meet nandini was amazing... How much he was missing her only after meeting her once... 😊

Manik finally relived after knowing about aditi... He is so possessive about nandini...😆

In short, I just love your update... Thank you for pm dear... Keep writing...😳👏

Continue soon... Waiting for next update... 😊

Take care dear...⭐️

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ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: dhillon90
Fabulous
Outstanding
Mindblowing
Amazinggg
Superbbb
Jhakasss update
hahahaha manik aryan se jealous
Lovd it
Thnx for pm me
Continue soon

Hi,

Ok firstly a big thank you 😊...to be honest i don't think my writing is worth the adjectives you have used 😆...but, still i am feeling extremely elated...

So, thanks a giving me a lovely start for the day...

Take care.

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ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

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