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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ps_angel


heyy di

m fine
srry naa bola kro
aap bde ho mjsa
n il always call u di
:) :) ;)

n thnku so mch fr ua wishes... :)
my finals r frm tuesday
god help me :P

loads of love <3


Hi,

Thank you for calling me Dii always 😊

Good luck for your exams...

Best wishes and lots of love to you...

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NOTE -

1. FOR PM please BUDDY ME...It becomes easier...Also, i hope the readers would keep on increasing and would surely share their views...

2. There are 2 songs in the link and i would request all the readers to hear it...Specially when it is mentioned that Manik would sing...And, also the next time...well for that you need to read till the end this time.


CHAPTER 18 (A)

HOTE HOTE HOTE HOTE PYAR HOTA HAI...


Introducing


Mr. Rishi Raichand: Mr. Raichand was an IAS officer and then with time he became one of the most important people in the central government. He was currently working in the Foreign Affairs Ministry as the Chief Head for the policies concerned with Europe and U.K .He was a man of principles and hence was respected a lot by everyone.

Inspite of being so powerful he never misused his position. A very calm and patient person. A perfect husband and a perfect father of Nandini and Rishbah. His family was his backbone and was very close to Nandini, his Princi' and she could never upset her father.


NANDINI'S POINT OF VIEW-

Dad was sitting on the table and I hugged him while he was reading his newspaper. He kept his paper down and smiled.

Dad- uth gayi meri Princi.. come sit and Navya beta you too...

We both sat and my mom got coffee for us along with bread toasts.

Navya- Nandini you still have bread toasts and coffee...kabhi toh apna routine badal le...


I took a bite of it "Kyun iss mein problem kya hai..." My mom smiled seeing us busy with our everyday 'tu-tu-main-main' ...My mom said something to dad through her eyes and I couldn't understand...

Mom - Nandu beta how did you find Aryaman???

I had completely forgot about him as from morning Manik kept me busy with his talks. "Mom voh..." Before I could complete our landline began to ring. My mom went and picked it up.


Mom- Hello Mrs.Khurana kaisi hai aap...aapne hummein pehle kyun nahi bataya...no I understand it's not your fault...No, we are not...Thank you.

My eyes were fixed on mom as to what happened and all bad thoughts came to my mind "did he say yes...no he can't...no..."

Dad- Seema what happened...kya kaha unhohne??

Mom- Rishiji, kaise ajeeb log hai, pehle itna insist kiya ki Nandini ko jaldi bulaye Mumbai se...and now they said ki Aryaman ki toh girlfriend hai in New York and usse hi shadi karega...(bit pissed off) Thank god humne Nandini ki shadi fix nahi ki, else how much pain our daughter would have gone through.


Dad - (calm as always) Seema relax, acha hi toh hai... Aryaman said what he feels, humari Princi is safe now. (Looked at me) You ok na beta... Princi we are very sorry beta...


I could sense the disappointment in their voice and was somewhere feeling guilty, maybe Aryaman lied because of me. "Dad please don't say sorry...and I am fine..." I kissed my dad's cheek and then my mom's. "Mom, vaise Rishabh kab aa raha hai Mumbai??? He's so bad... I am in India and he doesn't have time for me..."


Mom- he will reach the day you reach Mumbai...chill...

"Mom he better does...you know na in two weeks I need to head back to London... remember I am on a client project."

Mom- beta why don't you take a job in India now...I mean kab tak vaha rahegi akele. Come home sweetheart... (A bit sad).


"Mom, I can't leave my work like that na... (I sighed) ok fine, I'll think about it... but, still I have to go back once..."


I went upstairs with Navya to my room and told her I felt bad for what I did with Aryaman. Navya then narrated how FAB 5 and she had planned everything... We both were laughing on it. "I need to thank FAB 5 yaar..." We both took our shower and were now getting ready, as we had decided to go for some shopping.


Navya- Nandini, vaise do you like Manik?

I was shocked to hear that from her and bit my lower lip...and just smiled.

Navya- so should I take it as a yes hhmmm... God Nandu you are blushing... (excited) you make such a lovely pair Nandu...

She came and hugged me. "Navya but I don't know what he thinks about me."


Navya- chill Nandu... well from his behaviour, it really seems that he likes you a lot too...(we both smiled)...Aab chale shopping pe... And then we have to meet FAB 5 too (she kept the reason why Manik came to Delhi a secret... Manik and Aarav had asked her not to say it).


MANIK'S POINT OF VIEW-

I reached my hotel and went to my room... A constant smile was playing on my lips and was now geting ready when I heard a knock on my door... And yes how can Cabir let me be alone with Nandini's thoughts.


"I knew tu hi hoga..." I was getting ready, as I had to reach on time for my rehearsals with Soha.

Cabir- see you are my best buddy...you know me so well... (Grinned.. and I glared at him)...Acha vaise Manik, what's the scene between you and Nandini...I mean chal kya raha hai...


I stopped sipping my coffee and looked at Cabir and a smile spread on my lips...

Cabir-(surprised) You are blushing Manik...baat kya hai bro (excited)


"Cabir, yaar I had lost all hopes of her ever coming into my life...hamesha she stepped away...aur aab I can't tell how I feel... I think now everything will fall in place, I feel so positive about it... Cabir uska attitude, behaviour its changing for me, I know she is a bit shy types... but, I am happy she is getting comfortable around me." I then told him how she warned me about Soha and other details except her singing for me in the night...(that's private you see).


Cabir- Manik seriously (shocked)...this surely is a great progress you idiot... and you are telling me now... fool she likes you ...Manik I am so happy for you man... (Hugged me)


"Thanks yaar, thanks to you all... I need to speak to my parents, taki voh Nandini ke parents se..."


Cabir- Manik tu toh bada fast nikla... yaha Aryaman ka chapter close kiya aur khuda shuru not bad... vaise don't you think isse pehle you should make Nandini confess...


I was blushing and Cabir's mischievous brain made me think about her confessing what she feels and and an evil smile spread on my lips "It's gonna be fun Miss Nandini Raichand..."


I went for my rehearsals as the shoot was in evening shift 5p.m.-1:30a.m. I rehearsed with Soha for 3 hours and then I left for my vanity van and took a hot shower. My vanity driver said they would start for the location in 15 minutes. FAB 5 had by then reached and we all were in my vanity van as we drove to the location.


Dhruv- Vaise Manik Abhimanyu bhi aaya hai na Delhi for the shoot...

Mukti was blushing hearing his name and we teased her more... Cabir got a call from Navya and asked for our shoot location. Cabir winked at me...and I smiled back... "By the way guys do you know who is the choreographer of my song..."

Dhruv- kaun hai Bro... (Curious)

Well when I told them they were completely shocked...we finally reached the location... We were to shoot our first sequence outside LOTUS TEMPLE, SOUTH DELHI...




FAB 5 were chilling out and met the fans outside while I was getting ready for the shoot. The set up was ready and spot dada called me for my shot... We began with my close up shots with Soha first...

Choreographer - Ok Manik and Soha, we'll do first the close up shots...Ready..


We both nodded... and then we took a break for 20 minutes before the next shot. Next was our shot for the Mukhda of the song...


Choreographer - LIGHTS...ROLL... SOUND...CAMERA...AND ACTION...

[SONG- Yeh ladka haye aalah kaisa hai deewana

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jy46v8TfMZs

]


[Soha dances with the background dancers... and Manik just had to act...]

Yeh ladka haye aalah kaisa hai deewana
Kitna mushkil hai tauba isko samjhana
Ki dheere dheere dil bekarar hota hai
Hote hote hote pyar hota hai
Ha, Yeh ladka haye aalah kaisa hai deewana

Our first take itself was ok...

Choreographer -Great shot Manik and Soha...


The shoot was on full swing... now we were rehearsing with our assistant choreographer Vaibhavi for our next shot. Must say Soha was a true professional, she always behaved while working and it was a relief for me. Abhimanyu and me were chatting too in between... Cabir was suggesting a few minor changes in the retro track we had created and FAB 5 were thinking of changing it ASAP before post-production work started.


NANDINI'S POINT OF VIEW-

We were tired after the shopping session and then Navya said she wanted to visit Lotus Temple. "Navya but why Lotus Temple??" I was confused.

Navya- Nandu I have some work there... and It looks beautiful in evening...Please, now don't spoil my mood.


I finally gave up and we reached Lotus Temple, it really was looking beautiful..."Navya its stunning (I scanned the entire place and then spoke)... by the way don't you think it's too crowded than usual..." I was unaware of what was happening there... And, then I heard a girl speaking to her friend.


Girl- Ohhh my God... did you see him... yaar real life mein aur bhi kitna handsome lagta hai Manik... What eyes man and what sexy lips yaar... Kash ek baar I could kiss him... how lucky that Soha is, she getting kissed by Manik Malhotra... (Cribbed).


I was shocked to hear Manik's name and hearing that he and Soha were kissing; I was hell angry... without waiting for a minute I tried to get people out of my way... Navya kept calling me from behind.

Navya- Nandini listen to me... wait... Nandini...


But, I didn't wait and managed to reach a bit ahead but, still wasn't close enough to Manik and Soha and was still oblivious of what was happening around...


MANIK'S POINT OF VIEW-

Choreographer was explaining me and Soha the next shot where Soha had to confess her feelings to me in the song...Ya I know kind of weird...


Choreographer - ok, lets do one more time; the previous shot was a bit clumsy... Soha take a few steps... (She took few steps)...good...aab Manik ke close jao and hold his jacket and feel shy ok... (She rehearsed)...ya perfect...and Manik you just need to get some more intensity and passion... Ya just like that...Rehearse one more time and then take karte hai.


We both rehearsed the sequence again... I asked my make-up dada to fix my hair once again...

Choreographer - Ok guys...take lete hai...Manik and Soha ready???

"Yes..."

Choreographer - Ok 5,6,7,8...LIGHTS...ROLL... SOUND...CAMERA...AND ACTION...


[SONG- Yeh ladka haye aalah kaisa hai deewana

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jy46v8TfMZs

]

[Soha gets close to Manik and held his jacket...]

(Female voice):

Humne toh itna dekha, humne toh itna seeka
Dil ka sauda hota hai sauda zindagi ka...
Humne toh itna dekha, humne toh itna seekha
Dil ka sauda hota hai sauda zindagi ka...
Milte hi kaise koi hota hai deewana

[Soha shy's away from Manik and he pulls her back close to him...]


Kitna mushkil hai tauba isko samjhana...
Ki dheere dheere dil bekarar hota hai
Hote hote hote hote pyar hota hai...

[Manik kisses Soha on her cheek... and turns her towards him... and then they join their forehead.]


Choreographer -cut... (Frustratingly)

Manik and Soha were confused as they were doing it right... they looked at the choreographer as to what went wrong...

Choreographer - (looked at a girl) Ma'am aap frame mein hai...please thoda side ho jaiye...


Soha and I looked at the girl and I was completely shocked to see Nandini...I kept staring at her while she gave me an angry glare... then I read her expressions and instantly I couldn't stop myself and chuckled on seeing her...


NANDINI'S POINT OF VIEW-

I saw Manik pulling Soha towards him and then he kissed her on her cheek... I was irritated and angry with Manik... just then I heard someone calling on a mike...

Choreographer - Ma'am aap frame mein hai...please thoda side ho jaiye...

I was damm angry and then I turned to look at the person who called me and was shocked to see BOSCO there...

BOSCO (Choreographer) - Nandini...


Then my eyes went on the camera and the set-up around me and realised what a big fool I was... They were shooting here and I was feeling embarrassed about how I barged into middle of the shoot. I heard Manik laughing behind me and again my anger was on peak... I turned to look at him...

[

BAPPA was busy looking after the recent issues in UK and Europe... but he didn't forget his kids in India...he was keenly watching all this sipping his afternoon Green Tea...he then saw Nandini turning to look towards Manik and he immediately looked at his royally spoilt brat...


BAPPA- (chuckled) Manik beta don't stand like this, it's time for action... Varna tum gaate reh jaoge "KI HOTE HOTE HOTE HOTE PYAR HOTA HAI..."😆

]


MANIK'S POINT OF VIEW-

She turned to look at me and I knew I was gone...I said to myself "Manik beta kuch kar else she won't spare you (an idea struck me and I smirked)... Nandini aab aa hi gayi ho toh aise tumhe jane nahi de sakta..." She had a flustered look on her face... I smirked at her again and stepped towards her but she turned to go away...

I signalled Cabir to turn on the music again and he understood what I was about to do next...


[SONG- Yeh ladka haye aalah kaisa hai deewana...

LISTEN TO LAST PARA OF THE SONG...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jy46v8TfMZs

]


[Manik blocked Nandini's way... he didn't turn towards Nandini.]

Bholi ho tum kya jaano

Aab bhi mujhko pehchano

Sapna tumhara main hoon, mano yaa na mano

[Nandini was shocked to hear the lyrics...she tried to step away and Manik held her hand...He turned her towards him and lifted her face by her chin...]

Bholi ho tum kya jaano

Aab bhi mujhko pehchano

[He then held her by her waist and pulled her close... they both looked into each other's eyes with great intensity and passion]


Sapna tumhara main hoon, mano yaa na mano

[Manik jerked her away and in my famous attitude sang ahead...Nandini was a bit shocked...]

Dekho naadani se mujhe na thukrana

Nahi toh gati hi rahogi yeh tarana


[Manik winked at her...Nandini started to blush and turned away...' Manik held her hand and pulled her... she collided with his chest... and then came close to her earlobe and sang with love in his voice...Nandini's breath was stuck...]


Ki Dheere dheere dil bekarar hota hai

Hote hote hote hote pyar hota hai...


Nobody moved even an inch when the music stopped... It felt like Sachin had hit a six and the fielder was on the boundary...the crowd in anticipation whether it would be a six or not... Nandini didn't react and her silence was killing me... And then after almost a minute, yes that one-minute was the most difficult minute of my life...


[BACKGROUND SONG : TUJHKO JO PAAYA, TOH JEENA AAYA...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7IvRG3o7QLM

]


Finally Nandini turned towards me with her eyes down... My heart beat had stopped for that minute... and then I noticed her face and trying to read her expression...her eyes were still down and she had turned to the darkest shade of red; my mind registered finally from her expressions that she had realised what I wanted to say her...


I finally began to breathe and smiled seeing her like this... I just couldn't believe my eyes...I stepped close to her, as I didn't know how to express my emotions, my unbound happiness... she placed her palms on her face and then what she did next was a bit of a shock for me... She hugged me tight and buried her face in my chest... I was a bit surprised but then hugged her back with same passion and wanted to hold her like that till eternity... FAB 5, Abhimanyu, Bosco and Navya... every single member was screaming with happiness "wooo...yippi...yes you did it..."


After hearing them scream with happiness, the crowd started to applaud seeing us like that... and we broke our hug... we both were a bit embarrassed and then Nandini hugged me back to hide her face...and I held her again more tightly... FAB 5, Bosco, Abhimanyu and Navya came to us running... They were all happy... Nandini stepped away and then Navya hugged her and FAB 5 hugged me...


It was a great moment of my life, the girl I loved deeply and madly was finally in front of me and had hugged me... My wait for her was finally worth after seeing that happy, beautiful, nervous, shy and most importantly smiling Nandini... I always wanted to see the spark in her eyes that I saw today... She had somewhere accepted me and I could feel that today... My happiness, my peace and my life was in front of me...

TEARS started to flow from my eyes because of the biggest moment of my life I had just experienced- my happiness, my life MY NANDINI ...


My eyes were fixed on Nandini and her face said it all... her happiness and that glow on her face was something I can never forget in my life... It was for the second time I took my phone and captured her pic... I was extremely satisfied and at peace seeing that shy Nandini... with that glowing face, glowing with some new found happiness...jiska reason aaj mujhe pata tha...'


FAB 5 didn't leave hugging me and I looked at Nandini again...her eyes were still down, her face had a charm I had never seen in my life... it was different, she was different...her face had a smile which told me everything... FAB 5 left me and we all were looking at Nandini and she was smiling...she hugged Navya and then Bosco too hugged them both...

A moment I wanted to freeze in my eyes forever...

BAPPA was extremely happy seeing all this and was completely impressed by his royally spoilt brat Manik... He had truly blessed him with an exclusive style and a beautiful heart...


BAPPA- yeh hui na baat Manik beta... I am so proud of you son...

He then looked at his favourite child Nandini with tears in his eyes...


BAPPA- I am so happy for you Nandu, finally my daughter is happy...


BAPPA'S LEVEL 2 had finally got completed successfully... He knew he had to now start planning his LEVEL 3 for his kids...😎

Edited by ankita_t - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Suprbbb...jaldi post karo na pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow..
Awesome part .. Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow di
tat ws superb

mazaa aa gya

nandini z dad is soo powerful
i guess manik z gnna hv a tuff tym ahead :P


jealous nandu

always wrks

bosco ws d choreogrphr
nyc


nyc song

or end me

tat 1 minute silence moment

omg

evn i went silent

finlly level 2 accomplishd

heheh

so gear up fr level 3

updte soon :)

wese total kitne levels h di :P
Edited by ps_angel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome lovely
it was realliii amazing
cont sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
aww finally! eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
You nailed it!! It was a fun to know nandini s reactn!! Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome!! I m still blushing after reading it... 😳 😳 Finally manik confessed it ...uske baad nandu's reaction 😳 Cabir is so sweet n a true friend indeed... I think his teasing will never stop,on manan... 😆 😆 I liked nandini being jealous n possessive of manik... This part was very sweet n beautiful... I enjoyed every bit of it... Thanks for pm ... Pls continue soon... 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lizbeth

Suprbbb...jaldi post karo na pls


Thanks a lot... I will surely update soon...😊

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