Manan SS:key to my heart part 12 (who has kidnapped her?)pg 112 12/6

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reet0143

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Posted: 9 years ago

#671

are yaar itna late update ...but itna acha update de k tumne componsate kar diya...😃

loved the update...

i like the this past and present thing...

mano is so cute just like her dad...dono acting kar rahe the but bhool jate hai k vo nandu ke samne ye sab kar rahe jiske pas unke har act ka ans hota hai...

picnic ke naam mano kitni jaldi uth gayi and bechare manik ki pol bhi khol di...😆😆

ab dono baap beti ek saath brushi karenge and bath lenge to mess to create hoga hi...

and manik ki teasing...🤣

kiss..."i mean kiss ne kaha tha k ye order kero jab khaia nhi jaa rhaa??...hahhaha manik and his teasing...😆😆..loved it...

their little romance was a bliss...it was intense...

cabir ko to introduce karane ki jaroorat hi nahi hai.,...vo khud hi apni introduction de deta hai...

shy boy dhruv vo bolne laga,,,not bad...

loved it

update soon

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Sandhya098

@Sandhya098

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Posted: 9 years ago

#672

Hello there 😊I am a new reader of ur story... I just picked it up randomly by seeing the title I found it interesting... So I thought of reading it n i am reading it since morning n completed the 10chapters...I love ur story... Manik n nandani are cousins then they got married... Their fight to their love I love everything... N i love the way you portrait the past n present track in each update... Love maano... Nandani thought process to her past... Please tell me that her husband is manik please please please in the present track... Most favorite parts when manik tease nandu n the way he calls her wifey..every time he suppress the word wife 😆...

My favorite dialogue from 10th chapter

Wifey don't u think that the taste is soo yummy n when nandani look at him he said "uffoo I was talking about the taste hehehaha 😆😆n then he said "kiss "n then said means kiss ne kaha tha ye order karo hahaha 😆😆😆love the way manik takes care of nandani when she was sick awww so sweet of him... Waiting for the next part update soon eagerly waiting...

What should I do to get a pm... Please pm me the next part...

Lots of love

Samdhya098😊

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Myra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#673

Lovely

Continue soon

waiting eagerly

loads of love n greetings

Myra

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mamalovesbalto

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Posted: 9 years ago

#674

hi sweetheart i love reading this story you write very beautifully manan were so sweet i think having past and present in the story making the story more interesting and honestly you are narrating this story so nicely can't wait for next update take care and keep smiling

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satron

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Posted: 9 years ago

#675

I loved your ff sooo much.
One of my favorite ff now.
I read all the chapters in one go.
Waiting eagerly for the next update.

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samreen

@Manansamkhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#676

amazing update ..

cont soon ..
love it ...

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Prachi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#677

I have seen this ff and read all the chapters in one go...
The concept is really new and interesting.
Manik is awesome.
Totally enjoying it...hope u update soon...
Please pm me.